Evening descends
Wrapping the city in its cloak of darkness.
The silent shadows jump and leap
As loneliness keeps me from my sleep.
It is a sad and still night
When I realise the hardest part.
That I am all by myself
Nursing a broken heart.
So easily he walked away from me
He doesnt realise just what he did to me
He doesnt know how much he hurt me.
He lives his life
Smiles his smiles
Just fine without me.
Each hour .. each minute
When my mind knows that he has gone
No one knows the heartache
As I try to carry on.
I wont shed a tear
For obviously he was not happy to be here.
I want him to give back the memories
That once made me smile
He continues to linger in my heart
While each passing day reminds me
That our lives are miles apart………..
silence speeks it self..time will heljs the pain..
True we do wish that beloved erson comes back .the pain from its loss is vivid and your post captures it to the full..
I wish I could express my sorrow through such beautiful poetry
nice piece
time heals the pain but in ur memory u will always remember … the moments …but without any hard feeling ..however occasionally u”ll sigh and wonder what was the purpose of all that pain..!
Lot of pain in your poem…..
very very heart feeling words
Broken heart……………well brought out.
There’’s so much anguish in your poem. I can feel the pain in your heart. But you have to be strong and not let these feelings overwhelm you. Life has to be lived. Take care.
There’’s such a pain in this poem……………………only time can heal…………….elisabeth
nice one…..
so many thing in silence ??? good one
nice poem!
Donąt compare yourself with anyone in this world.
If you do so, you are insulting yourself.
You are not responsible for what people think about you.
But you are responsible for what you give them to think about you.
Great, thankyou for sharing.
Dont cry for spilt milk … time heals. You may choose to heal yourself or keep on suffering from this internal misery.
WOW!!…VERY TOUCHING…….
hey rediffilander…remember when nobody cares one has to care for oneself as well as for others…because thats what life teaches us…life teaches us that we have to care for everyone…
nicely expressed…take care. life goes on…..
Nice poem………………………..Nice expression…………………..
remember and know real life is different from film……………
some people may understang wrong their love and want to break them, because sometime someone close to him on which he trust wholy creates the situation like this and without any reasons.So Analyze the things very carefully without trusting blindly………………………
No..never live n memories…he leads a happy life…so yar committment sud be towards yar surroundings tp keep happy…let the memories lead to a happy state rather in a situation where the feelings grow like a colossious and hiting on yar own life……………..
Universal Love is silent but more effective.
ummm…remembrance is clearly highlighted here …..memories do haunt but..i hope u get someone better who loves u more
lovely poem..brought out true feelings
such an emotional poem…oh!! and that made me emotional too… It happens ….. and one can only say :
I want him to give back the memories
That once made me smile
He continues to linger in my heart
While each passing day reminds me
……… your these lines are very very touch….. aankhon main paani le aayee……..
But dear NOBODY CARES… there will be somebody..who must be caring for you……..will come and say “CARE FOR YOU”////
That our lives are miles apart………..
Well done!Nobody Cares…the best poems come out when the heart is soaked in melancholy!All good poets are sad…maybe that’’s why you are a good poetess!!!But let this trait of writting poems not fade with the times of mirth…we need happy poems too from you..and that day is not too far away!Cheers!
nice post-there is no favicol sadly, for broken heart.
hey know wut..its not tht “u deserve wut u get, its u get wut u deserve”…n u will get the best one..coz u hv such a beautifull heart …the pain will always be there…n only u can feel tht…so atlest try to forget tht….its not easy but its also not immposible…..now gimme a smile……………
know wot ……its nice to open your heart …… its good to cry it all out ……not just once but many a times over n over again ….. but like the rest of us …… its time to get a new start …… the pain surely will linger on for a long time ….n the wounds too would take time to heal ……. but there are so many others for whom u mean a lot ……. by losing urself in the dilemma ……. you are causing the same pain …..elsewhere …… cheers n brighten up lil star
a very nice post…..keep it up. keep writing
As I said before in one of ur blogs this looks, sounds only good in paper…… take care…
The night would fall off ,the brightness of the sun shall conquer the darkness, the silence would be blanked by the chirping of the birds. look forward for it
Excellently communicated. Just to intervene, i think a person can express the best only if that person undergoes that specific state. Have u experienced or it is imaginary?Any how whatever, nicely depicted
hi dear,y r u taking care of ur heart when i”m there to heal.
its good 4m ur side of not sheddin tears .
just be happy n try to love the one who is near.
hey!! i dnt knw what to say.All i can say is that these r really nice lines that came from ur pen irrespective of whether they r originating from ur heart or these r just thoughts that u can penned down.aw keep it up.