Bass aisey hi aap hame milgaye the ek deen
Aur aisey hi miltey rahana hardeen
Chahere par vahi smeet leeye hardam
Guuftaguu kartey rahana hardam
Main khuuda sey guuzaarish karuunga ki
Tuumhey tuumhari manzil miley
Magar manzil ko paaney ke liye tuum
Aagey badhatey rahana hardamm
Ab issey jyaada to main kuuchh kah nahi sakta
Magar chaahey jobhi sthiti ho
Apaney "swa" ko samhaaltey rahana hardamm
Agar tuumhaari yaadon main
Meri yaad na ho to
Hamari ek-aad kavita padhkar
Hamey yaad kartey rahana hardamm……..
……………………………………………….aameen
bedilo ki basti hai entija se nahi rob se kaam bane ga. REALLY GOOD ONE
Kya baat hai Aameenji …..yeh kavita sab kavitao sey hath kar hai ……Love is working as inspiration …
very nice aameen ji bt sach to ye hai ki hum apko bhula hi nhi sakte… nayi-nayi pyari si kavita k sath aap hmare beech rehna hardum… tkcr
nice expressions……
Magar chaahey jobhi sthiti ho
Apaney “swa” ko samhaaltey rahana hardamm
liked this line very much…….
bahut khoob aameenji kya kahe ke itne gahrai se ye sab dil me utar gaya aise he likte raho.
nice one………keep it up…..
yes aameen thats a nice one……………..thnx for sharing……..
Bahut khoob aameen ji….$
ek aadh kavita padh kar yaad karna…wah kya baat hai….lovely like always
aameen
Aameen
very beautiful poem…..the positive power of love beautifully expreesed!
Guuftaguu kartey rahana hardam……nice ….yunhi tum mujhse baat karte ho …..kya koi pyaar ka iraada hai …..hehehe
hmmm………………..vry nice………..Agar tuumhaari yaadon main
Meri yaad na ho to
Hamari ek-aad kavita padhkar
Hamey yaad kartey rahana hardamm………………….sochenge!!!!!!!!!!!
Aameenji……..bahut khoobsurat………too good………….mujhe na aapki aise simple waali kaviata bahut jyada pasand aati hai…..full of emotions
bahut khoob bhaijaan…
tumhye bhool jaye ye ho nai saktaa… to humsye yaadon ki guzarish na ker…. vo khili kali thi kisi aur k baag ki.. tu usye apnanye ki khwahish na ker…
tha seekha dhadkana dil ne tumhi se… fir sansye na tham jaye to aisi zumbish na padh…
bhut achcha likha hai aapnye….
again very nice …….a sensitive thing
wow gud one …..infact suits u…….it’’s a kind of “kataksh” on ppl who forget to respond on ur writing
apaka andaje bayaa……….. bahut khooooooooob.
waah good one…………keep it up
nice lines. keep it up.
yaa thats a nice one………Aameen……..keep on ……..very nice………
Dil ki aarman kho na jaai ……….yeaad ki jarurat nehi tu to meri dil me hi hai.
wao too gud very well expressed
what a gesture!!! pyar karna ek baat hoti hai par uss pyar k “swa” ko sambhaalna bahut badi baat hai aameenji!!!! it reflects yr inner soul!!!!
waah kya ada hai…….. baato hi baato me hum apne ho gaye…. ek duje k shubhchintak ho gaye…….. maargdarshak ho gaye……… waah har ada khub ubhar aayi hai………. aakhir me jo aap kehte hai……..saaf hai aapne ye to aap ki kavitaao ko chaahnewalo ko dhayn me rakh kahi hogi. hai na aameenji…? Wallah kitni aasani se aap har baat ko apni kavitaao me dhaal dete hai…… bahut khub……..
Nice wishes for the beloved,true n sincere ones.
Kya baat hai wah wah!
aameennnn ji
ek aad kavita padh ar hamari hamee yaad kar lena
dard aur pyaar ek sath kafi kam dekhne ko milte hai
aalaamm
khub sundar hai ye
tum vaise hi yad aate ho/…………….kavita to aati jati rahegi…tumahari yad hamesha rahegi
very sweet pix of film high school musical 3…encouragable poem ……as usual…..awesome…..if u dont mind ..wats the meaning of ‘’swa”……….