In the trapped darkness of my loneliness
Heart and thoughts fade away
I crack open a space in my mind
Where i keep my dreams
Hidden and locked inside
Revealing bright colors and gay patters
And sounds filled with laughter
I sweep away those dreams
Like dust under the carpet
Sometimes for the briefest of time they become
Fantasies filled with life
But when I seal the crack
I am left alone
Trapped in the darkness
Struggling to hold a dream glowing and gone
A lifeless dream
scattered into the winds that howl…….
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hmm… lovely dreams……….
you write so very beautifully.But i just hope that your blog does not in anyway reflect you.cant think of you being heartbroken.its a dreaded feeling……….i know!
Wow…A wonderful dream indeed.
I just loved these lines, truly touched by them NC…Alas, a fitting ode to those of us who live by the pain, and on the edge.
how grt yar in scribbling the blogs….I really need u ….closer to my heart..to hear the whispers of heart again and again………………..
Dreams are dreams… meant to be dreamt. Dont hold onto them…be ready to dream more and more without the guilt… for you are born to dream. keep dreaming…
Hi..di…thanks..for re-dreaming…your posts as beautiful as your heart..please write something new…waiting for…
dreams are for ever …not responded to my earlier comments..thinks I know you better then you
lovely dreams..
Take care
Lovely thoughts……..neatly expressed…who says that “nobody cares”? I care for u friend…..:)
hi dear
the verse is v.good
but pls cheer up
have a positive outlook towards life
Stop sweeping away those dreams. Believe in them. You can breathe life into them. Believe. Ask and you shall receive. Seek and you shall find. Warm Regards, Ghost
beautiful poem
DREAMGIRL…….. BE OPTIMISTIC
apj says dream!!njoy dreaming..gud or bad..state of mind dear
Well written
u”ve conveyed ur pain beautifully…
be brave and dream with ur eyes open…….
struggling to hold a dream….the best line of your poem…..you put your lines superbly yaar…keep it up…..image yet to appear
Dream girl…. your poem is very nice…. pls think positive…and you will win the world……….aameen