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YOU….

The reason for my joys and tears,
Cause of my crazy disposition and cheerz,
I blink my eyelid and can feel your warmth,
Reason for my joy and mirth,
You can make me cry and say its over,
Yet give my flaws a cozy cover,
No one can come close to what you are,
I smile but my heart’s still got a scar….

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  1. rajesh vora says

    was gonna say ouch…. touching. hoping that this is pure fiction and a result of your poetic mind. tc…

  2. warm sunshine says

    kya hua??koi mil gaya ya kho gaya???oh come on gal …there r enuff fish n frogs out there lol

  3. Moe M says

    but remember sometimes scars have a way of healing - whatever, never lose the smile - take care :)))))))))))))))))))))))))

  4. seema shaikh says

    heart broken ash?

  5. Nischalson Crusoe says

    hmm… touchy.

  6. RAGHU IYER says

    this poem “you”…talks of your love and you need for the same love back…God bless you :) may god bless you and give you the love you require in life…

  7. RAGHU IYER says

    bring back the chirpy and smiling ashwini back into your life….be the versatile…

  8. Cyril Paul says

    Hmmm…?? For some reason, I pondered about this mysterious being for a while wondering who this could be - a family member, a great friend, a mentor? But I guess, it is a writer’’s prerogative to shut the world out of her verses. Saying a few words here and there, letting the world catch a brief glimpse of the brilliance within, and then covering it up jet-black for some other time in the future. In which case, will await the next posting…

    On a separate note, “Ladies & Gentlemen, we present to you: Trishna, The Warrior Princess (claws and all)!!” Cheers…

  9. Trishna Mumbai says

    fight for it gurl…claws and all…t

  10. Vish R says

    Too cardiac Ash… Its beautiful… sublime… but it hurts.

  11. ROHIT BAWEJA says

    tere har dard se wakif hu main magar kya karu kuch chah kar bhi nahi kar pata take care!!!!!