STORY and its few facts
comments recieved on this story
1-Story is complete homogeneous mixture of truth and fiction and my imagination 2-Story is basically in three parts… a) Boy and girl love each other and later get to know this fact b) Though boy has entered in married life with another girl but he still miss his gf and vice verse c) Girl in disturbed by the feelings of his ex bf toward his wife and finally she takes a decision 3- Few of u ilanders has commented that it is true story…ok 4-First two parts are based on true stories of two different girls and their love experience 5-3rd and last part is written by me by imagination..whatever i felt in this tricky situation. I only wanted to be justified with my story characters, I believe that love is a feeling not a business where u have to think about profit and loss,In love every loss gives gain and every gain has its loss J Think deeply.u will also realize it J 5-few of my frnds said story is TOO long ..OK I agree it …but I would like to tell u that story have too many pauses . Try to feel it with every line break… This is not a history…where I have to write in continuation… Anyways Thanks for your PATIENCE while reading this STORY 6-story is blended with shayris and narrations…thatsy it becomes lengthy 7-I m a beginner in story writing. I was very confused, how to put it in story form.so I adopted this method And it was easy for me to write in form of pages of diary. As I have already told u all that it is blend of truth and imagination 8-Last but not least I wish that -characters of this story may live a happy life A STORY FIRST TIME IN MY LYF I M TRYING TO WRITE A STORY I M SORRY MAIN CONTENT IS IN CAPITAL LETTER WHICH MAY CREATE PROBLEMS FOR READERS… AND STORY IS LIL LONG I KNOW AS NO ONE WILL COME AGAIN TO READ THE NEXT PART SO THATSY STORY IS IN SINGLE PART NO WAITING FOR 2nd -3rd PART J I KNOW I HAVE NOT WRITTEN A GOOD STORY… THEIR ARE SO MANY LOOPHOLES BUT WHAT TO DO NOW J STORY IS IN LECTURE STYLE Story is about a girl and a boy they liked each other… But they dont tell each other that they want to spend life forever After few years of relationship One day the guy Tell To her friend, that his parents has chosen a bride for him Later both of them celebrate that big moment However later on circumstance change and both of them get to know that they love each other from years But nothing can happen now Both of then r sensible and intelligent and they know that now they have to move on their respective way of life But after the wedding both of them keep on missing each other, however now they talk occasionally After few days of wedding, one day boy give hints to her friend that he is uncomfortable with his wife …life is changing too fast after wedding he is facing so many liabilities..Adjustment problems etc. After hearing these things girl feels disturbed Girl often pen few word in his diary whenever she miss her friend (Which she mailed him one day) So here are the pages of girls life What she was feeling and what she does after that TO YOU HI, HOW R U I M FINE, DAY WAS QUITE BUSY… N I MISSED U ISN’T LAMHE JUDDAI KE BEKARAAR KARTE HAI HALAT MERE MUJHE LACHAAR KARTE HAI ANKHE MERI KABHI PADH KAR DEKH HUM KHUD KAISE KAHE KI HUM APKO KITNA YAD KARTE HAI 11 JAN/ 9:58-10:14 PM I AM AWARE ABOUT EVERY THING, HOW AND WHAT CHANGES HAVE TAKEN PLACE IN MY LIFE, I KNOW ALL THESE HAVE MADE THAT I WILL NOT CALL YOU ,
SOME FACTS ABOUT THIS STORY:
10 JAN/ 9:06PM -9:12 PM
I THINK NOW ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO TALK EVERYTHING ON MOBILE DUE TO SEVERAL REASONS AS BILLS OF MOB, MY OFFICE TIME AND YOUR OFFICE TIME CLASH, AND ALTHOUGH, WHEN BOTH OF US ARE FREE WE CANT TALK OR CHAT BECAUSE WE ALSO HAVE OUR SOCIAL CIRCLE, WHICH IS ALSO VERY IMPORTANT IN OUR LIFE AND THERE ARE ALSO SOME IMPORTANT PEOPLE
WHICH MEANT AS A NEED IN OUR LIFE AND WE CANT LIVE WITHOUT THEM
MY LIFE…..
I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE ON ABOVE BLANK SPACE
I FEEL SOMETIME VERY GOOD AND SOMETIME I GET TENSE WHEN I THINK OVER IT…
WHEN I FEEL SOMETHING GOOD OR LIKE TO SHARE ANYTHING I WANT TO CALL U , ALTHOUGH I HAVE MADE PROMISES WITH MY SELF
BUT….
AND AFTER CALLING
IF I TALK TO U WHATEVER I WANT TO SHARE
I FEEL GREAT BUT
IF I HAVEN’T TALKED ABOUT THE MATTERS ON WHICH I WANT TO TALK
OR SOMEONE HAS DISTURBED ME OR U
OR BOTH OF US CANT TALK DUE ANY OTHER PROBLEM,
I FEEL BAD
AFTER ENDING THE CALL
I ALWAYS DECIDE NEITHER TO CALL U NOR TO SHARE THAT ANY MATTER WITH U BECAUSE
AFTER THAT I REALIZE THAT U HAVE YOUR OWN LIFE AND I CANT SUPERIMPOSE ANYTHING ON U AND
I DON’T WANT TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS
AND THEN I DONT EXPECT THAT U CALL ME & CHAT WITH ME OR ANYTHING ELSE
I KNOW YOU HAVE SO MANY LIABILITIES AND RESPONSIBILITIES WHICH IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN ANY THING ELSE AND
I DON’T WANT ANY OF THEM DISTURBED DUE TO ME OR MY ANY
ACTIVITY
I CANT LIVE WITH THIS BLAME THAT I DISTURBED OR I CREATED ANY PROBLEM
ZINDAGI ME KUCH NAA MILA TOH KYA GAM HAI
TUMAHARI DOSTI JO MILI YE KYA KAM HAI
AAPKE DIL ME EK CHOTI SI JAGAH JO PAI HAI
WO JAGAH TAJMAHAL SE KYA KAM HAI
13 JAN/10:32-10.58PM
YEHI WAFA KA SILA HAI TOH KOI BAT NAHI
YE DARD TUMNE DIYA HAI TOH KOI BAAT NAHI
YEHI BAHUT HAI KI TUM DEKHTE HO SAAHIL SE
JO HUM DUB RAHE HAI TOH KOI BAAT NAHI
MUJHE NAHI PATA MEIN YE SAB KYU LIKH RAHI HOON JABKI JANTI HOON KI IN KABHI TUMSEY YEH SAB BAATEIN KAHUNGI TOH SHAYAD TUM AN-SUNA KARNEY KI KOSIS KAROGEY AUR, TUMHEY PHIR THOHDI SYMPHATHY HO JAYEGI, YA PHIR MUJHE DAANTOGE AUR SAMJAOGE AUR MEIN SAMAJH JAUNGI YA PHIR SORRY BOLOGE KI -SORRY BAT NAHI KAR PATA TUMSEY
18 JAN /1:02-, 1:05 AM
DOSTI TOH CHEEZ HAI BAS EHSAAS KI
PASS HOTE TOH MANZAR HI KYA HOTA
DOOR SE HI KHABAR HAI HUME AAPKE HAR SAANS KI
KAHI PADHA THA…
20 JAN /9.50-10:06 PM
TUM NA MILO TO GILA NAHI
JO MIL JAO TO SHIKWA NAHI
PYAR KI HAD TAK CHAHO YE TAMANNA HAI
JO NA CHAHO TOH KOI SHIKAYAT BHI NAHI
ISS SHAYARI K BAAD AUR KUC
AAGE KUCH LIKHNE KI HIMMAT NAHI HO RAHI HAI
KAL OFFICE K KAAM SEY OUT OF CITY JAA RAHI HOON
KUCH ACHAA NAHI LAG RAHA HAI YAHA
JAANTE HO LAPPY ME KAUN SAA GAANA CHAL RAHA HAI
HUM BHOOL GAYE RE HAR BAAT MAGAR TERA PYAAR NAHI BHULE
GOODNIGHT
TAKE CARE
2 7 JAN / 10.46 -11.05PM
HELLO…
JANTE HO TUMHE SHAAM SE HI CALL KARNE KO MANN KAR RAHA HAI PAR
NAHI KIYA
, BAHUT KUCH LIKHNE WALI THI AAJ MAIN
PAR AB MANN NAHI KAR RAHA HAI,
BAHUT SAARI BAATE THI BATANE KO,
BAHUT SARI SHIKAYAATE THI,
BAHUT KUCH THA LIKHNE KO PAR AB NAHI
31 JAN/ 5.09-6:34PM
FINALLY THURSDAY SE KHUD PAR CONTROL KARTE- KARTE AAKHIR SUNDAY KO MEIN NE CALL KAR HI DIYA
JAB MEIN AKELE MAGGI BANA RAHI THI TO PURANI BAATE YAAD AA GAYI
PATA NAHI KYUN MUJHE AISA LAG RAHA THA KI TUM PARESHAAN HO
AND FINAALY I CALLED
DO BAAR TO TUMAHARE CELL PAR CALL NAHI LAGI
SHYAD NETWORK BHI BAT NAHI KARNEY DENA CHAHTA '.
BUT AFTER SOME TIME I AGAIN CALLED U,
U PICKED UP AND SAID HELLO HELLO, KOUN HAI
I THINK OVER THIS THAT WHO AM I WHOLE DAY
AND FINALLY I TOLD MYSELF THAT I AM YOUR FRIEND
HOWEVER I WAS NOT SATISFIED
ACTUALLY I AM NOTHING
YES I AM NOTHING
ANYWAYS I AGAIN CALLED U IN EVENING AND AFTER MAKING NUMBER OF EFFORT I TALKED TO YOU,
IT WAS NICE
YOU KNOW GIRLS HAVE A PROBLEM THEY DOESNT REMEMBER THOSE MATTERS WHICH IS
IMPORTANT BUT THEY REMEMBER MANY UNNECESSARY THING AS I REMEMBER ALL THAT
DAYS, DATE AND MATTER WHICH IS RELATED TO YOU
NOW DONT SMILE ON IT J
DEKHO AWAAZ DEKAR PASS APNE HI PAAOGE
AAOGE TANHA PAR TANHA NAA JAAOGE
DUR REHKAAR BHI HAI TUMHI PAR NAZAR
THAM LENGE HAATH JAB BHI THOKAR KHAOGE
TODAY U TOLD U R FACING LOTS OF ADJUSTMENT PROBLEMS
AND NOW I WAS DISTURBED
I WANT TO TELL U THAT
DEAR WHATEVER HAPPENED IN YOUR LIFE, TILL MEETING ME,
FORGET ALL THAT
DONT REMEMBER THEM NOW
AND DONT DARE TO MAKE COMPARISONS
BCOS EVERYONE HAS SOME GOOD QUALITIES AND ALSO BAD TRAITS AND
IF U LOVE AND LIKE SOMEONE U HAVE TO ACCEPT BOTH OF THE QUALITIES OF
HER NATURE.
SO MANY PEOPLE CAME IN OUR LIFE FROM BIRTH TO DEATH-MOM,
DAD,BROTHER ,SISTER ,UNCLE ,AUNT ,G FAT-MOTHER,FRIENDS ,
TEACHER,LOVER, WIFE , HUSBAND,IN LAWS , SON ,DAUGHTER AND SO MANY PEOPLE THE LIST DOSENT END HERE ,
THERE ARE ALSO SOME PEOPLE WITH WHOM THERE IS NO RELATION LIKE
U
N
ME
OR
WE CAN SAY WE CANT GIVE ANY NAME TO FEW RELATIONS
PPL CAME IN OUR LIFE SUDDENLY OR WE CAN SAY ACCIDENTALLY AND AFFECTS OUR LIFE OUR THOUGHTS AND ONE DAY SOME OF THEM GO FAR FROM US AND
WE CANT STOP THEM DUE TO SEVERAL REASONS
BUT
THEIR SWEET SOUR MEMORIES REMAINS FOREVER
SOMETIME WE MISS THEM AND SEARCH THEIR COMPANY AND NEED THEM.
BADE AJEEB HAI YE ZINDAGI MODH
KUCH ANJANE RAAH ME MIL JAATE HAI
MILNE KI KHUSHI DE NAA DE
BHICHCDNE KA GAM ZAROOR DE JAATE HAI
AND MOSTLY GET FAILED TO FOUND THEM, THEN WE REALIZE THEIR IMPORTANCE THAT HOW MUCH WE NEED THEM IN OUR LIFE AND
THEN WE NEED SOMEONE WHO CAN HELP US AND AT, THAT TIME THE
RELATIONS WHICH ARE NEAR
THEY HELP US,
THEN WE UNDERSTAND THEIR IMPORTANCE,
RELATION NEED TIME AND CARE TO DEVELOP
1 FEB /7:33- 8:15PM
SO MY DEAR FRIEND UNDERSTAND THE IMPORTANCE OF THE RELATIONS WHICH ARE NEAR TO U,
THE RELATION WHICH IS NEAR TO U MAKE THEM BEAUTIFUL SO THAT,
WHEN U WANT THEM… THEY ARE WITH YOU,
DO WHATEVER, THEY NEED
FULFILL THERE ALL WISHES,
MAKE THEM HAPPY AND
I AM SURE U WILL GET MORE THEN U HAVE GIVEN THEM,
YES THERE MAY BE MANY PROBLEMS IN THIS WAY
BUT YOU CAN DO IT,
EVERY PROBLEM HAS A SOLUTION
U HAVE TO ONLY SEARCH IT AND ALWAYS REMEMBER THAT IF
GOD HAS CREATED ANY PROBLEM, HE HAS MADE A SOLUTION TOO,
U KNOWS IF GIRLS ARE KNOWN FOR THERE LOVE…
THEN MEN ARE KNOWN FOR THERE CARE
SO DEAR THE RELATION WHICH IS NEAR TO YOU,
GIVE THEM IMPORTANCE AND TIME AND CARE AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE
THIS IS NOT NECESSARY THAT YOU GIVE EXPENSIVE GIFTS, AND GO FOR LONG DRIVES
I THINK THE PLEASURE WHICH WE FEEL IN SMALL JOYS IN OUR DAILY LIFE ROUTINE
MAKE OUR LIFE MORE BEAUTIFUL THEN ANYTHING ELSE,
SO STOLE THESE MOMENTS FROM YOUR LIFE.
3 FEB /4:55- 5:30PM
YOU KNOW A GIRL LEAVE HIS BIG , LOVING AND CARING FAMILY FOR A SINGLE PERSON , MAKE SO MANY COMPROMISES ,CHANGE HIS BEHAVIOR , ATTITUDE AND LIFE STYLE ONLY BECAUSE
SHE KNOW THAT NOW HIS HUBBY IS HIS WHOLE N SOUL
HE IS THE ONLY PERSON IN WHOLE WORLD WHO WILL GIVE LOVE , CARE AND TIME MORE THEN SHE HAS RECEIVED IN 25 YEARS THAT S WHY SOME TIME
WO KUCH ZYAADA ADHIKAAR JAMAATI HAI J
4 FEB/ 5:21-5:40
MUJHEN LAGTA HAI KI HUM APNE RELATIONSHIP PAR FULLSTOP LAGA DENA CHAIYE YAHI SHAYAD HUM SABKE LIYE ACHAA HOGA
TUM SHAYAD YE KABHI KEH NAHI KEH PAOGE ISLIYE MUJHE YE KEHNA PADH RAHA HAI ,
WAISE BHI I WILL BE NEVER HAPPY
IF I WILL HURT SOMEONE INTENTIONALLY OR UNINTENTIONALLY/
WAISE SE BHI TUMHARI LIFE ME MAIN GALTI SE AAYI THI AUR
AB AUR GALTIYA NAHI KARNA CHATI HOON
5 FEB /8:15-9.0
JANTE HO AGAR MEIN KISI KE SATH BURA KARTI HOON JANE ANJANE ME TOH MUJHE BAHUT JALDI HI AUR BADHI SAJAA MILTI
SO NOW I M BEHAVING LIKE A SELFISH GIRL
FORGET EVERYTHING BETWEEN US
TODAY EVENING ME M LEAVING FOR…
AUSTRIA
WHEN U WILL BE READING….
THIS MAIL I WILL BE VERY FAR AWAY FROM
I WILL BE ALWAYS YOUR GOOD FRIEND J
TANHAI HAI PHIR BHI MAIN BEBAS NAHI HU SAJNA
TERI YADIEN JO MERE NAS NAS MEIN HAI
MALUM NAHI HAI MERE DIL KI YEH BAATEIN TUJHKO
PHIR BHI MURJHAI SI EK KHWAISH BHI HAI
ZINDAGI K KISI MODH SEY GUJAR TEY
MIL JAYE TU TOH MAIN KEH DU TUJHEY
JAANIYE
MERE AANKHO KI TU HAI ROSHNI
JAANIYE…
TERI MOHABBAT KI MAIN HU ROSHANI
JAANIYE
AUR HAA
MUJHE TUMSE KOI SHIKAYAT NAHI HAI
BYE
N
TAKE CARE
J
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