Tuum ho main huun, yeh maddmastt sama hai
Aur bhav-saagar zindagi ka paar karne ki
Yeh shuuruuat hai.
Mandd-mandd pavan ke zonko ke saath
Jawaani dhirey dhirey apaney uufaan par hai
Saanson main mahakey pyaar ki khuushboo
Prem ghuunt ke pineko yeh dil bekaraar hai
Aankhon sey chchalke pyaar ka nashaa
Yeh prem safar kitana khuushnuuma hai
Raat-din jo dekhe the sapaney milkar pyaar key
Saakaar voh aaj hue hai
Abtaq sapano main dekhata tha tuumhey
Aaj ham-tuum dono ek saath hai……
………………………………………….aameen
yes aameen …………beautifull………carry on…………
love fulfills everything………….grt poem…………
BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL………. VERY ROMANTIC ND CUTE EXPRESSIONS..!!!
good ……..very romantic…………..as usual U R superb………..
a beautiful poem on contentment in love…
wah…..inn sunder bhaavo ko padhte hue ek geet yaad aa gaya…..tera saath hai toh, fir kya kami hai……”…..wonderful expression…..
GOOD ONE
GOOD
aapka jawanb naai hai sirji
romance eis your forte
aaap toh aap hi ho sir ji …
romance main toh jawab nai aapka
its defenetly one of ur bst poems.
as always……… too romantic…………… Aameenji…………….. saath saath…….. waah…………… :))
its wonderful
ham sath sath hai…..dil se
nice poem
nice poem
hmmm………….Tum aa gaye ho noor aa gaya hai………just too gud…….
each & every words r soooooooooooo romantic………..
very nice poetry…….
good
aameen ji bus aap ise tarah likhto ho ke her sabd dil ke gahrai mai utar jata hai
amazing……apne jo ehsaas bayan kiye hain wo ek-ek ehsaas mehsoos karati hai apki yeh rachna….toching work indeed…thnx
jiska caps itna accha ho wo puri kitaab kaisi hogeeee undoubtly caps ki tareh haseen hogeeeeeeeeee hai na ?
Hi AAMEEN ! How r you ? well said dear ……………………
Keep writing —————————–dill ne kaha hain dill se——-
Awaz do do tum ——-Hum Saz denge—————-
Kasis hogi tumhari ——————Aagaz hum karenge—————
nice one man!
achi lagi………………apki ye poem but kahi kuch kami thi……..there’’s something missing……………kuch wrd me prb tha ya…some…lines me don”t know…………..but ehsas acha tha…………
achi lagi………………apki ye poem but kahi kuch kami thi……..there’’s something missing……………kuch wrd me prb tha ya…some…lines me don”t know…………..but ehsas acha tha…………
AAMEEN ur expression is to much but i said u before if u will use of urdu that would be more batter such as SARA is used
words have been used greatly….keep it up..
tum ho main hun…ye madmast sama hai…….too touchy……maang ke saath tumhar ,maine maag liya sansaar….
U have created a nice romanticism with your post.
hmmm……………………..Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe!!!!!!!!!!…………….tum Paas ho kar bhi paas nahin hote,par kyon door rehkar bhi door nahin jate………
really pyaar aankhon mein chhalak aata hai…….us ko chhupaya nahi ja sakta………””aankhon me chhalak aaya pyaar ka nasha ye prem safar kitna khushnuma hai””………soooooooo sweeeeeeeet aameen ji…….thna a lot aap ke khubsurat alfazon ka ………regards
janam janam ke liye…..
“”Abtaq sapano main dekhata tha tuumhey
Aaj ham-tuum dono ek saath hai……
“”nice poem saath saath………girl in the pic is beautiful……….$