चल दिए छोड के हमे यादो के काफ़िले के सहारे,
जाएँ कहाँ खडे है दिशाहीन से…
आप ही राह थे मेरी,आप ही थे हमराह,
आप ही थे रूह की तृप्ति मेरी,आप ही से थी प्यास.
लग रहे सब रास्ते अजनबी से…
जाएँ कहाँ खडे है दिशाहीन से…
-मनीषा
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दिशाहीन
manisha
चल दिए छोड के हमे यादो के काफ़िले के सहारे,
जाएँ कहाँ खडे है दिशाहीन से…
आप ही राह थे मेरी,आप ही थे हमराह,
आप ही थे रूह की तृप्ति मेरी,आप ही से थी प्यास.
लग रहे सब रास्ते अजनबी से…
जाएँ कहाँ खडे है दिशाहीन से…
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INDER VIG Permalink
directionless?? so beautifuly you have conveyed your feelings.you are sure to go a long distaaaaaaaaance.. rashtay khud ba khud ban jatey haen, bus aap to kadam uthatay chaliay….
dushman maray ta khushi na kariay,tay sajna vi mar jaana…khingar tay din aaya mohamada eh akhir nu dub jaana…..
wilasm Permalink
very good from dil se
kisserimran Permalink
VERY BEAUTIFUL
HEARTTOUCHING LINES
THANKS FOR SHARING.
gangaiah kumbaiah Permalink
Manisha sundar kavitha, Aap aise likthe raho hame bahuth khoob lagaraha hai. Hamara message aap ko milgaya rahega. My aap ka Abhinadan kartha Hom
Vivek Permalink
it was nice………..
Shatrughna Singh Permalink
Very beautiful poem. Aapke under ka dar bhi chupa hai aur aapke under ki lekhika bhi. Keep it up. Ham sabhi logo ki shubhkamnayen aapke sath hain….hum aapko encourage karte rahenge…..aapko aapki manjil tak pahuchane mei…
mkamal29@rediffmail.com Permalink
its a very depth creation very nice poettery. thanks for sharing with us.
mkamal29@rediffmail.com Permalink
its a very depth creation very good poetry. thanks for sharing with us.
chetan lakhani Permalink
wah wah,,,,,,,bahut khub
kya dil ki bate kahi hai aapne.
Sushil Permalink
AAj Ka Yuva vastav meim Dishahin hota ja raha hai.Har Yuva ko shuru se hi Apni Disha choose karne ki jarurat hai.
Ravinesh Kumar Permalink
gum die mukhtashar kitna nazuk hai dil ye na janna! hai hai re jalim jamana!
Ravinesh Kumar Permalink
gum die mukhtashar kitna nazuk hai dil ye na janna! hai hai re jalim jamana!
Ravinesh Kumar Permalink
gum die mukhtashar kitna nazuk hai dil ye na janna! hai hai re jalim jamana!
mohd ansari Permalink
wonder poem
Sudhir Deore Permalink
Very Very very nice…Congratulltaions Manisha… This is very nice art… kya bat hai… words like short for write here…
amarsingh Permalink
good yaar mast hai kaha se aisa likhti ho
how are you?
Shivendra Singh Permalink
bahut sunder abhivyakti…..
Arup Dasgupta Permalink
Manisha, I don’t know why rediff took so much time to inform me about so touchy expressions of love…excellently narrated by you.
I would request you to mail me in future so that I get pleasure from your writing as soon as it posted.
Thanks
Arup Dasgupta Ahmedabad ardphk@rediffmail.com
Swati Garg Permalink
Mann ko bhav vibhor karne wali ek sundar sateek rachna. Thank you Manisha di.
keshav singhal Permalink
Nice wordings …
sureshchandra Gupta Permalink
Badi hi atmiyata liye bahut hi kam shabdon mein dil ki gayrahi ko chhuti sundar kavita.
Pawan Agrawal Permalink
Just a heart touching small poem but with a great depth.
Pawan Agrawal Permalink
Bada hi marmik shabdon mein ek chhoti si kavjta jo gagar mein sagar ki tarah hai. Dhanyavaad Manisha ji.
Pawan Agrawal Permalink
Bade hi marmik bhavo se utplavit yah kavita chhoti hai magar gagar mein sagar samete hue hai
Pawan Agrawal Permalink
Bade hi marmik bhavo se utplavit yah kavita chhoti hai magar gagar mein sagar samete hue hai
Pawan Agrawal Permalink
Bade hi marmik bhavo se utplavit yah kavita chhoti hai magar gagar mein sagar samete hue hai
StarGalaxy Permalink
U r very Emmotional,Manisha….!!
nilesh sagathia Permalink
dost man gaye yaar kya likha he sidha dil me utar jaye.
imcool_i4usam Permalink
it’s nice but why r u so sad? is something wrong ?
Khyati Shah Permalink
deeshahin… very nice…
Sanjay Pattani Permalink
When you are all alone and don’t know what to do…??
The memory of Love will bring you through….!!!
(From a song of country singer - John Denver)
Manisha… “Dishahin” is very touchy..full of feelings.
Sanjay
Greshma Permalink
nice lines as always…frm heart…beautiful pic…. thannks 4 the lovely comments..tc $$
Kirtan Vegad Permalink
manisha….nicely written….
tk cr
lata ojha Permalink
khamoshi ki zubaan ban gaye ye shabd bina aawaaz.. bahut khoob
Kumar Ahuja Permalink
very nicely expressed..
gopigoswami Permalink
outstanding lines…and nicely presented with a beautiful pic
Raj Mishra Permalink
Sumtimes loneliness speaks louder than words……..very well expressed…..hope you find the path and soul….god bless…
Regards..
Raj MISHRA
Darshan Patil Permalink
very nice immotional feelings which is absolutely true.thanks for sharing.