Bagiyaa ke phoolon ki suugandh ko
Bhramar bannkar chhuum lo ek baar
Meri yaadon ko apaney seeney sey
Lagaakar choom lo ek baar
Grishm may tapatey iss deh par
Baarish bannkar baras jaao ek baar
Sapt rangi indra-dhanusha ke ranggo sey
Jivan ki rangoli main rangg bhardo ek baar
Shabd sangeet ke, suur shahanayi ke lekar
Pranay geet suuna do ek baar
Tasveer bannkar mere taqdeer ki
Dil main bass jaao ek baar
Dil ruupi kadamb ki daal par
Koyal bannkar kuuhuuk jaao ek baar
Pranay-leen dil ki ek iltajaa
Preyasi bannkar puuri kar jaao ek baar.
ammen ji bahut badhiya
raj chouhan
AMEEN YAAR BAHUT HI ACHHA LIKHTE HO KASAM SE DIL KO CHOO JATA HAI…………………
AAPKA YAAR YAARO KA YAAR RAJ CHOUHAN
ek bar kya………bahut bar padne ka man kiya……
kya bhawanaye hai ….Aameenji …isko padh kar k ..fir sey purana comment repet karti hu ….think ur self as u r college going guy and u hv written these lines for ur gal ….i m damn sure woh aapko apna bf ban leti ..:-)))
waah waah……………. Aameenji dil chhu lene wali rachana……….. waah kya iltajaa hai……………. behad pyaarbhari……………
bahut achhe……………..aur bahut hi pyari si ada hai apni priya ko pyar ka nyota dene ka…………
wow very nice one…….aameen………..wish u best of luck……..carry on…….
bahut khoob………….aapki y composition behad khubsurat hai.
sirf ek baar nahi phir likhna aisa its too good
TASVEER BANATA HOOON, TASVEER NAHI BANATI,AAB DIL KE BAHAKENE KEE TATBEER NAHI BANATI
wow….realy beautiful composition….shabd sangeet ke, sur shahanayee ke leksar pranay geet sunado……..nice lines….
ek baar………achcha comparison hai!!! nature se khud ki feelings ka
aameen ji kya batae jante hai kise se apne pyar ka ahsas dilene ke liye is kavita ko log bar bar padenge nice very nice
vry vry sweet ammen ji……………bohat acha likha h…one personal ques..koi khas h kya apki life me jisse apko prana milti h…..itni achi poems ikhne me…………if u don”t mind…
bar bar padhne ki dil karta hai….
Aameen…………………Bahut hi khubsoorat abhivyakti hai ye kisi bhi komal hridaya ke premi ke liye………….Bahoot Khoob……aur Apko Roze ki badhai bhi dene chahunga……..*Deepak*
aameenji aapke bhavo mai bah gae itni gahrai mai le gai ye panktiya,very nice.
wow……………..the passion ia at its height……………..cool babes…………….
nice….. i liked most the lines “meri yaado ko….” thanks for sharing…keep posting
bahut sundar aameen ji………ek-ek pankti ras aur maadhurya se bhari……….””meri yaado ko seene se laga kar choom lo ek baar……………….bahut khubsurat…
good…………
Bagiyaa ke phoolon ki suugandh ko Bhramar bannkar chhuum lo ek baar Meri yaadon ko apaney seeney sey Lagaakar choom lo ek baar….ati sunder…..
***Pranay-leen dil ki ek iltajaa
Preyasi bannkar puuri kar jaao ek baar.***
wah..!!! kya khoob likhaa hai aapnye..:)
Bahut achha hai aameen ji,i really wnder aap itna achha kaise likh lete hai…$
sundorei je fular montro ohuraatri maate xewehe aaji imaan ful probhate probhate..!
aapki poem ki baat hin kuchh aur hoti hai bhai saab!
Ek baar nehi sha baar , sha baar nehi haajar baar ………. tere liya marti hu re year baar baar .
kya comment doo…..eetna sara mang liya ..hamare liye bhi kuchh rakhona….ham bahi kahe…kya kahe wah wah kya bat hai…..
AMEEN.
undoubtedly beautiful …….
tu ek baar jo pyaar se mujhko chu le to har zakhm bhar jayega…..bahut khoob…..
So so so so so so romantic words nd imagination…………gr8….i add my new post …..plz do comment there…………….
vry nice poetry….
bass ek baar……ehsaas dila jao…..simply outstanding!!!
sundar.. romantic & tender ..
beautiful………
nice creation as usual…thnx aameen ji
Good one!
Beautifull thoughts about love..
Wa!
bahut hii achchi abhivyakti aameen ji………….very nice….