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29 May 2010 @ 4:30 PM

ત્રિપદી:-

પળે પળ ને બનાવે વેરણ એ તારું સ્મરણ છે,

તારા વિનાનું દરેક કદમ;

રણ મા ભૂલું પડેલું હરણ છે.

રચના:-મનીષા

deleted says:

pratyek kadam tarshyu haran?
pratyek charan nahi paranu , kadum
charan be j kadam asankhya
virah ni tivrata che ema. cong.
Kirtan Vegad says:

Hi manishaji..
khubaj sundar tripadi che..
maru pan mann atyare aavuj kaik chale che..

“mitra vagar sunu padyu che jivan maru,
vishwas che mane,kyarek to avse ene smaran maru…”

god bless u lot
kp smiling dear…
JAYANT PATEL says:

very nice hartly read i hope in future it more than that.
sunny says:

wel done manisha i like your tripad
har din is traha se likhti raho sum sab se vahvah le ti raho best of luck
SAMIR says:

BAHU J SUNDER…….TRIPAD MA JAANE TRAN (3) JANMONI VYATHA…
AAPNA TRPAD NI GAIRHAZRI AMNE BADHANE ATLI J VEDNAMAY LAAGE CHHEY..
BEAUTIFUL PICTURE TOO..
SAMIR says:

BAHU J SUNDER….TRIPAD MA , TRAN(3) JANMONI VYATHA …….BEAUTIFUL PICTURE TOO…

aap na tripad ni gairhazri amne badhane pan atlo j vednamay laage chhey….
Raj Adhyaru says:

Nice Manisha…

Jo e kadam…bhula padela haran chhe…..
To pan…mari bhuli yado ma …
Taru j smaran chhe…..

Pls. keep it up…
Khyati Shah says:

waah……. bahu samaye tamne vanchava malya……. shabde shabd dhaar daar…. yaad ma bhinjayel…….