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21 Comments to “Sauda”

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   Vaidehi S says:

   Beautiful… have been missing all this stuff.. dheere dheere apni pyaas bhujalenge…

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   lata ojha says:

   ”pyaas rahi der talak, paani guzar gaya falak se
   labo ne chakhaa boond-dar-boond,
   magar halak tarasta reh gaya..”

   Zindagi yoon bhi kabhi saath nibhaati hai,saansein aati hain magar jaan chali jaati hai kuch aisa hi dard hai ismein.. bahut sundar..

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   asha says:

   wonderfulllllllll varun! mai kya comment karu……..samjh nahi pa rahi……….tum ne jo likha hai….. i m ..speechless dear!!!!!!! sab se khubsurat alfaz”” raat ka nasha aankho mein taza- surkh jo thaa……….subah talak aankho se barasta rah gaya””………. a agree with neelima ji!!!!!

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   Sunita Mukherjee says:

   magar main hisaab me kachha reh gaya……….beautiful lines……….

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   Neelima sharma says:

   superb ………..tum hamesha hi achcha likhte aaye ho n likhte rahoge ..tumhari kitab ka kya hua??????????

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   Rising Moon says:

   poem ka presentation bahut achcha hai!! good

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   Rising Moon says:

   thoda bikhra bikhra sa bhav hai……mila bhi sab kuch…magar haath fir bhi khaali rahe ….kuchh aisa sa…..sahi pakda ki nahi??

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   Amisha says:

   baarish bhi hoti rahi saude ki…raat se subhe talak peer barsaayi …
   magar main hisaab me kachha reh gaya….ab kya kahe iske aage Varun Saab…..niceeeeeee

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   aekanki says:

   “barse baadal, paaya saahil, paayi manzil
   har aarzoo paas rahi, magar koi kareeb na reh gaya “………………. excellent……..

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    Crystal mOOn says:

    

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    Imtiyaz Shaikh says:

    too good boss,keep it up.tera dard shayad vo kaagaz aur kalam jaane jise tune apna sahara bana liya.

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    shailaja mukherjee says:

    kagazo k adhe sacche adhe jhoothe waado mein toh kabhi uljhe hisaabo mein…yeh sauda toh daga hi deta raha!! na hum-safar na hum-dard…yeh sauda toh sirf naam ka hi raha!

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    manju baxi says:

    just awesome……..no words to praise such a painful composition…………

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    sarita singh says:

    What a beauty!!!! Depth & dimension fighting for attention… a very real reflection of life….there are so many lines in this poem that gives rise to a sense of déjà vu….“barse baadal, paaya saahil, paayi manzil /har aarzoo paas rahi, magar koi kareeb na reh gaya”…..milta bhi hume bahut kuch hai, khote bhi hai lekin hisaab milane ke liye zindagi kabhi kahin rukti nahi… sach to yeh hai ki zindagi ka hisaab kabhi milta nahi….. hamare kachcha ya pucca hona is irrelevant to it….wonderful poem…every word rings so true…(I better stop or I’ll end up writing a blog here,hehe)

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    sarita singh says:

    What a beauty!!!! Depth & dimension fighting for attention… a very real reflection of life….there are so many lines in this poem that gives rise to a sense of déjà vu….“barse baadal, paaya saahil, paayi manzil /har aarzoo paas rahi, magar koi kareeb na reh gaya”…..milta bhi hume bahut kuch hai, khote bhi hai lekin hisaab milane ke liye zindagi kabhi kahin rukti nahi… sach to yeh hai ki zindagi ka hisaab kabhi milta nahi….. hamare kachcha ya pucca hona is irrelevant to it….wonderful poem…every word rings so true…(I better stop or I’ll end up writing a blog here,hehe)

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    Priyanka Om says:

    i m fan of ur writing …………fida hoon mai aapki poem ko padhne ke liye !!!

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    chandrakant parmar says:

    very nice poem………………………bahu sunder

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    SARA says:

    baarish bhi hoti rahi saude ki
    raat se subhe talak peer barsaayi
    magar main hisaab me kachha reh gaya……………dil ko chhu lene waali lines………………….awesome

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    anamika r says:

    Kya baat hai Varun…ye 2 line tumhare post ke liye…” Unse dur jaane ka irada na tha, Shayad saath rehne ka bhi irada na tha,wo yaad nahi karenge ye jaante the hum,lekin itni jaldi bhul jayenge, ye andaza na tha”…..Excellent creation dear..

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    Pradeep says:

    “pyaas rahi der talak, paani guzar gaya falak se, labo ne chakhaa boond-dar-boond, magar halak tarasta reh gaya”……. too good varun…. touched my heart and soul

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    Laxmi says:

    hey…………..raqeeb, halak…means what??…..dis poetry is a bit complicated for me………but loved reading it…………some thing magical

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