Meethi uljhan. . .
Yeh kaisi meethi uljhan hai ?
Dhoop tumhari yaad dilaati,
Chhanw tumhari hi baaten hai.n,
Aankhe ek jhalak ko pyaasi,
Bhule nahi.n bhula paate hai.n,
Itnaa kyon mohit yeh mann hai !
Tumse milane ko aatur kyon,
Mera rom rom rahataa hai,
Pyaar sahi hai , paap nahin hai,
Kyon mera antar kahataa hai,
Zidd hai ya diwanaapan hai !!
Mitti ki saundhi khushaboo si,
Ya puja ki jhanjhar jaisi,
Rimjhim rimjhim barakhaa ho,
Tum bahati nadiya ke sur si,
Tum main meraa brundawan hai !!!
PRAVEEN SHARMA
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– July 30, 2008
Meethi uljhan. . .
Yeh kaisi meethi uljhan hai ?
Dhoop tumhari yaad dilaati,
Chhanw tumhari hi baaten hai.n,
Aankhe ek jhalak ko pyaasi,
Bhule nahi.n bhula paate hai.n,
Itnaa kyon mohit yeh mann hai !
Tumse milane ko aatur kyon,
Mera rom rom rahataa hai,
Pyaar sahi hai , paap nahin hai,
Kyon mera antar kahataa hai,
Zidd hai ya diwanaapan hai !!
Mitti ki saundhi khushaboo si,
Ya puja ki jhanjhar jaisi,
Rimjhim rimjhim barakhaa ho,
Tum bahati nadiya ke sur si,
Tum main meraa brundawan hai !!!
PRAVEEN SHARMA
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– July 30, 2008
meethi uljhan……..after completing the poem the word which stucks my mind is “PURE”……..really very nice…..keep writting…( swati)
This was a great read…Truly enjoyed this one.
Nice poetry.
Behtareen…
kya andaz hai, aapki shhayari me kuch roohani baat hai very nice
great words yaar. Stylish Hindi used.
aapkee yaad wakai men yaad aane layak hai ismen koi do ray nahee.
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kaveeta ..laajavaab…ak sher hai”hum dilli bhi ghum aae aur lahohour bhi…per yaar teri gali teri gali hai..
Very nice style poetry.. and nice poetry…
lovely..sweet soothing words….
bahoot khoob praveen ji
again its good
nice.
good:-)
nice & sweet……
Very Sweet…..
really sweet..
nice…