Kismat
pic: Matheran Trip
This poem is just a figment of imagination, and has no relevance to any person living or dead!
aankho par paaniyon ka karz hai zara,
fikra wajah ki nahin, bewajah hai kuch zindagi me
utarega ye karz dheema dheema,
kadva dhuyan jo aankho me hai bhara
saans me atkaa hai jo dhuyaan bada nukeela hai
humne maanga nahin zindagi se kuch jo mila
kabhi kabhi kismato ko apne haatho me cheela hai
baisaakhiyon ke sahare dard nahin chala karte,
aarzoo chalti hai
jab kabhi hume mila, dard hi tha wo silaa
dil kabhi zara jalaa, to dard -e- dil ko aarzoo bana diya
ek gaadhi lakeer hatheli pe kheenchi to taqdeer bana diya
tamaam daulato me lutata dil, dil nahin fakeer bana diya
beautiful..hamesha ki tarah..
1great…and nicely presented
2very beautiful expression, good work keep it up. n nice photograph too
3nicely written keep up the good work
4kabhi kabhi kismato ko apne haatho me cheela hai ……..superb
5i don”t know why, but last line made me smile every time i read it…….
6Loved it, Varun.
7very umada……bahut hi sunder ……………sahi shabado ka sahi jagah upyog bhav ke sath……..sirf lajawab kah sakte eese,,,,
8Its really great piece to read …wndrful one…$
9ummda varun bahut -bahut……..sach kaha baysakhiyon ke sahare dadrd nahi chala karte ……..aarzo chalti hai…………kya khub kaha hai tum ne…….. i agree with sarita..””gulzar saheb ki yaad aa gai………aur pic bhi utni hi khubsurat……..khubsurati utaar lete hain aap:)
10Agreed to Amisha…….it says more thn wht is expressed !!!!….Bohot dard hai isme…
11gr8……………..superb poem……ending is so nice
12the poem very beautifully delineates the feelings of unexpressed pain, unshed tears, incomplete emotions that are difficult to come to terms with & even more difficult to ignore completely….people journey through life carrying this invisible cross within their hearts and pretending to be happy… your poem reminded me of gulzar lyrics…” aankhon se aansooyon ke marasim purane hai / mehmaan yeh ghar aaye to chubhta nahi dhuan/ uthta to hai ghata sa ,barasta nahi dhuan……”
13fikr vajh ki nahi…..baisaakhiyon ke sahare dard nahin chala karte, aarzoo chalti hai…….it says more thn wht is expressed !!!! and must appreciate the beautiful pic…..
14a thought of substance and ressonance
there is this electrifiying effect in this piece. it has a perfect balance of both pain n pleasure. re-reading it evn 4 endless times makes no diffrence as the feeling cant be felt any btr than wot u have xpressd. the streak of possitivity thr in the line i had told u abt has a magnificient impact in motivating 1z spirit. so so so well written 
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