Shama ko bujhaye hain roshni ko nazarband kiya,
Sochte hain sooraj ko unhone muththi me band kiya.
Pyar ki pakeezgi hai aur unka ye karam,
Dard ne angdai li hai aur uthkar chal diya
.Kis- kis ko bataun kya hua hai mere saath,
Achchhi nasl ka aam tha, babool ban kar chal diya.
Paniyon mein khuloos tha aur barishon ki rimjhim bhi,
Saundhi-saundhi khusboo ne mujh par koi raham na kiya.
=chetan prakash’chetan.
be positiv friend kabhi to koi raham karega………achha socho na jane
bhagwan kab tathastu kahde…..
achcha hai….
Achchhi nasl ka aam tha, babool ban kar chal diya……waah bahut khub!!!!!
very nice……………..
bahut hi khussurat likha hai aapne …………………very nice
bahut sundar likha hai aap ne………………..achhee nasl ka aam thha….babool ban kar chal diya…aur dard ne angdayi li aur uthkar chal diya………….bahut khub
Chetan Bhai…Bahut sunder…Dard ne angdayi li hai aur uthkar chal diya….very nice….all the best