Achaanak
Tab sachhayi ka ehsaas dilaata rahata hai
Aankhon main chchalakata voh pyaar
Voh muuskuuraahat . aur
Aur pheer ek din
Kab yeh dhadakta dil
Jisey aajtaq badey hi naazo sey paala tha
Na jaaney kaisey palbhar main tumhara ho
Kya dekha iin aankhon main
Kya thaa uss muuskuurahat main
Guum ho gayi duuniya
Duub
Asamanjas may huun main
Kabhi kabhi main yeh sochata huun
Ki tuum ek khwaab ho ya haqeeqat
Aagaman kya hua tuumhaara
Jindagi achaanak khuushnuuma ho gayi………….
……………………………………………….aameen
such a nice poem aameenji
wah aameen ji kya baat hai…….its great to read ur poetry after a very long time……..its a great pleasure indeed……..
what a soothing expression!!!!! khwaab aur haqeeqat mei jab asamanjas ho jaaye toh samaj lena chaahiye maamla kafi sanjida hai!!!! (LOL)……
Sachmuch kitni sundar rachna hai.
bahut hi sundar aameenji…….””aagmann kya hua tumhara jindgi achanak khushnuma ho gai..””bahut sundar
kitne saral shabdon me milan ke un sunhere palon ka varnan aapne kar diya……aisa laga jaise puri zindagi kavita me utar gayi……
bahut aacha aap aise he dil ke gahrai se likhte raho
wow………………..ur way of expressing love is just superb………….mind blowing……………….I think U love the way love loves U………………hmmmm
it is very very nicely expressed….
good lines again ameen
woooooow Aameenji…………. ye madhur asamanjas…………. ek khwaab ya haqeeqat……… Jo bhi hai hamm to kahenge……… (in gujarati) “Mrugjal bhale ho tu… aa pyaas tane aabhari chhe… Swapno thi main raat ne sajavi chhe… Aa kalam ne prem-ras ma jaboli chhe… khwaab chho k haqeeqat……. na janu hu……. janu to bas ae janu… jivan ma navi aas jaagi chhe.”…………
bahut hi sunder………sach main yeh milan ki anubhuti hai ya aabhas…………nice and lovely confusion……………..
KHAWAB HO YA KOEE HAKIKAT,YE TAU ZARA BATLAU,
DOOOR KHARHI HO BAHUT DAER SE ZARA KARIB AUO
nice sir…………kuch yaade ese hote hai…lagataa hai shaayad ”Kwaab hai”…gre8
wah kya baat hai, aapke dil ka haal aap jaisa dil hi samajh sakta hai. bahut khoob.
Wow aameen ji,see sara ji also felt the same…$
khwab ho tum ya koi haqeekat……kaun ho tum batao…. jis mushkurahat me main dub gaya…aur dekha sari duniya hi hai dubi huee…pyar me …nice
just like a old song……khawab ho ya koi haqiqat kaun ho tum batlaao,der se itni door khadi ho aur kareeb aa jaao………….i m speechless
nice one
beautiful creation
beautiful expression and description of MILAN
WAH WAH AMEENJI………. KYA BAAT H…….KISKA AGAMAN HUA HAME BI BATAIYE…………….