Kal jab mai apni beti ke saath thi aur us par bada pyaar aa raha tha Jaane kaha se do bunde meri aankho me chali aayi aur who akeli nahi aayi meri Maaki yaado ko saath lekar aayi Upar waale ki dua se mere paas ab do maa hai ek who jisne mujhe janm diya aur dusri mujhe mere umra ke 25 ve saal me mili, meri Saasuma ke rup me khud maa banne ke baad ye ehsaas aur gehra ho gaya ki Maaye kitne thodi si cheezo me khush ho jaati hai bada dukh hota hai jab wo thoda sa bhi mai apne Maa ke liye nahi kar paati
Ye ek kavita jo mere dil ke kareeb hai aaj mann kar raha hai aapke saath baantu
" Jab bhi Kashti meri Sailaab me aa jati hai,
Maa dua karti hui mere Khwab me aa jati hai.
Ye kaisa karz hai jo mai adaa kar hi nahi sakta,
Mai jab ghar na lautu, meri maa sajde me rehti hai.
Aye Andhre dekh le, Muh tera kala ho gaya,
Maa ne aankhe khol di, Ghar me ujala ho gaya.
Abhi zinda hai Maa meri, Mujhe kuch bhi nahi hoga,
Mai ghar se jab nikalta hu, Dua bhi saath chalti hai.
Munavvar Maa ke aage yu kabhi khulkar nahi rona,
Jaha buniyaad ho, Itni nami achhi nahi hoti .
Poet: Munavvar Rana
If anything on earth is so sacred like god then it’’s a mother…..noone can take her place…..God’’s real reflection……~~~Raj~~~
mastishk jhuka ke naman. kitni sundar dedication hai yeh. aap bohot khudkismat ho didi k apke pass do-do maa hai par usse bhi zyada khushi anindita k liye hoti hai k uske pas aap jaisi pyari maa hai. i pray dat ur daughter gets all ur charm n charisma and becomes an even beautifl lady
anamika ji , aapne toh aankhon main aanso bhar diye.maa…….upar wale ka diya sabse khubsoorat aur precious gift hai.shayad isiliye kaha gaya hai”GOD COULD NOT BE PRESENT EVERYWHERE.SO HE MADE MOTHERS”keep it up: )
very nice
NICE POST
a serene thought.
very beautiful poetry………..very nice
bahut sundar likha hai anamika…keep it up.
It is a beautiful poem. Khub Sunder go. Jab ghar se nikalta hoon uski duaye sath chalti hai. This line hits my heart. But it is ironical that my mother is not alive. But I know her wishes are with me because of which I am pulling on. Tomar ei poem ta tomar boudir o khub bhalo legeche. She has sent you her best wishes to you. Thank You Anamika
maa tujhe salaam……………. maa to maa hi hai jisne yeh duniya dikhai hai………u wrote wonderful……….
very beautiful poem, and your write is full of emotions. good post
bahot khub kya bat likhi hai aap ne,,,,,,,
Wonderful dedication for those wonderful ladies who change our lives.So u share ur maiden surname with me,fine there must be some relation between us,never mind let me call u didi becoz thats how my best friend Deepika calls u isn”t it?So will u be my didi as well?
It touched my heart when I read this post,so gr8 you have two moms n both ur moms must be very lucky to have such a swwt daughter like u.And thnx Anu didi for ur wishes,gift jodi dite chao taahole book bhora bhalobasha diyo tomaar bon ke.
anamika ji….chand sheron ne saare jahan ki baat kah di hai….apka lakhon baar shukriya, en laino ko samne laane ke liye…bhagwan apko dher saari khushiyan de…
khub bhalo laglo pore. Thnx sundor ekti kobita share korar jonno.
MAA GO TUMI KOTHAI GELE KON SUDUR PAANE……………SUDHAAI JAKHAN SAAGOR ,NODI HAASE AAR KAHE KAANE KAANE ………….ORE BOKA MAA KI KAKHONO JETE PAARE DURE , TOKE CHHERE …………….MAA JE SADAAI HAASE ,SNEHER DRISTI MELE ,AAGLE RAAKHE ,DAARAI THAAKE TOR SIORE.
khush raho,,khuda mehar ka haath tumaray sir pur sada banaey rakhey….jo maa ko pehchan gaya woh bhagwan ko pehchan gaya…….servevyapi maa……..
bahut hi emotional!
maa ka rishtaa hi kuch aisa hota hai apni aulaad se…is poem ke peeche chupi bhavna ko tahe dil se salaam 
wonderful!
great sharing dear! maa bann jane ke baad kafi chize rula deti hai…………..ummar ke kuch padav mei jab hum apni maa ko ulte jawab deeya karte thee aur voh usse hass k aansu pee jati thi…tab unn ki gehraayee samaj nahi aati thi par jab aaj hum jab maa hai aur bachhe vohi itihaas dohraate hai toh kasam se maa ki tasveer k samne seer sharm se juk jata hai….MOTHERHOOD is the best part of life i feel….
Anamika…Bahut jazbati…bahut khubsurat aur dil ko chu leni wali post….sach me jab apni aulad hoti hai tab hi hamen apne parents ki qadar mehsus hoti hai….aur maa jaisi hasti to duniya me dusri bani hi nahi…aap ne Munawwar rana ke bahut khubsurat ashaar likhen hain….unka ek sher mujhe bhi yad aa gaya jo aap ko likh raha hun…BACHPAN ME KISI BAT PE HUM ROOTH GAYE THE /US DIN SE ISI SHEHER ME HAIN GHAR NAHI JATE…all the best
very touching..
Beautiful poem..thanx a lot fr sharin anaamika ji…$
Nice ….
what a beautiful poem…… sahi may, bahut bahut pasan aayi yeh nazm, aur jo sabsey bahetarin line muze pasand aayi vo hai :”Aye Andhre dekh le, Muh tera kala ho gaya, Maa ne aankhe khol di, Ghar me ujala ho gaya” iss ek vaakya ka kitana gahan arth hai…. just superb.
believe me this gave me goosebumps!!!!! kya gehrayee hai is nazm mein…..jis nazakat se maa ke pyaar ko(aur usse jo security ka ehsaas hota hai) express kiya gaya hai is nazm mein bahut rare hai…lovely post buddy…a winner once again…thanks for sharing with us!
Too good …..
….. “Jab bhi Kashti meri Sailaab me aa jati hai, Maa dua karti hui mere Khwab me aa jati hai”…… my fav. lines from the post …… aise hi dono mothers ki seva karti rahiye (khaas taur par saasu maa ki) aapko bahut pyaar aur ashirwaad milega :)….. nice post anu……… thnx for sharing