Firstly, a big thanks to all those who liked and appreciated my first hindi poem ‘Vaada’.. it motivated me to come up with my second offering.. hope its worth the appreciation received…
Kehte hai woh theek nahi, gustaakh yeh mohabbat hai
Kehta hoon dosh mera nahi, mohabbat yeh gustaakh hai
Hum mile kyon baat isska, shikwaa bhi tujhi se hai
Hum mile toh judaa na ho, dua bhi yeh tujhi se hai
Maangu kya khuda se main, khuda hi mere saath mein
Kahoon kya khuda se main, khuda hi har baat mein
Tere aaghosh mein jo simtu, toh jahaan mehfooz yeh lagta hai
Tere aankhon se jo dekh lu, toh jahaan jannat yeh lagta hai
Darr hai iss jannat mein, dard tujhse bichharne ka hai dil ko
Par dard se darr nahi lagta, darr hai iss baat se dard hai iss dil ko….
Tere aankhon se jo dekh lu, toh jahaan jannat yeh lagta hai……… wah!! bahuut khuub……hey u r writing relatively well.
hummm so our storyteller is becoming a poet, welll you are good at this too souvik. you have written a brilliant hindi poem. Good being a bengali ur hindi is not that bad