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रचना:-मनीषा
directionless?? so beautifuly you have conveyed your feelings.you are sure to go a long distaaaaaaaaance.. rashtay khud ba khud ban jatey haen, bus aap to kadam uthatay chaliay….
dushman maray ta khushi na kariay,tay sajna vi mar jaana…khingar tay din aaya mohamada eh akhir nu dub jaana…..
very good from dil se
VERY BEAUTIFUL
HEARTTOUCHING LINES
THANKS FOR SHARING.
Manisha sundar kavitha, Aap aise likthe raho hame bahuth khoob lagaraha hai. Hamara message aap ko milgaya rahega. My aap ka Abhinadan kartha Hom
it was nice………..
Very beautiful poem. Aapke under ka dar bhi chupa hai aur aapke under ki lekhika bhi. Keep it up. Ham sabhi logo ki shubhkamnayen aapke sath hain….hum aapko encourage karte rahenge…..aapko aapki manjil tak pahuchane mei…
its a very depth creation very nice poettery. thanks for sharing with us.
its a very depth creation very good poetry. thanks for sharing with us.
wah wah,,,,,,,bahut khub
kya dil ki bate kahi hai aapne.
AAj Ka Yuva vastav meim Dishahin hota ja raha hai.Har Yuva ko shuru se hi Apni Disha choose karne ki jarurat hai.
gum die mukhtashar kitna nazuk hai dil ye na janna! hai hai re jalim jamana!
gum die mukhtashar kitna nazuk hai dil ye na janna! hai hai re jalim jamana!
gum die mukhtashar kitna nazuk hai dil ye na janna! hai hai re jalim jamana!
wonder poem
Very Very very nice…Congratulltaions Manisha… This is very nice art… kya bat hai… words like short for write here…
good yaar mast hai kaha se aisa likhti ho
how are you?
bahut sunder abhivyakti…..
Manisha, I don’t know why rediff took so much time to inform me about so touchy expressions of love…excellently narrated by you.
I would request you to mail me in future so that I get pleasure from your writing as soon as it posted.
Thanks
Arup Dasgupta Ahmedabad ardphk@rediffmail.com
Mann ko bhav vibhor karne wali ek sundar sateek rachna. Thank you Manisha di.
Nice wordings …
Badi hi atmiyata liye bahut hi kam shabdon mein dil ki gayrahi ko chhuti sundar kavita.
Just a heart touching small poem but with a great depth.
Bada hi marmik shabdon mein ek chhoti si kavjta jo gagar mein sagar ki tarah hai. Dhanyavaad Manisha ji.
Bade hi marmik bhavo se utplavit yah kavita chhoti hai magar gagar mein sagar samete hue hai
Bade hi marmik bhavo se utplavit yah kavita chhoti hai magar gagar mein sagar samete hue hai
Bade hi marmik bhavo se utplavit yah kavita chhoti hai magar gagar mein sagar samete hue hai
U r very Emmotional,Manisha….!!
dost man gaye yaar kya likha he sidha dil me utar jaye.
it’s nice but why r u so sad? is something wrong ?
deeshahin… very nice… 
When you are all alone and don’t know what to do…??
The memory of Love will bring you through….!!!
(From a song of country singer - John Denver)
Manisha… “Dishahin” is very touchy..full of feelings.
Sanjay
nice lines as always…frm heart…beautiful pic…. thannks 4 the lovely comments..tc $$
manisha….nicely written….
tk cr
khamoshi ki zubaan ban gaye ye shabd bina aawaaz.. bahut khoob
very nicely expressed..
outstanding lines…and nicely presented with a beautiful pic
Sumtimes loneliness speaks louder than words……..very well expressed…..hope you find the path and soul….god bless…
Regards..
Raj MISHRA
very nice immotional feelings which is absolutely true.thanks for sharing.
है कभी रास्ता,कभी मंझिल सी,
कभी कदमों मे जमी सी जिंदगी.
कभी एक मोड,कभी ढलान सी,
कभी उलझे दौराहे सी जिंदगी.
कभी खंडित आशाओं से सिसकति सी,
कभी उन्हीं आशाओं से पली सी जिंदगी.
हर सांसो से सिल रही सी कभी,
कभी लम्हों में बटीं सी जिंदगी.
समय के दिये झख्मों,सवालों से क्षुब्ध सी,
कभी खुद से झिझकती सी जिंदगी.
कभी लगती पल पल पेह्चानी सी उसकी,
पर कभी लगती बेगानों सी जिंदगी.
-मनीषा
Hi Manisha I went through your blog.It seems u r too upset dr.Why is it so? Your poems r very sweet enough,but it has got the… (what can I say,there is not any appropriate words that I’m getting to express my feelings for u).
But your poems r really n really lovely.-Amit
pal pal rengti jindagi…bahut sunder laine prastut ki hain aapne jindagi ki….
zindagi ke anginat rang jaane kitne roop..kabhi khilkhilaati chahakti hui si to kabhi jalaati tez dhoop..
I have read your poems all are good…….nice collection good feeling nicelly written nice presentation very touchy tx 4 sharing.
jindagi ke alag alag arthon ko behatareen tarike se samjhaati ek utkrsht rachna…
can u give me answer of this question plzzz .. hum friend kyu banate he..? hope u reply me… thnks
Dear Minisha Life is full of do raha only ,,, good posting ,,, Dileep
lovely pom
beautiful poem….हर सांसो से सिल रही सी कभी,कभी लम्हों में बटीं सी जिंदगी….
waah kya baat hai…..!!!!!!!!!
KYA KHUB HAI YE ZINDGI
Very nive..very sweet
this poem has touch my heart……………………………….
कभी लगती पल पल पेह्चानी सी उसकी,
पर कभी लगती बेगानों सी जिंदगी………Very nice …
“Samay ke diye jakmon se, sawaalon se khubdh jindagi, kabhi khud se jhijhakti jindagi ……. ” too good manisha…. nice to read ur post
SACH HAI, ITS TRUE WITH MOST OF US
dourahe si zindagi…bahout sach kaha hai aapne……
dourahe si zindagi…bahout sach kaha hai aapne……
wow………..Zindagi ek safar hai suhana…………..yahan kal kya ho kisne jana……..
just too good poem……….$
Very nice.
कभी खंडित आशाओं से सिसकति सी,
कभी उन्हीं आशाओं से पली सी जिंदगी…….nice line
Its a nice poem and you have written in Hindi thats a plus point. Why you have stopped writing in gujarati???? awaitng your comments on my iland.
है कभी रास्ता,कभी मंझिल सी,
कभी कदमों मे जमी सी जिंदगी
strangely familiar and floating.
best wishes for future posts.
Manishaji aap ne mere barai mai likha ho aisa lagta hai…………….
Pal Pal marne ke baad bhi mai jindahu
Hii manisha.. bahtu hi sahi likha he… nice one.. true…
beautifull my dear frnd Manisha……….greatly expressed …..nice poem ………..beautifully written…….my frnd………keep it up……..htnx for sharing……….my best wishes………………
Manisha,
Very nice. PLease visit me at iLand..or even better at my blog on google which is a little more developed.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Regards,
Carl
All stanza of your portry shows phylosophy of life. However, optimistic stanza- ”Kabhi khandit ……….pali si jindagi.” makes this poetry viable.
Kabhi ek mod ..kabhi dhalaan see jindagi……Very nice Manisha
kabhi kisi se milati to kabhi pal mein itna door le jati ye jindagi. nice compose.
tej have k jhokon se aati bayar ko batai ye jindgi. jaroor aayga hamari aapki jindgi me or vo hava ka joonka jindgi ka rukh badal dega .sach we should be optimistic about life. har line vajandar he, khoobsurt panktikyo ke leye sadhuvad..
loved each line…written with grt elegance.
हर सांसो से सिल रही सी कभी,कभी लम्हों में बटीं सी जिंदगी……………..
Lovely lines…….
bahut sunder lika hai apne…jindagi ki ek achchhi paribhasha…
bhout khoob likha aapne - हर सांसो से सिल रही सी कभी,
कभी लम्हों में बटीं सी जिंदगी.
kitni pyari kavita teri, har pankti ke bhav nirale,
Jindagi par likhne wale,Jindagi ke ha dhang nirale.
Ginti kar ke thak gayoge is ka koi ant nahi hai,
Ulta sidha jo bhi socho naye nirale rang yahi hein.
What a nice poem apart from beautiful picture! Very good expression.
Nice poem. Thnx 4 sharing……….SURYAKIRAN
life is like that only, ups nd down…………
well written…………2lines r from my side…jindagi kaisi hai paheli kabhi to hasaye kabhi ye rulaaye……………
very true……..thanx for sharing.
ye jo zindagi hai ek dastan hai, kab hoga kya ye khabar kahan hai……………behad khoobsurat andaz-e-bayan zindagi ka….
चलो अच्छा हुआ जो कोइ चल दिया…
खुद से बन बैठे थे अंजान,खुद से मिल लिया.
मिटा दिया सेहरे में कुचलकर,
ना कोइ अपेक्षाओं का बोज अब है,
किसी के कदमों से सभी रास्ते तय किये थे,
खुद कि राहों कों ढूंढना शायद सिख लिया.
भितर ही भितर भटकना छोडा जबसे,
नयी नजर,नयी डगर जैसे अब है.
किसी की आंखों से जग को देखा था,
खुद की नजरों से नजारा देख लिया.
ना किसी के आने का इन्तजार अब है,
अपनी ही आहटॊं को भी सूनना भी छोड दिया.
एक पर्दा सा किये जीते थे खुद से,
खुद से कर ली नयी पेहचान, खुद से मिल लिये.
-मनीषा
भितर ही भितर भटकना छोडा जबसे,
नयी नजर,नयी डगर जैसे अब …… nai soch nai disha….. bahut sunder prerak panktiyan….bahut sunder blog..
एक पर्दा सा किये जीते थे खुद से,…………. kamaal ka likhti hain aap..!!!!!!!!! Badhai ho badhai ho…!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful…..
Khud se kar lee nayi pahchan ….. Khud se mil liye……
bahut khoob
nice
GOOD ONE
abtak ayetbar nahi hota aap ki ruswayiyo pe,
itminan itna hai ki mil gayi khoyi hui tanhayiya hame.
-rahul
loneliness can b used as a blessing .
koi na mila kabhi shabe mehphil me,
tanhayiyo ne mujhko mujhse mila diya
“B+”
abtak ayetbar nahi hota aap ki ruswayiyo pe,
itminan itna hai ki mil gayi khoyi hui tanhayiya hame.
-rahul
loneliness can b used as a blessing .
koi na mila kabhi shabe mehphil me,
tanhayiyo ne mujhko mujhse mila diya
“B+”
nice very nice thought
Bahut Achha Laga
एक पर्दा सा किये जीते थे खुद से,
खुद से कर ली नयी पेहचान, खुद से मिल लिये.
Aap Hindi aur Gujarati dono mai achha likh rahi ho !
Aap ki nayi Kavita ka intzar hai.
sunder - ati sunder
Hi MANISHA…….Bahut hi achi poem ha. Really heart touching….Have a nice day…………SURYAKIRAN
चलो अच्छा हुआ जो कोइ चल दिया…
खुद से बन बैठे थे अंजान,खुद से मिल लिया.
KYAA BAAT HE…WAAH !
heart touching poem………tum ye itana sochte kaise ho………
nice just i have visited your blog. related insert photograph is also good and saying according to poem. thanks for sharing with us manish. all the best for next one…
Ya to koi toota hua dil hai ya koi aatmasakshatkar kiye yogi.
Beautiful post. Thanks.
very good poem
very good poem
one of ur most beautiful poem with heart toucing phrases….
one of ur most beautiful poem with heart toucing phrases….
Bahoot-i-khoob soorat poem. Simply speaking wonderful. Sorry for late response, actually I was out of net for the last 10 days.
bahot khoob….nalaa-e-dil sunega kaun iss jahaan me,, sab ke sab isi marz ke mareez hai…
“Ek parda sa kiye jeete the khud se, khud se kar li nai pehchaan aur khud se mil liye”….. too good manisha….. a very expressive poem indeed
a beautiful poem……..na ab kisike aneka intazar hai ab; apane hi ahaton ko sunana chchod diya…………. this line is just superb.
किसी की आंखों से जग को देखा था,
खुद की नजरों से नजारा देख लिया….very nice poem!!!
oh…very nice lines…very nice
i am deeply down…..heart touching
Very heart touching post.
Badi hi sundar rachna par uchcharan se bachna. Kya Manisha kya baat hai.
The poetry…and the pic…both related and touching to the deep sea of feelings…THANKS
sorry for been late Manisha Dear frnd………..but i was missing a beautifull post………till now……….dear……….u hav written it with all depth………..very nice creation………….keep it up……….my best wishes in Navraatri n Durgotsav……….to U and ur whole family………all the best………….do write n visit…………………………
nice one
simple, real..true…
bahut sunder .kisi ki ankho se jag ko dekha tha,khud ki najaro se najaaraa dekh liya…………touch me a lot.THANX for sharing.
nice one…….
khud se baithe they anjaan……….beautiful lines…….regards……
ना किसी के आने का इन्तजार अब है,
अपनी ही आहटॊं को भी सूनना भी छोड दिया.
— hirday ke bahut sunder bhav likhe hai, badahi ho
good 1111111111111111
Very nice and profound… As deep as a poet can go… Regards, (Rahul)
ohh nice very nice poem…
So beautiful and touching poem………welcome back…….
VERY NICE POEM.I LIKE MOST THESE LINES
awesome……………………$
sensible, soft and one could n”t but love it.
हमनें अपने जीवन में कई “comfort zone“ बना रखें है.चाहे वो रिश्तों में हो,
कार्यक्षेत्रों में हो,
सामाजिक व्यवहार में हो,अपने विचारों या अपने व्यक्तिगत व्यवहार मेंहो.हम अपने “comfort zone“
में ही अपनी जिंदगी को समेटे रखते है…यदी आप एक दायरे मे सिमट चूके है तो जिंदगी स्थगित सी
हो जाती है,जिंदगी अपना निराला स्वरूप खो देती है,कुछ नया करने की चाह और
तडप अगर हमें
बरकरार रखनी हो तो हमें अपनी सोच के वर्तुल को विस्तृत करनाहोगा.बाहर मिलने वाली
निष्फलताओं का डर शायद हमें अपने “comfort zone” सेनिकलने नहीं देता…कुछ नया करने की चाह
तो है मन में पर साथ में असफलता कासाया…क्या करें???पर खूद पे अगर भरोसा हो,अपनी
काबिलियत पे नाज हो तोबढाओ कदमों को नयी सोच और नयी दिशाओं की ओर…
पर विश्वास करो थोडे समय
पश्चात वहां पर भी आप अपने आप कोसुविधायुक्त मेहसूस करोगे…
-मनीषा
creaet you own…comfoert zone……really a nice post
really so right
very thought provoking post…rally so riht…thanks .
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne humne life main kaafi comfort zone bana rakhe hain …. par jeevan ka aasali aanand shaayad sahi maayne main is “comfort zone” se bahar nikal kar hi uthaya jaa sakta hai … nae nae challenges face karke… nae nae ventures ko aajama… girna, uthana, phir chalna hi shaayad jeevan hai …….woh kya kahavat hai… “girte hain sah sawaar hi maaidane jung main, woh tifl kya gire jo ghutne ke bal chale”…..
you write right words but i am agree with you. if you answer take me on mishra_vivek07@rediffmail.com
i liked ur thought.
hi, good kavitri ho, aise hi likthe rahena.
ok bye
dinesh
bangalore
wonderfull write up….very thoughtfull
Manisha..very nice…bahut sahi likha hai aap ne asal me hum duniya se nahi darte balke apne aap se darte hain aur yeh dar hi hamen apne COMFORT ZONE se bahar nahi nikalne deta….is liye agar zindig me kuch karna hai to hamen thoda risk to lena hi padega kyunki….NO RISK NO GAIN……all the best
Manishaji
Sab log ne “Comfort jone” me rahane ka matalab He should have confidence on his life. should not yeald to some one which who we doesn”t know. Think twice that what dicision we take is right or wrong. Tab dhekho Poora ka poora aadmi log apne aap thumara tharah aatha hai. Jab milthe hai tho bolthi hai You are always correct.Pl go ahed aisa tharrieef karne lagatha hai
But which is the ideal one, Manisha ?…..its true, …action is life and resting is death…THANKS
hmm.. gud post manisha….i believe life ek baar hi milti hai n if v always tries to b inside our comfort zone den we are fr sure gonna leave the charm of it the best thing is to experiment wid life, knw diff people, knw their thoughts n feeling, knw wts beyond earth, knw wts after love, knw wt makes people to live with hatered….so many things to knw n v leave it just coz we wanna be inside our comfort zone……..take care
OK everyone having their own COMFORT ZONE..but can anyone live without their COMFORT ZONE? I think it is obvious bcoz we live in our own way and not we but the sorrundings construct our comfort zone..!!
I want to go to the MOON… but how ?????????????
mai aapse sehmat hun…………..par hamari asuraksha ki bhavana hamein hamara comfort zone chhodne nahin deti…………..nice post……
very realistic post.
u r very true………..
nicely expr……….
yaa Manisha ………..dear U r cent percent correct………..very imp slogan……………….nice effort…………….all the best……..thnx for sharing…….
shyad aap sahi kah rahi hain… koshish jaruru karunga……….!!!!!!!!!!
very well said manisha…… i agree with u.
Agreed..
just well said…………………..vry nice & comfortable
NICE…………………………………………..KEEP IT UP.
i agree with u ……………………………… we do make comfort zone for our sefty
bahut achcha likha hai…… achcha hai comfort zone aapka.
Haan aap theek kahti hein.
Manisha, eK prisiddh Urdu sher hai, ”Jindagi jinda dili ka nam hai murda dil kya khak jiya karte hein”. Artharth jab aadmi active hai tabhi tak jivit hai.
aapke vicharo se main shat pratishat sahmat huun……
Hello, Manisha ji………..Aapne bilkul sahi kaha, jab tak hum apne dar ko khatm kar apne comfort zone se bahar nikal kar aage nahi badhenge hame success nahi mil sakti……………..mere shabdon me…………manzil hum tak nahi aati, hame manzil tak jana padta hai………….apne raston par chalte chale jao, duniya khud tumhare raaste par aa jayegi……..
vah bahut sunder baat kahi hai apne….risk lene vala hi aage badh sakta hai…
Superb..!!
bilkul sahi farmaya - zindgi mai risk to lena hai padta hai.
yes i agree we do make comfort zone and never wanna go out of it…this is the only reason risk taking ability for we people are going down day by day…………
u r very much right Manisha…………..this is actually what i call “ZINDAGI KO JEENA”…baaki everything……..read my poem LIFE….u will get what i mean…….
“सलामत दायरों में सिमटा हुआ जीवन, जीवन से अंजान हो जाता है.”-Manisha…bahut achcha sandesh aur soch aapne is posting ke zariye baanti,aur sach kaha dayre utne hi achche jimain ghutan na mahsoos ho ,jab aisa mahsoos ho to unhe langhkar apna alag astitva banana ek sahi raah hogi ,hai na……..bahut achchi posting …..shukriya.
हद इंतजार की हमें यहां तक लाई,
हर आहट पे दिल में लौ सी जले.
ढूंढा हर कदमों के निशां में,पर
हर कदमों पे एक नई राह सी दीखे.
हर रात है जैसे उलझनों का समंदर,पर
हर रात में एक सुबह सी पले.
हो चूके बेजुबान सारे शब्द,पर
तेरी हर नझर में एक जुबां सी खुले.
तन्हाई में भी कहां तन्हा हम थे,
तेरी यादें पल पल काफिले सी चले
-मनीषा
bahut sunder kavita…
kya kahun it’’s fantastic
cute pic. …………..nice poem………………………
kitni tareef karu……..
wow…wow…wow….hum to ye hi kah sakte hain…….please hindi mein hi likhte rahiye…….
Tere yaadein pa-pal, kaafiley see chale………… Wow…..
Why are you so sad and alone?!!! You have reminded me of Keats… I read your poems… you are nothing but the CLASSICAL poet … aesthetic… poetic and fantasstic…
Very beautiful lines and well-defining picture.
very sweet and lovely poem……………..
bahut khoob manisha……. sorry for delayed comment
“Hum Bhee Dekhenge Ki Kahaan Tak Tanhaee Hai; Humne bhee Aapki Mohabbat Ki kasam Khaaee hai.”
Bahut sunder rachana hai…… . Kisi shayar ne theek hee kaha hai “Jo maza intezar mein dekha woh na vasle yar mein……. “
very nice…
Marvelous… Keep it up
Khuda kare ki kayamat ho…or wo aaye…..
Bahoot khoob likha…….Likhte rahiye…hum padte rahenge…… apki rachma ke intzar me….ek dost.
Too good manishaji….. aapki rachna bahut sundar hai ….. enjoyed reading ur post
beautifull…………….
wow wonderful…the essence of all emotions in just few lines!
lovely lines of “Tanahayi”….last 2 lines r too good………
kitni acchi aur sacchi line hai ye तन्हाई में भी कहां तन्हा हम थे,
तेरी यादें पल पल काफिले सी चले:)
wah ………. intzaar ka maza uns poochiye jinko pata hai aana kisi aor ko hai n aa unka mahboob jata hai
Intejaar pe eetni sunder rachana bahut dino ke baad padhi….”Inteha ho gayi Intejaar ki..”….THANKS
~~ lovely manisha…. very nice poem… and the pic is also too good ~~
kya baat hai……..tanhaahi main bhi ham kahaan tanha the; teri yaadon ke kaafile saath chale……………ati suunder.
Nice poem
intajar yahi jivanka kram hai
Janmke pahle make petse bahar nikalneka intajar,
Bachapan me school jane ka intajar,
Schoolme exam ka intajar,
exam ke bad result ka intjar
collage me admition ka intajar
fir shadi ke liye achhe partner ka intajar
har dam Intajar hi Intajar kar na yahi niyam hai
Aur Intajar ka maja hi kuch aur hai
Ant me Maut ka Intjar
Lekin hame yah jivan mila hai Prabhu (Ishwar) Milan ka Intajar karne ke liye wahi ham karte nahi hai
Jo ishwar ka Injar karne ki Xamta rahte hai unhe jarur Ishwar ke sath milan ho jata hai aur use yah jivan manranke 84 lakh yanike chakkar se chutkara mil jata hai
Jay ho sadguru ki
kya baat hai manisha ji…waiting is the hardest part of luv n meeting is the sweetest …hope u”ll meet ur luv soon…tc
nice poem…
Manishaji aap ki poetry bhuth kooobh very nice
hellow manisha g, its nice,hum ko intjaar rhega aapki new post ka.kisi nazar ko intzaar aaj bhi hai.thanx
very sweet poetry …………….
Hi MANISHA…….Very good & nice poem.,,,,,,,,,, SURYAKIRAN
good poetry…..
kya baat hai bahut badiya
very nice……beautiful poem………..
Fantastique. sadly Raomantic and bit mystique. Fir bhi Heroine bach jaaye vaisi meri duva hai: Kyon ki dard ka had se gujar jana ho jaata dawa hai!!!!!
Manisha…Bahut sunder kavita….MAIN AKELA KAHAN HUN RAHON ME/AAP KI YAD SATH HOTI HAI….all the best
waah kya khub kaha hai……….तन्हाई में भी कहां तन्हा हम थे,
तेरी यादें पल पल काफिले सी चले…………………… bahut khub likha hai…….. har raat me ek subah si pale………………. too good……….
तुम्हारे इंतजार की ये इन्तिहा थी
हर आहट में तुम्हारी निशानी थी..
हर लम्हा तेरे गम में बोझिल सा
हर पल जैसे कातिलाना थी…
बैरी ये रात भी चलती नही
निंद भी जैसे चिलमन पे जमी सी थी…
तेरे आने की उम्मीद बिखरती रही
पर सांसे चल रही थी,एक तसल्ली सी थी…
हर मोड पे मिल रही थी मुझे नये रूप में
जिंदगी मुझसे अजनबी सी थी…
-मनीषा
good one…bahut sunder si kavita
gr8……….abhi tak aapka blog nhi padh paya kabhi..!!!its my too much badluck……aapke sare post padhe…..amaziiingggggg
PICTURE OR POEM BOTH ARE VERY NICE
“Chalte Chalte Rah Gaye Jo, Un Sawaalon Ka Silaa; Baad Mein Sochenge Humne, Kyaa Ganwaya Kyaa Milaa.”
Har lamha tere gum se bojhil tha……. bahut kuub keep it up
uff koi jata hi kyu hai door .bful
Beautiful language and picture lovely litrature
lovely——–
I really enjoyed aap ki post ka aana!!!
Agar tum likhti ho to achha likhti ho…
jo dil se likha jata hai vo bahut hi acha likha jata hai.
nice lines, isse pata chalta hai aapke dil me kitna pyar basa hua hai, main bhi ek dost ki tarah iska hissa banan chahunga
~~ beautiful lines… lovely ~~
Behad Khubsurat lines…….par shayad aapke man ki sadgi se kam !!! hai na ……
wonderful
bahut khoobsurat
very good combination of pic n poetry..!! Bahot hi khubsurat rachana hai..!!
“हर मोड पे मिल रही थी मुझे नये रूप में, जिंदगी मुझसे अजनबी सी थी…” Nice lines of the “Dilkash” poetry, Manisha…THANKS
beautifuly written,,, touching words….
nice poem……..very beautifully written………..
very nice
good one!!
subhanallaah………. manishaji aap ki poetry k sath pic ka chayan bhi bahut hi behtarin hai……….
बहोत खुब लीखा हैं। क्या बात हैं। like it
हर मोड पे मिल रही थी मुझे नये रूप में
जिंदगी मुझसे अजनबी सी थी…
nice picture with nice poem great combo thanks for sharing
ab in hudood (limits) pe laya hai intezaar mujhe…. ke wo ab aa bhi jaye tu na aaye atbaar mujhe….
Jindagi ki yahi reet hai…haar ke baad hi jeet hai….hey gud post dear….liked it….
life changes shape with every turn n come out as winner is wt matters…
take care n enjoy
Vo mohabbat hi kya jo aasani se mil jaye,vo gham hi kya jo aankho se beh jaaye,agar mil jaaye har cheez bas sochne se,to vo dar hi kya jahah hum sar jhukaye….
hey manisha sweet and very nice post…keep it up
take care
Har ruup main muzsey mil rahi thi zindagi….magar kuuchch ajnabi si thi….. wow!!!! just too good…. bahuut hi sunder.
wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllllll poetry……………
GD MRNG.REALLY NICE POST & PICURE ALSO.
nice post
really nice pic & ur poetry is amazing…………………..really like this.
good yrr tumane to sari jindagi ki kahani in 2 line o mein kah diya…
sublime lines.
wow kya baat hai manisha…………very nice lines…………with passion………keep it up …………..
intzaar ka har meetha pal,
har pal mein aa-aa nikhara .
takti ankhon mein tha tu,
chhukar tu hawa ka ek jhonka nikla.
bahut khoob
just too good……..each nd every line…$
है धूंध से लिपटी हर राहें
खोये है,मंझिल का पता पायें कैसे?
बडी खामोश है बेबसी,
नि:शब्द है,शब्दों का पता पायें कैसे?
हर रात तेरी यादों का कहर ढाती आयी,
कातिल है अंधेरा,सुबह का पता पायें कैसे?
उलझनें रिश्तों की कुछ ऐसी पायी,
खो चूके है,अब खूद का पता पायें कैसे?
-मनीषा
“Sawaal Hain Ki Khatam Hote Nahi, Har Sawaal Ek Nayaa Sawaal Laataa Hai; Jaise Insaan Ka Insaan Se Ho Jaataa Hai, Sawaalon Ka Sawaalon Se Koi To Naataa Hai.”
aapka andaaz-e-bayaan tohra alag sa hai…bahr-haal, bahot umdah.
aapki rachnao main ek maulikta hai …..kam sabdon main jyaada asar jaisa ahsaas hota hai aapki rachnae padh kar…. touch the heart and soul of readers……. thnx for the share
shabdo ka pata paye kaise ……..wah!!!!!!!!!!!!
ap jo likhte hai unko set karke jo pitcher add karte hai wo bahut hi accha lagta hai
kitna sundar likha hai aapne… hum batayein kaise?
उलझनें रिश्तों की कुछ ऐसी पायी,
खो चूके है,अब खूद का पता पायें कैसे? Nice poetry
yr’’s is also touching ……….dil ko choo gai bass
no words to praise……..jus good$
stop for some time………..wo subah kabhi to aayegi……….nice poem Manisha……………n beautifully patched with a appreciable pic………..keep it up……………best of luck
Happy Friendship day.
Very nice its all from heart pl keep it up .
Very nice and lovely poetry….. SURYAKIRAN
very nice poetry
really wonderfully expressed expressions
nicely expressed in very few words!
lovely poetry
too good…liked it very expressive…loved 2nd and 3rd para….
u have written this very beautifully with appropriate words. it’’s just ~~awsome~~.
nice post……….
~~ too good.. lovely ~~
just beautiful …..
bahuth koob dear………….nice expression!
nice feelings………..JIDHAR DEKHU TERI TASVEER NAZAR AATI HAI
Very nice poetry MANISHA, —- “Neela Aasmaan so gaya…”
Wonderfully written…………………….Nice post
kaise…..??? Jindagi se kiye gaye behad umda sawaal…!!!!
wonderful….
Nice one….
very nicely written….ur poem is of different style..
” katil hai andhera subah ka pata paayeN kaise.” very beautiful & touching composition..
wahhhhhhhhhh kya baat hai
Atma naame Saras ni trushna jevi saras kavita!!!
This type of poems, I always want to read. Yeh kavita ki pehli line me jo subject (feelings) between the line kahi gayee hai… vo har lines me bakhubee abhivyakta ho rahi hai… ek flow hai jo kahin pe bhi tutata nahi hai. Thank you very much for sharing such a nice creation..!!
JO KADAM RAKHEGA RAH ME TO RAHANUMA HO JAYEGA .
GOOD POEM
PHOTO BAHUT ACHCHHA HE
KAVITA BHI ACHCHHI HE
good poem
Wonderful poetry…………………..
”Kaise ???” - a nice poetry ….
wat a touchy feeling poem…thanjs
bhut khub
Bahoot khoobsurat likha….
kaise…??? bahut hi badhiya likha hai aap ne……. antar ki uljan ke bhaavo ki behtarin abhivyakti hai…….. excellent……*****
what a beautiful poem……… ek ek shabd dil ko chchuuta hua.
चेहरे पे बयां अफसाने हजार दिखे,
तेरी नजरों में लुटे वो जमाने हरबार दिखे.
हर आंसु है जैसे भरा भरा,
हर आंसुओ मे तूटे वो फसाने बार बार दिखे.
हर कदमों मे जैसे कोइ राह सिमटी थी,
तेरे हर कदमों मे खोये वो चौराहे लगातार दिखे.
बुझी बुझी सी हंसी से ना छीपा पाये,
मुस्कुराने की हर कोशिश में उजडे वो लम्हे तारतार दिखे.
-मनीषा
vah..bahut sunder fasana….
“Lamhaa Lamhaa Kataraa Kataraa, Boond Boond Jaar Jaar; Har Chehre Pe Dikhenge, Tumko Afsaane Hazaar.”
awesome
awesome
Wow fantastic
vaha vaha kua dhikhe phir se unki najar me khumar dikhe…….
vaha vaha kua dhikhe phir se unki najar me khumar dikhe…….
apki likhi in lines ko ye dil bar bar padhe
nice composition…..very touchy…tx fr sharing…ur word selection is very good, n expression r right to the point
aapki likhi in lines ko , dil ye bar bar padhe….!! very nice…
so touching yet so simple.
Kya ye vakai aapne likha he…..Nice poem….
awesome
Hey..it’’s …………just …………………too gud………………………………
good writing………keep it up
hum good, gujrati ab hindi nice poem
gr8…………………..very nicely written……………….
dear manisha lovely poetry and emotional picture. what next?
tere kadamome kho ye the
vo cho rahe bar bar dhikhe ………………
galib ka ak ser yad yaya……………….
tere khuche (gali) ko jata he khayal
kyu tera vakte safay yad ya ya…………………
phiri ak tripadi …………
Great — Kya andaaz hai!!!
Wonderful poetry……………….
great lines….
Great sad poetry…very great related pic…heart blowing…
hmmmm bhuut khuub likha hai aapney….aameen
Bahut sunder panktiyan hain. Bhav bhi sunder hain. Han! ek bat aur sath mein lagi tasveer ne padhne ka maja dugna kar diya .
Amazing lines…
Kya khoob likha hai……..sach me bahot hi achha laga
बुझी बुझी सी हंसी से ना छीपा पाये,
मुस्कुराने की हर कोशिश में उजडे वो लम्हे तारतार दिखे.
Very nice Gazal. If it is yours, you must be a professional poet..!! Very nice combinations of pic & poem.
dil ki gaheraai se likhi hui kavitaa hai… bahut hi khub… welcome to iland….
Wonderful post!
yes manisha……….
very beautifull ……..teri punkteeyon mei teri gaharayee
beshumaar dikhey……………………….keep it on………….
Achhee kavita hai…….
Manisha….Bahut sunder rachna…feelings and emotions ki khubsurat abhivyakti….all the best
HIIIIIIII
NICE
POST
LAGE RAHO
welcome Manisha .. it is a very nice starting with beautiful sentiments .. direct from heart to heart.. lovely creation.
ONE: Welcome, Manishaji!!! AAP ki abhivyakti Kavyatmak aur Rachnatmak hai… I am indeed flattered, so I thank you and promise that I will try my best to read, enjoy and learn from your creations. TWO: My Blessings: You may suffer, but if you become a Conscious Soul then you shall be always Successful!!!
wow….great……….very beautiful post………
Nice poetry ….
how u write so painfull lines? great…….i can”t write like that…. very nice..
chehare pe bayaan apasaane hajaar dike,,,teri najaro me lute wo zamaane hara bhaar dike”"”……..what an intense feeling!!!!
nice expression of pain…great poem!!!
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Kahan se silha hai aisa achcha likhna? Itni nanhi si umar mei shayad dard se gehra rishta ho chala hai….
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gumsum si thi… par zindagi thi,aaj lamhe yun na bante hote…
kaash ki har lamhe me hum tera saath like paate…..
Sorry came after a long time…….and this was the first one i read…….tooo touching,thnx
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sad….yet nice…frm heart ……$
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Khwabon ke malbon ko yoon naa dhote hote … poignant expression, Manisha…
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MANISHA..
Aapki nai dard bhari rachna padne ko mili..
Milna to tha hi…zindagi ki saari khusiya sirf milne se hi judi hai…kyun shabd sayad dukh ko yaad dilata hai…so forget the kyun…KEEP SKILING..
parbat singh Rathore
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dard bhari hai