Udate panchhi
Pankh pasare
Nadi kinare
Harinon ke jhurmut
Mohak drishya
Harshata hai.
Lahlahate khet
Jhoomte bhael
Mitti ki khushboo
Hridaya prahladit
Kar jata hai.
Pehli kiran sunhari
Suraj ki laali
Koyal ki bani
Kalakal behete jharne
Saver nirali bhaati hai.
Divya roop dhara ka
Nayan vibhor kar deta hai
Prakriti ki anokhi daat
Man hatprabh rah jata hai.
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in short ” Life is good”…
That was soo beautiul.. so picturesque…
sundar…aati sundar!!
solid hindi hai yaar…..reminded me ofmy trip to sariska….long ago!
kya hindi likhi haiii…wow…nice poem ..i wish the world was so serene and so beautiful as u pictured it here….
again so sweet and soothing poem..itni shudh hindi..i wonder how u can write so well in hindi too..mai hatprabh hoon..
jhuuuuumta post…..bb
hey dear! Surya Kant Tripathy “nirala” ‘’s poetry was not meant for kids. Only a few of his very easy poems were used in syllabus of higher secondary education….and your poem doesnot seem to be a rhyme either…as evident from the comments of shiva r below…but I appriciate the humble way you took my critisism
achha hai..sm words meri samaj me nt comin.
prakriti ko arpit, yeh choti si kavita. Ati sundar hai yeh Pooja ki pooja!
hmmm very true…nature rocks….
A typical “nirala” kind of poetry which we used to read in our hindi sylabus books…soothing…green….rainbowish…cool and above all wonderful
very beautiful pooja…. u have weaved a great one as always… wish to be in such place.. but alas…. am not destined to be.. guess will have to put up with the concrete jungle.