Under the star studded sky
I dance alone in the night
The moon holds me close..
The night embraces me
As my feet move with the rhythm of the wind
I dance within the darkness
Hiding in the shadows
I hear the whispers in the breeze
So soft and lovely
The music flows
And then I hear the rhythmic beats of the rain
A star blinks through the veiled clouds
I dance for pain
Hoping there is still love to gain
Tears mixed with broken memories
Spilling on to the ground
As I twirl around.
Wrapped in the arms of the night
As the clouds erupt
Into waterfalls of fury
I dance all alone
Till theres no dance left in me……
U need not have to find words
to rhyme at the end
to make it sound like a poem
let it flow naturally like nature…
carefree…. nice try!
nice
good poem
I feel humbled too.you are touching…very touching…i am almost provoked to care….care for you.and going by the number of responses to your blogs,i do not think that nobody cares.!
I feel humbled after reading……how can you write so well.I am so very impressed. Keep going.
nice &wonderful poem
dancing in pain…unique poem!
good poem
Your penning is very painful.I think thats the beauty of love .It comes with the happiness wrapped in pain.I think everything needs to happen when its destined and few things we think we need badly and when we dont get it we are overcome by the pain but often it turns out that it was the best thing to happen at that point of time as we deserved something much much much better and wonderful than what we thought was the ultimate desire.God almighty plans for us what is the best for us…….
can be wonderful, let go your moves intuitive, seen by nobody,
dancing in nature, all alone ………………but then, suddenly, sad because of you”re all alone………………because you”re lonely…………
man is not made to be alone…………….good night, elisa……………….
nice
wonderful poem. shades and starin of Thakur
pain pain n pain flowing out in words… but as they say dawn waits after the long dark night—
SANZ_SWEET..
Great - NC, The way of expression - I like/love it.
awesome!
+1
your writings are so heart felt and your name is so intriguing…
your writings are so heart felt and your name is so intriguing…
thankfully the nights do hide us when we get into such moods…lovely expression tho its of lonliness…
lovely…yet it kindles the memories of the past…might be the lost love, lost passion and, yet the truth is that in one way or other those profounding memories still pull to begin afresh…..a creation….a life…..and a journey….in search of the real love……………………..
Great work…simley loved the why u worte…about the night, the scilence and I think about the struggle of the life..not sure…but love the poem..
i could feel the silence of the night…good poem
Oh Gosh! This is superb! You reminded me of my dancer friend, who is about to leave us all … her friends & mates… for her Dance… Who breaths… Lives & dies for Dance & only Dance… Like you perhaps… :O)
POETICALLY DANCES TO PERFECTION
Superby presented The dance so quiet, so lonely , so painful
I like this…”Sure is deep”.
beautiful…nice one!
A very nice poetic dance of longing that lingers in your mind for long. Good Posting.
They”re dancing with the missing
They”re dancing with the dead
They dance with the invisible ones
Their anguish is unsaid
They”re dancing with their fathers
They”re dancing with their sons
They”re dancing with their husbands
They dance alone They dance alone
I Pray to the Almighty that your Love does not remain unrequited for long.. soon, you will be united with your Love… !!!!
a lot of pain albeit the dance ….
Wonderful poem!
Lovely _ dance, music & song life………………..
sweet post