Safar me dhoop to hogi, jo chal sako to chalo
Safar me dhoop to hogi, jo chal sako to chalo
Sabhi haiN bheeD meiN tum bhee nikal sako to chalo
Kisi ke waaste raaheN kahan badalti hai
Tum apne aap ko khud hi badal sako to chalo
Yahan kisi ko koi raasta nahin deta
MuJhe gira ke agar tum sambhal sako to chalo
Yahi hai zindagi kuch khwaab chand ummeedeN
Inhi khilonoN se tum bhee bahal sako to chalo
- Nida Fazil
bahut khubsurat lines. Infact full of truth and very inspirational lines. mind blowing.
verrrrrrrrrrrry nice
very beautiful post Farhan..thank you……..http://blogs.rediff.com/jennysdiary/
very beautiful post Farhan..thank you……..http://blogs.rediff.com/jennysdiary/
bohot khoob ………
Probably dis one is the poem which has got prctcl sense to it n depicts real wrld…$
p.s.I added a new post plz do cmmnt,here is teh link
http://blogs.rediff.com/chandarshi/
superb….very philosophical and realistic too…
Liked it a lot
what a sweet nazm. i like friend thanks for sharing.
Beautiful poem with beautiful words….
thanx for sharing such a sweet nazm
subhanallah……….
Nice creation. Superb expression.
EXCELLENT….
Nida Fazli saheb ki rachna par koi comment toba toba.
Hi!!!
Bahut hi sundar rachna………….
bahut hi sundar panktiya :-
“Yahan kisi ko koi raasta nahin deta….
MuJhe gira ke agar tum sambhal sako to chalo”
nida fazli sahab…..simply superb…!
bahut khub…………………havea nice time farhan……thanx