Dastoor-e-ishq
Hey all,
Couldnt think of a suitable title, lemme know one ::)) cheers, Varun
The pic is from my Rajasthan Trip, Sunrise at Mount Abu
Suna hai har muskurahat me kuch dard zarur hota hai,
piye jaam chahe koi pine wala,
bin piye kabhi surur hota hai.
piye jaam chahe koi pine wala,
bin piye kabhi surur hota hai.
Jaali zakhm hain mere to jaali hi sahi,
marham pane se zada koi marasim
zakhm kuredne pe majboor hota hai
Pine chala jaam maiqueshi ke,
aur itara gaya mohabbaton par,
ye dekhiye,
kahin kisi ko dil todne ka bhi gurur hota hai.
Milte milte ban jayega ye masum sa fasana,
Aur reh jaoge sochte se tum
Dekhiye ye fasana kitne shehro talak mashhoor hota hai
Jal jal kar jaha baaz nahi ate parwane,
Shama se gar kiya hai ishq,
Ishq-e-shama ka suna hai dastoor yahi hota hai
Varun

very nice
1Nice poem, good camera work too
2awesome it is
3Nice work
4Superb photograph.
5Suggested title……….Suna Hai!
likha aapne bhut khub
6per ye to ishq ka dastur hota he
yo te rahe yu he inayat aap ki
hum ko to hur dam a manjur hota he ….
wah! kya khoob kaha hai kaviraaj…..brilliant creative come back ……title given is the ‘perfect’ one….
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