Ishq Ka Janaazaa…
A result of another experiment with pain .Tried to portray the emotions when a person undergoes an excruciating pain. Shayad tab ka ehsaas jab billakh bilakh kar rone wala dard hota hai just an experiment The poem serves its purpose if it brings even a drop of tear to your eyes ..aur dard par ro to har koi sakta hai .dard par waah waah kiya jaaye tab koi baat hai! Aur kehte bhi hain, dard ke bina dawaa ka wajood bhi nahin I give you "Ishq Ka Janaaza"
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P.S. It is just a figment of imagination .
ISHQ KA JANAAZA……………………..always liked this act of laughing at prbs……………….n dis poem shows how…………
1Nice.. Pain in its grandiose appearance. Depicts the maelstrom of emotions being felt.. A stab of deceit and an aching sadness that cannot be explained are well expressed in your poem. EXCELLENT PIECE OF WORK. KEEP WRITING.
2aisa sirf vahi feel karte hai jo jhel chuke hote hain varna har insaan me ye liyakat nhi ki aise likh payen..par dua hai apko aisa na mile kabhi..par agr mil bhi gya hoto,,sukun mil jaye..ye meri dil se dua haii…GudLuck..
3Varun JI……….yeh kya ho raha hai??? Itna bhari ek pyare se ladke ne likh diya??? Bahut he accha likha hai ki samaj me nahi aata kya kahe!!!!
4God, you make me wish I had paid more attention to my hindi skills….the lines are so beautiful tht i cringe when i come to a word i dont understand wondering what i missed out.. Great going!!! And Boss, What a marvellous pic..The black background…simply wow.
5i”m speechless…………… kaise likh lete ho tum itna depth mai jakar …………. inta hansne wala larka .aur pyar ki itni gahari samaz ………… very nice varun .kai bar parna chahugi ya kahu k bar bar to atishyokti nhi hogi.. god bless you varun
6good varun …again a hit!!!!!!!
7really touching & the pic is superb…..it seems is sard dunia me bas ek hi tapish hai………very nice……..god bless u……..bye…….swati
8Beautiful………..no words to say anything……………ultimate………..
9Bhavon ko shabdon mein pirokar, usamein pathak ko shamil kar lena, aapaki abhivyakti ki khubi hai.badhai………….kim.
10Kya khoob likhte ho aap!! Dard par muskhurana koi aap se seekhe!!!
11haunting… u have really used the metric variation in this poem superbly to recreate the pathos,the subdued anger and a sense of helplessness…last stanza is superlatively superb…the mood recreation is dramatic in its pathos,…. very good craftsmanship, varun…. the thoughts and words are very well paired … shows tremendous maturity in the treatment of the subject…. the pic heightens the effect and adds to the mood of the poem…great going…
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