Its been so long Since I heard your song.. Its been so long..
Since I felt that I belong.
Its been so long
Since I saw your smile
Heard your footsteps cover that extra mile..
Heard the whisper of
Felt your arms embracing me
Its been so long..
Since I felt the warmth of
Saw the twinkle in your eyes..
All my longings vented through one deep sigh
Was it your
Or was it my choice
To let the love slip by
Is it less of a bother?
To never again set eyes on each other ?
All the images and memories
Have been washed away
All the love gone bad
Turning my world to black
And now my bleeding heart
Cradle of broken dreams
Beats on and on .
Without a reason to be………..
koi lotta de mare bitta huai din..
just beautiful my friend
well expressed…!
echoes of a broken heart..
hmmm…
really a nice piece of artwork..
liked it well………
Good Poetry………..
superb………..reminds me of the titanic song……..My heart will go on! simply loved your blog.straight frm the heart!
by the way …. it reminds me a bit by the song by geoge mcarray
someone is lucky u cd set sights on the one u loved …… i yet have to ….. words wd be similar …..
beautiful piece, how does it happen we ask ourself. It started so well, where did it all begin to slip away?
without a reason to be…cares every body…
take care dear..!
Very nice poem. Well expressed!
What a poignant piece……….incredible friend!
No Wordzzzz 2 Praise d work friend………..
no wordzzzzzzzz left tooooooooo praise……….
great one- sounds like lyrics to a great song… try it please!
Its been so long since v heard from u…. Take Care..
ohhhhhhh…… such an emotional one….. deel ko heelaa kar rakh deneaalee kavita…….
Was it your
Or was it my choice
To let the love slip by
Is it less of a bother?
To never again set eyes on each other ?
Simply beautiful……
SANZ_SWEET
good,v.good
Straight from heart, apt expressions, lovely poem!
simply love!
how can I comment on such surge of emotions which gave birth to words direct from heart….I cant..never and ever………….
Love and Love only shows you the Light.
u have described the pain of many in ur poem
Keep waiting till the next ray of hope brightens you up. Well written. Made me feel lonely too.
Hope the light spreads the sparkness in your life and ur darkness vanishes…
sigh!! it seems it has really been long!
emotions expressed in fine way good
I feel alot 4 u.I ve been thru the same dear.May god bless u.Luv,Samar.