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Ye kya hua??.. Abhi to soyi hi thi,tab tak to aisi koi baat nahi thi ,phir ye achaanak kya hua..? Baahar dekhti hoon…Oh..ye sabhi rishtedaar achaanak se kyon jutne lagey hain?? Kuch bhi to nahi samajh aa raha..
Chhoti didi se poochhti hoon..arrey..ye sab log ro kyon rahey? Mann ghabraa rahaa..kya ho gayaa raat mein aakhir?? Mere bachche kahaan hain?
O maa…ye dono itne gumsum se kyon baithe hain ?? wo bhi kamre mein chhup ke..?? Zaroor inke papa ne hi daanta hoga mere bachchon ko,abhi poochhti hoon..
‘.Babbu .bachha kya hua aap dono ko? Papa ne kuchh kahaa kya?’ Arre ..sunte kyon nahi dono? ” beta…kya hua mere bachchon ko,hmmm..,bataiye to? kisi ne kuchh kahaa kya?aur…aur ye sab bheed kyon ekatthi ho rahi ?”
Ye to sun hi nahi rahey jaise..Ab kya karoon..Inke papa se hi poochhti hoon..wo hi bataenge..Jaane kyon daant dete hain aise? Aise bhi koi daantata hai bachchon ko bhalaa..?
Ohh..Ye to sabke paas aangan mein hain,kaise jaun? Babuji ke aagey jaana uchit nahi hoga…
Ye phool le ke aangan mein kyon aa rahey?? Aur ye kya hai ?? AAH..BARF KI SILLIYAAN?? YE…YE KYON..KISLIYE? HEY RAAM!… YE TO KISI KI ARTHI KA INTEZAAM HO RAHAA….KAUN??? ARRE KOI TO MUJHE BHI BATAO.. KYA HO RAHAA HAI.??
Wo badi didi ja rahin kisi ko antim darshan karaane ..chaloon main bhi to haath jod loon..jaane kaun hain..pranaam to karna chahiye..
“Didi.. Kaun hain ye?” Didi ne chaadar hatai hai,dekhoon to….
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yah post—ekdam leek se hatkar.. this is the gyan we obtain from indian philosophy and spiritual thinking.We all have to leave this body …a costume put on to play our part…one day or the other… but the drama of life goes on…we return with some new body and new identity… this knowledge that we are eternal and immortal soul ,–gives great satisfaction and consolation… Let’’s play our part to the best of our ability,, remember God and assist Him in His divine task…and leave the rest to Him…HE will surely protect us in all events…
1THIS POST IS NOT IN ANY WAY NEGATIVE…WE HAVE TO PASS THRU ALL STAGES IN LIFE…
i remember to have written something in the same lines in poetic style in rediffiland long back…well good imagination…i dont know why you thought so…
2padh kar sach main rongte khade ho gae…….bahut hi aacha chitran hai ….. u have great skills of writing very good blogs …. keep it up
3Hi Lataji, ek na ek din toh hum sabhi ke saath yahi hona hi hai… hum sabhi iss sachchaayi se bhaagte hain aur darrte hain; pata nahin kyon? Par waakai aisa sapna dekhne ke baad saara din kharaab hi beetata hai…
4Yaa well written ..but sad…nooo..to tell truth I feel bad ..To make myself happy I am thinking what a new born baby will be thinking when first come to this world..
5Great!
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Mai to 4th paragraph par hi samajh gaya tha ki kya hone wala hai.. I had also once written a story on these lines, but I was not cruel that I would think about doing this to a mother of 2 kids… Very good one and a great start for a poet!!! Regards, (Rahul)
7very nice and beautiful, and expecting more from ur pen
8Very good…
9your post has given me goosebumps……oops!
10dramatic effect….awsome,just awesome…
m,ujhe kisi ki yaad aayi….ye maine sapnemey dekha hai, merihi arthi
11moksh ki prapti hui …………………………………
12so hows it up there ? or are you down there di ?????
i mean heaven and hell
I always remember what one of my lecturers in college had written down for me in my autograph book. It was in malayalam , but here is the translation..”All stories end in death and he who tells a tale without including that, is not a good story teller”.
13kalpnik kalpana……… Nice post.
14Good imagination……
15kisko maar diya aapne…!!!!! very good….
16Aapki kalpana shakti ki daad deni padegi.
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