Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera
Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari
Kuchh iss tarhaa
Gar tum hote Krishna-Kanhaiya
Main ban ke rahu tumhari Baansuriya
Jab adharon sey lagaye tumm
Hamme apni saanso ki ravaani sey zinda karte
Bajati ik alaukik prem-dhoon
Shrushti ka kan-kan ho ker prem-veebhor
Khincha chalaa aata tumhari aur
Radhe-Shyam ka divya-prem
Unki shakshi me aanand-veebhor main
Ban key rahu tumhari baansuriya
Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera
Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari
Kuchh iss tarhaa ..
Gar tum hote lekhak-kavi
Main ban key rahu tumhari kalam
Shirt ki upari jeb mey main saji rehti
Dil key karib har dhadkan ko chupchap sunti
Tuhare ehsaaso ko shiyahi mey yun gholti
Dil ki tamanna kaagaz pe utarti
Ek ek harf padhte hi kasak rooh tak ja utaarti
Tumhari kalpanayein-sapane soch sandesh
Har ehsaas anubhuti ki parast main
Ban key rahu tumhari kalam
Naa main Radha Na hoon Meera
Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari
Kuchh iss tarhaa ..
_______________________khyati…
touching with nice collection of words.
Great one! Amazing concepts and very nice composition… (Rahul)
Naa main Radha… Na hoon Meera
Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari
Kuchh iss tarhaa……DEH ME PRAN,…….NISHA ME CHAND,….SAMAYA HO JIS TARAH…..//…….BAHUT HI SUNDAR RACHNA KHYATI JI…….BAHUT KHOOB……..
Naa main Radha… Na hoon Meera
Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari
Kuchh iss tarhaa………..…DEH ME PRAN,…..NISHA ME CHAND,… HO SAMAYA JIS TARAH,………..//…BAHUT HI SUNDAR RACHNA KHYATI JI……..BAHUT KHOOB…….
Naa main Radha… Na hoon Meera
Saiyaaji main banna chaahun tumhari
Kuchh iss tarhaa………..………WAH KYA BAAT HAI AAPKI…….ATI SUNDAR…….
ISHWAR…pyaar…samarpan…kaviyitri…
sab ke darshan ek saath…
tarif ke liye SHABD bhi dhundhne pe nahi mile…
mann kaanha mein yoon leen bhayo ,mero sab sudh budh bisar gayo…
ye nipat anaari kaanha to apni bansi mein khoy gayo
very nice…
ati sunder
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!! superb
1 deal karte hai…….tum ban na krishna ki baansuri main banta hu unke sar ka taj unka mor pankh…..bas sadeiv hansta rahunga aur dusro ke muh pe bhi apne tej se muskaan le aaunga…..krishna toh rup ka ,daya ka,prem ka gyaan ka,bhakti ka dharm ka saagar hai…..kyun na hum sab uss saagar ki 1 boond ban jaaye?
wow superb lines and alaukik prem lakshana bhakti…u r also like meera…tumhaare iss poem se muje kailash kher ke song “SAIYAAN” ki yaad aa gayi……
bahut hi khoobsurat abhiwyakti hai prem ki
Ati sunder abhilasha. Bhagwan aapki ye abhilasha poorna kare, bas yehi hai hamari dua aapke liye..
thanx a lot dear 4 ur beautifulllllllllllll b”day wishes…………….bahoot khubsurat…………….bilkul tumhari tarah…………….love
“Kaash main teri Ban Jati Bansuriya…Adhron se tere lag jati main Sanwariya..Naina Nihare Panth, Kahan ho murari…Bolo Girdhari mere, Bolo Girdhari”…Aur Kalam ka prayog abhinav hai…Shyamal kavita ke liye Badhaee…THANKS
atisunder tasveer ke saath utne hi sunder bhaav…….
atisunder tasveer ke saath utne hi sunder bhaav……
Array kha gay sab comments…
aapki abhilasha bahot kamaal ki hai…
Kuch isse Tarha……………..
Achi h……
atyant sundar abhilasha ..
khub j aloikik rachna, Baansuriya…….kalam……..aur mai banke rahu tumari ……aur vrundavan mai rass rachau………
Lovely expression..
very good…….bahut sunder abhivyakti…….
Kya bat hai…..sabse pahle yahi nikla mere man se……..sachmuch ek prem me bhari huyee bahut hi pyari rachna hai ye apki……..kya andaj hai apne prem ko apne premi tak pahuchane ka………….aur ye pic. bahut achhi lagi……….keep it up……..*Deepak*
very beautiful poem khyati, the emotive effect of the dedication has been created by usage of simple words, and i liked that a lot
man aanand vibhor karne vaalie rachna….very nice
this is true love for somebody..silent yet productive,,, so difficult to be an observer in love but yet so importantaspect of love.
suuuunderrrrrr rachnaaaaaa…….ek aatma do shareer…..
its too good………….
Bahut hi sndar kavita hai yeh, Khyati …..Meera-Radha nahin ho, lekin samarpan ka bhav vaisa hi hai.
bahut sundar ””abhilasha””………………prem ka anupam sandesh deti hui………………..ek sparsh ki chahat……………..aur sameep hone ka ehsaas……………..beautifulllllllllllllllll
Khyati ji….Bahut sunder ABHILASHA……very nice….all the best
Khyati ji, ye sirf aapki abhilasha aur kavita hi nahin, balki isme apke pyar ka samrpan bhav jhalak raha hai. Bahut hi sundar rachna hai.
Very nice…$
atyanta sundar…….
Your “Abhilasha” is very pure and beautiful. Like Radha & Meera, Your unexpectational love is seen in your poem. Really very nice Rachana..!
Sundar aur sprahaniy bhav. jismei parakashtha hai param ko pane ki. achchhi-si aur lalitya-purn rachana par badhai……………kim.
one very good thing i noted in your posts, is that u r always trying to write something new or with something different. here U have used ”bansuri” & ”Kalam” very nicely. nothing but Just good……
bahuut khuubsurat kavita……….. heriiiiiiiiiii main to prem diwaani mera dard na jaaney koyi……….. meerabaai ka yeh bhajan yaad agaya.
tum hoti comment to hum bhi blog ban jate tumari cooment se duniya sudharate ………………..
too good…..
bahut sundar……
just too beautiful…..