Samay ki baheti dhaara ke sang
Hamney teri yaad ko sanjoye rakha hai
Deykar quurbaani prem ki
Tuumhari dosti ko zinda rakhaa hai
Agar chaahata to bheed jaata Khuuda sey bhi
Jo meri taqdeer ko harwaqt badalata rahata hai
Magar virah ke aansuu dil may samaakar
Mruugajal ki pyaas rakhi hai.
Duniya ke suukh-duukh ki nahi parvah muuzey
Mainey to tuumhari khuushi ki ahemiyat rakhi hai
Iss janm main to kya, janmo-janam taq
Tumharey dosti ke naam
Yeh prem ki jyot jalaaye rakhani hai.
nice one ………again
yaadon ke chiraagon ko jalaye huye rakhna…lamba hai safar ismein kahin raat to hogi…..beautiful aameenji
prem ki jyoti jalaaye rakhna …..wah aap hindi shabdo ka khoobsurat istemaal karte hain…
Wow behad hin umda poem!
wow…………
Wow………………..just marvelous……………..Aaina hun main nazar uthake to dekho,
Khud ko hi payoge nazar milake to dekho…..
Meri chahat mein kami kuch na thi, Jane kyon tu begana ho gaya, Tujhe lagta hai mai khush hoon, Mujhe haanse to zamana ho gaya.
khubsurat…….sab se sundar pankti”” tumhari dosti ke naam ye prem ki jiyoti jalaye rahi hai………sach dost ka hona jivan mein bahut aahmiyat rakhta hai…….aur dosti anmool hai…………beautifulllllllll.have a good day n tc. regards
people say its very difficult to again befriend and stay as a friend for a person whom u love……………….i differ on that………….and ur poem too………..good one
beful poem Aameen ji ..pic bhi bahu khubsurat …however completly match nahi kar rahi hai poem sey …but ok ..neways pls tell me meaning of Mruugajal…..uskey baad main issey fir sey ek baar padhungi ….
kya baat hai Ameen ji….bahut hi achhe se dil ki baatein likh dete ho……
wonderful lines indeed…..
TUUMHAREY LIYE prem ki jyoti jalaayeeeeeeeee ………………Abhi aap mujhko kardo sukhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
nice aameen
dedicated love…very nice aameen ji….thnx
good aameen ji samajh mai nahe aata ke pyar ke jyada ahmiyet hai ya dosti ke good keep it up
Iss janm main to kya, janmo-janam taq, Tumharey dosti ke naam , Yeh prem ki jyot jalaaye rakhani hai………wah bahut khoob likha hai…….
BAHUT KHOOB…
Hi!!! prem ki jyot jalake kisi apne ka intezar …….yeh to devdas ki paro yad dila gaya…………………very good poem…………
“mind blowing” bahut hi khubsurati se pesh kiya hai…
hey Aameen this one is also too good…………….best of luck………carry on………
is dosti ko yaado me nai haqiqat me zindaa rakhiye aameen ji………
pyaar ko dosti ka naam dena……. janam janam taq k liye dosti k naam apne pyaar ko dil me hi dabaye rakh qurbani dena……………oooooooo jigar chahiye……… Aameenji hats off to u………..
hai bada pyara hai likha aapne
janam janam….ki kahani prem ki , khuda bhi bhidane se darega ,,tumse…premi se khuda bhi pyar karta hai….
hmmm……………aesi commitment kya nibah sakte hai??………………………….but good expression of good intentions
Nice feelings.. dosti ki ahmiyat shayad pyaar se jyaada hai.
Agar chaahata to bheed jaata Khuuda sey bhi
Jo meri taqdeer ko harwaqt badalata rahata hai…………………gr8 lines……… endind is so touching heart…….awesome poetry
So true lines…lovely!
Hi,
Nice post dear……………bhot khub kaha aap ne
nice photo… Innocent teenage love..
woooooooooooow!!! heartfelt lines—– Iss janm main to kya, janmo-janam taq Tumharey dosti ke naam Yeh prem ki jyot jalaaye rakhani hai —- wonderful gesture for yr friend!!!
wow…………great……….again a very beautiful poetry………
Agar chaahata to bheed jaata Khuuda sey bhi…….Jo meri taqdeer ko harwaqt badalata rahata hai.just luved these lines………kuch aur lines yaad aa gayi aapki kavita padkar…….kya kahun duniya ne kiya mujhse kaisa vair…hukam tha main jiyon lekin tere bagair…nadaan hain wo kehte hain jo …mere liye tum ho gair….kitne sitam hum pe sanam …logon ne kiye….jalte rahe dil me mere chaht ke diye….tere liye…..