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Where the Lines are Drawn…

When clean is good
And dirty isn’t so bad either,
You’re ready to have sex.

When clean is great
And dirty is delicious,
You’re into the ecstacy of love-making.

Maybe something like this
Is true about life in this world also.
I wonder…
 

Posted in Poetry.



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  1. Aparna Bagwe says

    i dont understand this one

  2. EkAjnabee Mallu says

    Spot on buddy. Simple & superb!

  3. bronzegoddess bright says

    clean is good, dirty is great i think..
    it is the balance that matters

  4. shyama menon says

    You r spot on FG :)

  5. Shweta Iyengar says

    awed with this one…..keep it up!!!!!

  6. Friendly Ghost says

    REPLY TO DEEPA: Actually, that’’s how I first wrote these lines, and then I felt that I was going too far :) Regards, Ghost

  7. Deepa says

    and what happens when clean is bad and dirty is great? am going too far eh?

  8. Misty Bella says

    Pure distinction between plain sex and lovemaking….also depends upon the partners….just anybody or the love of your life……Warm regards, M

  9. Sowmya Shekar says

    fact…

  10. aradhana khanna says

    true true….very true…..

  11. The Princess says

    Short , simple , elegant ,sweet …… and most of all , has a lot of sense in it . Cheers :)

  12. ZEUS ZEUS says

    Whers the second segement????

  13. A J says

    Wah… I loved that…

  14. Jolly Jacob says

    Yes, FG, I think too that this needs a para or two. Just when you are ready. But it is great as it is too. But as Sandhya pointed out love-making has nuances and nuances. After all the biggest sex organ is between the ears. I suppose life is lived out there too.
    ;-)

  15. Sandhya Suri says

    Ummmm… Please ignore the spelling errors! Thank you. (Get the drift??)

  16. Sandhya Suri says

    Fuck de spellings!

  17. Sandhya Suri says

    p.s This One Rocks jsut het way it is…leaves you pondering :)

  18. Sandhya Suri says

    Sure is! Its all the magic and the mirage of the what the world calls desire! Life has its magic and mirages…a desert of illusionsw, sometiems it IS and oasis and sometimes just a delusion. Most times it’’s how you see it. Dirty Sex sometimes rocks but romance is classical and thus timeless…A clean plain quickie rocks but erotic is classic and thus timeless…ah well…I wonder!

  19. ZEUS ZEUS says

    Then please try to get back at this one when you are in ”mood”. I will come back to see what transpires.

  20. Friendly Ghost says

    REPLY TO DEE, RITU, ZEUS: Actually, I thought of writing something more, but I began to doubt whether what I wrote would be even a half-truth. Warm Regards, Ghost

  21. dee vine says

    ummm….. leaves me wondering too… i second Zeus.

  22. Ritu Jain says

    well said….makes me wonder too

  23. ZEUS ZEUS says

    Started with truth..ended in nothing..You could have elaborated. Still, nice one. Regards…ZEUS.