in my mind I still see,
you sitting in the bus, looking for some company.
I alone myself, sat down with you that day,
neither of us knowing what the hell to say.
But we got through the awkward times, and quickly came to be,
the best of friends to eachother, we could ever be.
The closer we grew, the more we left, the other world behind,
just me and you we jumped into a new place totally blind.
We prayed together our friendship forever, and always would stay the same,
but time has passed, only memories last, and little friendship remains.
WE ONCE WERE ONE! I screamed at you, I want my best friend back!
But we both realized at once it was that bond we lacked.
You think it doesn’t hurt me, to see us back to two, looking to my left and right to see there is no you.
But we both are moving on now, lets do it gracefully, I hope our friendship still lives on in you memory.
WE ONCE WERE ONE
Posted in Friends.
– February 26, 2007
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impressive
wow, this is so touching
beautifully scripted must say….I hope ur frnd comes back to u….very soulful indeed
heartfelt feelings & well written..
ouch! that hurts!
Very emotional.
gud yaar,nice feelings..
beautiful poem abhishek
They ARE , aren”t they dude? One and the same…. Both sides of the mirror.
very nice one
so nicely said. and i can empathize too ..
Nicely written.
a very nice poem….really touching
Well-written, dost. You have expressed your heart’’s feelings well. Warm Regards, Ghost
a very sweet poem……………
wonderful….absolutely wonderful…..
Nice…….
I have no words to appreciate your post….its just incredible!!.Liked it very much…….ME
nicely written abhi
a touching post…
written from the heart…nice
Losing friendship can be very painful…memories will still remain!!!
Good poetic and nostalgic expression of thoughts!Past is always romantic in comparison to unknown future.You have comendable command on expressing even subtle feelings.Just keep it up!
arvind
a nice xpression of thoughts………………