The Ripples
A ripple in the still waters, the waters though calm runs deep. It's the ripples that animate the surface of the water with joy, sorrow, excitement or grief.
The ripples indicate the turmoil on earth; they also signify the victory of the kingfisher that dexterously dives to catch its prey.
It's an awesome sight when waters dance whenever someone tosses a stone in the river. An amateur may form just one ripple but a maestro may form several such ripples in a row that too with a single throw!
How wonderful are these ephemeral ripples, each ring forming a face happy, gloomy, angry, ugly, beautiful or smiling, the way the onlooker perceives!
The good and bad times in our life are just like these short lived ripples see how beautifully the water balances them both and maintains its tranquillity and when again the wind does softly blow, the water again enjoys the ballet of these small and big ripples.
What a lovely sight it is to see a dried leaf bid farewell to the tree and ultimately caress the river that flowed down its tree. Its undying romance for the water, which it always ogled at when on the tree Now is the time to finally find solace in the arms of the water, which humbly offers her the coffin (ripple) on which it will gently float its last journey
#1 by vithal patel
This is a master-piece lacking clarity. Probably you did not have time to perfect this post logically. As a symphathetic critic I say that if this is created by you then Baby! Your are excelling in writing, creating and expressing. Seems that you have not written. Then at least a great follower of the art of metaphor…. now before you drown yourself in the world of rare creativity then Chi. Guddi! Be careful one day you shall be known as Miss Cat Harakiri of the World-Literature… You are unique in two ways i. e.1!) YOU ARE UNIQUE 2) And such a humble and good soul that you do not know you are unique!!!
#2 by patel kanji
Now is the time to finally find solace in the arms of the water, which humbly offers her the coffin (ripple) on which it will gently float its last journey…
STOP PRESS: MADAM GENIOUS! WHEN YOU HAVE TIME DO EXPLAIN THE MEANING OF THE LAST SENTENCE… My enlish is poor so this request…..
#3 by venkataramana
A RIPPLE RELIVES LIFE AS IT SAILS THE WATERS OF THE RIVER IT ADMIRES ALL THE LIFETIME IT WAS GLUED TO THE TREE THAT ITSELF STOOD BY THE FLOWING RIVER ,SHILPAJEE..VERY GOOD EXPOSITION OF THE STREGTH OF LOOKING BEYOND THE FALL[ BE IT A LEAF OR A TEAR-DROP]…EXCELLENT.
#4 by sanjay mane
very very nice shilpaji…..
#5 by Ocimum Sanc
You made an apparently trifle thing like a ripple so interesting…..well done.
Very nice flow of thoughts!!
Keep Writing!
#6 by kim agrawal
Sundar aur sadha hua vivechan jo hamen jodata hai,prakriti ahasas se. badhai…kim.
#7 by chandrakant parmar
beautifully written……….ripples in water…….well described …….no words
#8 by BEST FRIEND
wonderfully written on “the ripples” that occur in water…..nice comparison of the ripple with our life and making ripple the final resting place for the “leaf”.
#9 by Pradeep
Nice blog indeed ….. jindagi ka falsafa bayaan karta prateet hota hai aapka blog…….keep posting