Koshish…
hataane ko andheraa main shab jalaata raha,
wo raat ko bedardi se bujhaate rahe
kor pakad kar aatish ki, main garmaahat jodta raha
wo barf pighlaakar jazbaat bujhaane ki sujhaate rahe
main ik raah pakad kar raasta banata raha
wo har raah ke aakhir me ek raah banaate rahe
ek main tha, unhe manzil maan paas aata raha
wo rehguzar jaan mujhi se door jaate rahe
main apni wafaa me fanaa hota raha
wo apni bewafaai pe bhi itraate rahe
- Varun
kya bat he
1vo aapni vafa pa bhi itrate arhe
jaane kyon yaqeen karte hai log logon pe..log to baaz nahi aate qatl karne se… aapki poetry padh ke ye lines aayi mann mein..so ye aapke liye…
2varun……. ab itni badhiya poem padhne k baad alfaaz kaha se lau cmmnt k liye? Har alfaaaz k liye dil se daad nikalti rahi…… aap ki koshish ko padh ek aah nikal gayi………… bahut hi behtarin kavitaa…………… keep up………..
3very nice…. what a great composition?? specially the line kor pakad ker aatish ka……………… kya baat hai keep it up dear…..
4yeh poem padhane ke baad hothon se bas ek hi lafz nikalata hai …..wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww.
5Aisi compositions padne ke baad , bas Duayen hi nikalti hai dil se tumhare liye Varun… God Bless You dear
6Wow…too gud…$
7Too good a post ……. thnx for the share varun
8amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!……………i feel, iska sequel hona chahiye………iss baar “maroon” ke alfaaz……
9wonderfullllllllllllll varun………………main apni vafa par fana hota raha ………woh apni bevafai par itrate rahe…………………khubsurat alfaz dear……………. n thanx a lot 4 ur beautifulllllllllll b”day wishes…………..god bless u dear
10wonderful poem dear…keep it up buddy…
11wow Varun Wow
Bahut sunder 
12koshish……….meri aur unki………achhi rahi Varun par aapki post bagair pic k adhuri si lagti hai!!!
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i wish i had words but i just hv a nice warm smile saying LOVELY. u knw my views on it already!! it was pleasure reading it agn 
14last 4 lines r …………………….just too good
15nice posts,keep it up
16suno wohi sochein wohi baatein wohi andaz ab bhi hai
17bohat bechain lagtey ho koi to raaz ab bhi hai
main kesey uski yaadon aur waadon se nigah pheroon
woh mujh se door rehney wala mera hamraz ab bhi hai
yeh tum ho jo iss taluq per preshan ho
mager iss be laus rishtey pe mujhe to naaz ab bhi hai
nice one…….. hamesha ki tarah
is poem mein lafzon ki gehrayeeon ko tolna next to impossible hai!!!! in this lyrical composition as ageless emotions come to life once more as the present seems to melt into the timeless ……another brilliant composition from the poet of emotions!
18ye wafa befa ki bate . ye ruthana ,eetarana ,mushkurana, ………..nice written ,dost
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