jab se tera naam liya hai
tera daman tham liya hai
Ek anmat si pyas hai shayed
kyon nazron ka jaam piya hai
Ek pathar ne mujh se pucha
kyon kud ko gumnam kiya hai
karobar nahi hai CHAHAT
Chahat ne paigam diya hai
har dhadkan main teri surat
In aankhoo me bas teri murat
tujhko meri duniya me lakar RAB ne mujh per ehsaan kiya hai .
Ab chahongi ek wada tumse door kabhi na jana mujhse
Mar jaaongi bin tere main bin pani machli ho jaise .
Bana lo humsafer mujhko apni raahon ka
Nibha lo apna wada mujhse Kabhi na door jane ka .
v nice yr
Aapne apni bhavnaon ko achhi abhivyakti di hai, Aditi ….
bahut sunder…….banalo hamsafar apana………. nibhalo apana wada.. this is too good.
very nice..
beautiful expression……..
nice…very nice…
emotional yet values adhered.
Very Deep Aditi, loved the line “tujhko meri duniya me lakar RAB ne mujh per ehsaan kiya hai….” very well composed… :-))
thanks for sharing ..
very sweet
sooooooooooooooo romantic poem………..
ROMANTIK………….HUM…………….SAHI HAI..PYAR KI KAHNI…………….HOTI HAI MASTNI…
Meri dhadkan main tu; meri aankhon main……bass tuu hi tuu….. bahut hi romantic aur pyaari si kavita likhi hai aapney…… aameen