Completly helpless when he touches me
in the slightest way
when he kisses me
when he pulls me close to him
and kisses me so gently
my body trembles
and i melt right into his arms
these feelings i wish i could express to him
but i never can find the words
its like they’re lost in the wind
its hopeless trying to fight off these feelings
its like he has me under a spell
a trants when he comes around
but when he looks me in the eyes
and says he loves me
without saying anything at all
im paralyzed
i feel butterflies in my stomach
but thats what i love about him
he makes me feel
Helpless
Posted in Writing.
– March 25, 2008
11 Responses
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The poem is very beautiful… But I agree with you Shikha where will we find the person described in the poem…May be in the dreams only:))
Touch wood dear, you are really lucky to get love from a person you love too! Hold on to him & love him the like no one ever would have loved anyone on this earth. My best wishes to you!
So nice and romantic……….
its is just superb….very well described.
Always express ur feelings and love will blossom …….
R u talking of first romance?
good one…could continue a bit more… ending was sudden.
good one, Carry on………………
awesome……. great work……..
it appears to b incomplete/// sumthin missin.,.
Good.. but i still need to find one..
Keep blogging.