When the world has taken its toll
And I feel so out of control
Everything I do or say
Becomes a big disarray
The rain begins to fall
Creating a dark wall
Brings a grin to my face
I grab my shoes and race
Into the wet wall of tears
All at once letting go of my fears
Now I don't have to be shy
Behind the wet wall I can cry
With every falling drop
The pain begins to stop
Like it's washing it away
Pain falls the ground to stay
A scream into the clouded sky
In a way says goodbye
To the anger and pain
That I couldn't even explain
The water falling around me
Has once again set me free
Now I don’t have to be shy
Behind the wet wall I can cry
…above lines touch me more…thanx for posting
very good…………..keep it up
the way u describe the rain is amazing. Yes i also liked the same lines as another friend says “Now I don”t have to be shy; Behind the wet wall I can cry”. very nice and touchy ones.
yes ,very true …. With every falling drop
The pain begins to stop…liked it
Very nice poem, Azaa ji. The most lines i liked are : “Now I don’t have to be shy; Behind the wet wall I can cry.”…..nice ones…..
u (seems so!) r next shoba de…!!!
keep t up!!