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  1. Bhaskar Biswas says

    Really speaking, a well known author in Bengali, named, SUNIL GANGOPADHYAY has written a novel whose ending is something similar. The name of the novel is AMRITER PUTRO KONYA, meaning, the son and the daughter of the Best. Really.. I liked it. And unfortunately, i can never be so liberal. And that hurts me. Shit, but, thats true. It hurts me… Anyhow, keep posting.

  2. DesiCouple1 says

    Hope you don”t mind, I have referenced your blog on my own. http://ourfantasiesnplay.blogspot.com

  3. desicouple1 says

    My wife and I have both enjoyed this. This has embellished our nights and she enjoys listening to the variations I throw in. I got inspired enough to write our very own one too, lacking in writing skills but certainly not in imagination :-)
    check it out http://ourfantasiesnplay.blogspot.com

  4. savi savi says

    omg!!!!

  5. Saakshee I says

    Now that’’s not a clingy guy but u say he is fictitious! Darn!

  6. max wayne says

    you write kool man! try posting more ! u could be a good writer ! i am hooked for more

  7. a pal says

    you write well…was just amused at the reactions-while i respect that each one of us is entitled to our own opinions…we shd”nt forget that the extent of our own experiences is”nt what constitutes this world-stuff happens ….ghost here clearly says it”s a work of fiction-i can tell u that the plot of this story is”nt totally far fetched…i can relate to it…and am just a regular 34 year old woman living an very ordinary life with a lil girl and a husband i love…and i can so totally understand how this is much more than an erotic story…anyways-i give u full marks ghosty toasty-whatever that means to u:)

  8. Inky Pinky says

    As Mr. Iyer said try to say something which is useful to the people… coz. you may take long to write a story than to convey a good message.. I am damn sure you are a Story Writer from South India.

  9. Diganta Thakur says

    ur imagination is fantastic as an erotic storyteller

  10. dee vine says

    The story was ok. I”ve seen better coming from you. What got me commenting was ”Why Name’’s remark…it totally cracked me up! LOL….

  11. Shweta Iyengar says

    u can write nice romantic erotic stuff…i like the way u write a love making scene…didnt like this story though

  12. Name anny says

    Yup all this writting for a free while this writting deserve a premium so why dont u come up with a desi playboy version. Apke kaam ka gyan aur apke kaam ke acche daam. Adopt a nice name too..mast ram will do. Mast ram brings the kaam gyan in desi playboy. Su kahu choo.

  13. anjali reddy says

    are you a writer? if not u can become one

  14. Sudipta Sarkar says

    A good story again. It is really nice to see your imagination flow so well in words. I would categorize this story as a fantasy tale of erotism. Like Cindrella, such a man and woman never exists in real life.

  15. Why Name says

    Dint like this either , though You have a good imaginationI must admit.
    And trust me I have read many of such stories and some of them claim thier stories to be true. and I wonder what F***ing Husband or wife can do such filthy thing. I am sorry for the words I used. Not just It angers me but I also feel disgusted.

    And the word TRUST, the character in the story or rather you have twisted it just to suit you and FOR MOMENTRY PLEASURE.

    Angryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy…………. eh
    And like Raghu said you have a talent why not use it for some good.

  16. Raghu Iyer says

    i believe you have a great creativity as a writer i second to jinx something…..though the concept and the topic that u choose and the endings that happen seems not to gel with me…..pardon me friendly ghost…..i think i come from the old school of thought with a new outlook or picture……i think my conscience may revolt…..i could not understand one line in the disclaimer ——for your own good,please believe it!—now what does this mean?……………….and i may even request you to come out with your actual name instead of being a friendly ghost……angels write good…………anyway……God Bless You………….with your writing skills you can write something for the betterment of the humans……………….

  17. Ash K says

    FG - The title is very thoughtful..;) So is the disclaimer at the bottom. keep blogging!!

  18. Jinx Something says

    what, i ask, are you doing in a job that requires you to be propah, as you put it!!!???!!!!?????……….you should be an author shocking old aunties and generally having a whale of time. A suggestion, try sending this to some international story competition. they keep on happening online all the time……

  19. sahil banga says

    hmm, interesting…the last lines u”ve written suffices all….gawd, u r gettin betta…cheers