Rozmarre Ki Zindagi…
Ek aadmi apni kulhaadi liye
roz usi raaste jangal ki ore jaata
hai
rehguzar hote hain raaste ki mitti aur
kuch anjaane patthar
kal raat ki narm baarish se, chaand
tapak gaya tha boondo me
geela hai abhi tak sara jangal
chaandani se
uske pairo ki chhaap mitti pe chhoot
jaa rahi hain
anjaane patthar uske saath koodate
phaandate
pehchaan bana rahe hain
lakadiyaan magar seeli hain
uske choolhe jo saans bharengi,
kadave dhuyein ko sarka kar
wo jaanta hai ki rozmarre ki
tarah
jab wo sooraj kaat kar laayega
shab tab hi aayegi uske ghar me
aur jab geeli raat aayegi
toh use chaand chadhana hai seene
par
aasmaan se utaar kar
mehsoos karna hai ki is raat ka raja wo
hi hai
kal subhe jab suraj kaatne ka manzar
laut aayega
usi mitti se wo apne kadmo ke nishaan
chunane wapis jaayega
aur anjaane pattharo se ek din dosti ho
jaayegi
jo rehguzar rahe the kabhi, kuch der ke humsafar ban
jaayenge
bahut khoob….
1Hey Buddy kahan se itni gahari soch aati hai….. main padh ke hairaan hoon….. “Jo rehguzar rahe the kabhi, kuchh der ke humsafar ban jaanyenge…” bahut khub…….
2hey lamba comment di thi..bas ek line aaya!!! its happening with all the posts i comented on ..
3a philosophy to beat all philosophies of living… the last lines are simply superb …
4cnt be!! i dnt blv it. we have d same themes!! yet yet agn r freequencies matchd. as 4 d poem…i’v known this guy vd his axe 4 long!! i knw how he follows his monotonous rutine with grt enthusiasm. i knw how difficult it gets 4 him wen he walks down d same lane with no vissible or phisical changes!! i knw how he sees the rocks and tries to discover a new aspect to thm. i knw how d same cleched thins r viewed with a diference by him. i knw how beautifuly he relates 2 it all. wohi purani cheeze or wohi purana woh. naya hota hai firbhi uska nazariya…naya hota hai uska andaaz!! marvolous!!
5VERY THOUGHTFUL POEM……AND XCELLENT USE OF METAPHOR……….LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST….. UR BLOG PAGE LOOKS REALY COOOL!
6“jo rehguzar rahe the kabhi, kuch der ke humsafar ban
7jaayenge” —— Kya aisa hota hai?