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wah aparna ..mujhe nahi maloom tha tum kavita bhi likhti ho ..zindagi ke kayi pehlu hain ..jeena wahi hai jahan zindadili aur jeene ki chah ho baki sab to yuhin waqt guzarna hai ..likhti raho
Hi
all life is yoga !
arey,,aap to bahut gehrey chale gayea,,kya baat hey…bahut ache
well said..aakhir har sikke ke 2 pehlu hote hai…
Well said, Appy.
To, L Kini, B Chatterjee, and others who”ve not voiced this: You are ABSOLUTELY right about the edited version being MUCH better.. thats y ive put both the versions here - to highlight what a BIG difference the right phrases make!! .. the original is of course my version. while im ok with hindi, its not my mother tongue. i was not quite happy with how it was reading. so i passed it on to a friend tanmayee whose mother tongue is hindi.. et voila, see what magic she has wrought… hats off to her!!
Agree with L K… the second version by T reads better….(T. W)
Exceptional thoughts.
Really profound thinking A B.
Edited version is better. Who is Tanmayee?
hmmmmmmmmmmm. thot provokin!!
wah, kya baat hai!
wow! both the versions of zindagaaniyaan are superb! kya bat hai!!! wah wah…wah wah!!!!!!!
Yes indeed, nice shayari…
Fish farmers usually grow 3-4 types of fishes in the same pond. How? The different species live at different depths.
Interesting thought, Appy.
bus apne apne jeene ka andaaz hai,
koi gheraiyo me doob kar bhi pyasa reh jaata,
to koi uupari teh me bhi santusht ho jaata,
koi na jaan paaya gehrayee samandar ki
ya kwaish bande ke dil ki
nice one aparna
Bahut khoob
Issi tarah likhtey rahiye