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MERI ABHILAASHA…

July 14th, 2009 by Khyati Shah Leave a reply »

Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera


Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari


Kuchh iss tarhaa



Gar tum hote Krishna-Kanhaiya


Main ban ke rahu tumhari Baansuriya


Jab adharon sey lagaye tumm


Hamme apni saanso ki ravaani sey zinda karte


Bajati ik alaukik prem-dhoon


Shrushti ka kan-kan ho ker prem-veebhor


Khincha chalaa aata tumhari aur


Radhe-Shyam ka divya-prem


Unki shakshi me aanand-veebhor main


Ban key rahu tumhari baansuriya



Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera


Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari


Kuchh iss tarhaa..



Gar tum hote lekhak-kavi


Main ban key rahu tumhari kalam


Shirt ki upari jeb mey main saji rehti


Dil key karib har dhadkan ko chupchap sunti


Tuhare ehsaaso ko shiyahi mey yun gholti


Dil ki tamanna kaagaz pe utarti


Ek ek harf padhte hi kasak rooh tak ja utaarti


Tumhari kalpanayein-sapane soch sandesh


Har ehsaas anubhuti ki parast main


Ban key rahu tumhari kalam



Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera


Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari


Kuchh iss tarhaa..


_______________________khyati…

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45 comments

  1. Sanjay Khare says:

    touching with nice collection of words.

  2. Think Tank says:

    Great one! Amazing concepts and very nice composition… (Rahul)

  3. Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera

    Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari

    Kuchh iss tarhaa…DEH ME PRAN,…….NISHA ME CHAND,….SAMAYA HO JIS TARAH…..//…….BAHUT HI SUNDAR RACHNA KHYATI JI…….BAHUT KHOOB……..

  4. Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera

    Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari

    Kuchh iss tarhaa..DEH ME PRAN,…..NISHA ME CHAND,… HO SAMAYA JIS TARAH,………..//…BAHUT HI SUNDAR RACHNA KHYATI JI……..BAHUT KHOOB…….

  5. Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera

    Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari

    Kuchh iss tarhaa..WAH KYA BAAT HAI AAPKI…….ATI SUNDAR…….

  6. ARTI says:

    ISHWAR…pyaar…samarpan…kaviyitri…
    sab ke darshan ek saath…
    tarif ke liye SHABD bhi dhundhne pe nahi mile…

  7. lata ojha says:

    mann kaanha mein yoon leen bhayo ,mero sab sudh budh bisar gayo…
    ye nipat anaari kaanha to apni bansi mein khoy gayo :)

  8. Nivia says:

    wah!!!!!!!!!!!!! superb

  9. krunal modi says:

    1 deal karte hai…….tum ban na krishna ki baansuri main banta hu unke sar ka taj unka mor pankh…..bas sadeiv hansta rahunga aur dusro ke muh pe bhi apne tej se muskaan le aaunga…..krishna toh rup ka ,daya ka,prem ka gyaan ka,bhakti ka dharm ka saagar hai…..kyun na hum sab uss saagar ki 1 boond ban jaaye?

  10. krunal modi says:

    wow superb lines and alaukik prem lakshana bhakti…u r also like meera…tumhaare iss poem se muje kailash kher ke song “SAIYAAN” ki yaad aa gayi……

  11. bahut hi khoobsurat abhiwyakti hai prem ki

  12. Surendra says:

    Ati sunder abhilasha. Bhagwan aapki ye abhilasha poorna kare, bas yehi hai hamari dua aapke liye..

  13. asha says:

    thanx a lot dear 4 ur beautifulllllllllllll b”day wishes…………….bahoot khubsurat…………….bilkul tumhari tarah…………….love

  14. “Kaash main teri Ban Jati Bansuriya…Adhron se tere lag jati main Sanwariya..Naina Nihare Panth, Kahan ho murari…Bolo Girdhari mere, Bolo Girdhari”…Aur Kalam ka prayog abhinav hai…Shyamal kavita ke liye Badhaee…THANKS

  15. atisunder tasveer ke saath utne hi sunder bhaav…….

  16. atisunder tasveer ke saath utne hi sunder bhaav……

  17. Gopi Goswami says:

    Array kha gay sab comments…

  18. irfan pathan says:

    aapki abhilasha bahot kamaal ki hai…

  19. Kuch isse Tarha……………..
    Achi h……

  20. atyant sundar abhilasha ..

  21. khub j aloikik rachna, Baansuriya….kalam…..aur mai banke rahu tumari ……aur vrundavan mai rass rachau………

  22. Apurva P says:

    Lovely expression..

  23. very good…….bahut sunder abhivyakti…….

  24. Kya bat hai…..sabse pahle yahi nikla mere man se……..sachmuch ek prem me bhari huyee bahut hi pyari rachna hai ye apki……..kya andaj hai apne prem ko apne premi tak pahuchane ka………….aur ye pic. bahut achhi lagi……….keep it up……..*Deepak*

  25. very beautiful poem khyati, the emotive effect of the dedication has been created by usage of simple words, and i liked that a lot

  26. Gopi Goswami says:

    man aanand vibhor karne vaalie rachna….very nice

  27. vivvaek says:

    this is true love for somebody..silent yet productive,,, so difficult to be an observer in love but yet so importantaspect of love.

  28. Amisha says:

    suuuunderrrrrr rachnaaaaaa…….ek aatma do shareer…..

  29. SARA says:

    its too good………….

  30. Bahut hi sndar kavita hai yeh, Khyati …..Meera-Radha nahin ho, lekin samarpan ka bhav vaisa hi hai.

  31. asha says:

    bahut sundar ””abhilasha””………………prem ka anupam sandesh deti hui………………..ek sparsh ki chahat……………..aur sameep hone ka ehsaas……………..beautifulllllllllllllllll

  32. akhtar rizvi says:

    Khyati ji….Bahut sunder ABHILASHA……very nice….all the best

  33. surendra says:

    Khyati ji, ye sirf aapki abhilasha aur kavita hi nahin, balki isme apke pyar ka samrpan bhav jhalak raha hai. Bahut hi sundar rachna hai.

  34. anvesha says:

    Very nice…$

  35. atyanta sundar…….

  36. Your “Abhilasha” is very pure and beautiful. Like Radha & Meera, Your unexpectational love is seen in your poem. Really very nice Rachana..!

  37. kim agrawal says:

    Sundar aur sprahaniy bhav. jismei parakashtha hai param ko pane ki. achchhi-si aur lalitya-purn rachana par badhai……………kim.

  38. varad savla says:

    one very good thing i noted in your posts, is that u r always trying to write something new or with something different. here U have used ”bansuri” & ”Kalam” very nicely. nothing but Just good……

  39. AAMEEN KHAN says:

    bahuut khuubsurat kavita……….. heriiiiiiiiiii main to prem diwaani mera dard na jaaney koyi……….. meerabaai ka yeh bhajan yaad agaya.

  40. tum hoti comment to hum bhi blog ban jate tumari cooment se duniya sudharate ………………..

  41. Pradeep says:

    too good…..

  42. Snehal says:

    bahut sundar……

  43. manju baxi says:

    just too beautiful…..

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