Kaise kahun apni shankaaen,
Umad umad kar jo ghir aati hein,
Man ke kone ko cheer kar phir,
Kahin chhip jaatin hein dushala odhe,
Shaant, nishabad aur bejaan si………
Pukaarti hun, khojati hun taalon ke pichhe,
Shithil ho, baith jaatin hun chupchap,
Jaan leti hun nirjeev ho chali shankaaen,
Na jane kahan se achaanak………….
Vayakul antar ko jhakjhor kar,
Laangh kar saare bandh darwaze,
Idhalati, na maanne vali hadh ki bhanti,
Aa kar phir itrati hein…………..
Ashaant ho jaata hai yah chit,
Doondhata ek teevr shakti jo,
Maun sanket ko paribhashit kar,
Samaa le sawayam mein ,
Saare arakshit andeshe
beautifully written. man ke antardvand ko bahut sundar ukera hai aapne. shankaon se sabhi door rahna chahte hain par vo hamara peecha nahin chodti…..and u have a nice command on hindi…..good one….keep it up.
Sundaram..
Now main kaise kahun that this is awesome work .. Good poetry Pooja
nice poetry !
hi Poo kya asliyat bayan ki hai mann ki,
ise hi kehte hai shabdo ka jaado
kya bat hai PUJA…bahut khubsoorat labse
great poetic work. keep it up!
was here but didn”t fully understand….will be honest about that. Will be back to read your next blog.
No Offence meant
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u rock….try hindikalam to post this gem in hindi font….effect wud be even better….
lovely!
arrey angel, u dont know that pooja writes so beautifully in chaste hindi? just read one of her earlier poems called prakriti… just awesome it is… and this one too is as awesome as ever. … pooja.. what a great poem yaar… ‘’shankaaen” u have just touched the right chords with such subtleties. loved this one.
adbhut….. Pooja itnee shudhh hindi kee kaveetaayen bhee likh leti ho??? I am amazed.. This one is beautiful.. and how true.. we all have our parts of doubts and anxieties.. and our own ways of dealnig with them.. luvs angel
well said in kaise kahun..gud one!