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Hi ! hearty invitation to visit my blog and read the recent post and share your valuable views……..Have nice time….
Regards…
Raj MISHRA
Man: Sir, my wife is missing.
Postman: Yeh post office hai, police station nahi.
Man: Kya karu? Kahan jau? Sala Khushi k maare kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha.
the mystery deepens!
Will you like to be my friend?
kisse milta hai mera blog?? mere se to mil nhi sakta kyunki apni hakeekat to mai bahut kam logo ko dikhati hu! shayad soloman ke ilawa koi guess bhi nahi kar sakta! woh to……. anyway aapke khyaal mei yeh gumshuda ki koi pehchaan hai? shukriya is hoslaafzai ke liye…mujhe mujhse mila do!! pleasez!kho gayi hu mai…….hamsafar hu un gum lasho ki!
All said, some times I get curious about my own writing. I have a tendency to watch myself like a third person. Some times I get touched.. This story is one of his own… Completely original, but somewhere I feel this was not written by me… Can we separate one’s emotions from one’s soul? If we do, then I think we reach a similar state… Anyways, I think you got a glimpse what comes when you make me think?
But thank you for asking.. Regards, (Rahul)
Also, there is a concept which came to me from somewhere. In order to reach to the Sun, Sky grew… and expanded… We “grow” in love. After some time, Sky’s heart became too big… It accepted one and all as her own… Think about how big sky is, how much it contains, from planets and stars to gases, to birds and kites… It never complains, but embraces all that come to her… Somewhere, this greatness was the power which allowed Sky to sacrifice her love towards Sun and being ok if they did’t marry. As such they cried some times and missed each other, which resulted in stars and rainbows… We don’t have control over how we feel, but we certainly have over our actions. Sky and Sun, in their love and sacrifice, made this World “richer” and “alive”…
Her words had come out instantly after her thought, she didn’t have to bother what is proper and acceptable to say and what is not… This is my world - or any other kid’s world too…
Next, Sun couldn’t stop when he noticed Sky’s love… And he chose a greater cause to take over his own, and sacrificed his own interests for the benefit of the World. Many times, there is a good but there is a greater good too… Loving someone doesn’t necessarily mean leading to marriage - though there can’t be something better than that
People say love is selfish. Yes it is. Selfless love is difficult to attain, but many times, that is the only way for love to survive… On the surface, it looks as if practicality takes over selfish love… What can be a greater sacrifice in this world, than sacrificing love? As such, I didn’t like the ending of the story to some extent when I read it afterwards. It seemed not to be a happy ending… As such it is not completely negative either.
Anyways, this was my reply:
@genda phool: “Message” ki baat karke chakkar me daal diya na
I started writing this with a single theme in mind: what if Sun and Sky fall in love with each other.. I didn’t have a plot in mind, but the story carried forward on its own… When I finished and read it again, I was scared 
There was something going on in my mind, which had reflected in this story in some ways. About the message, I think this story shares some things from my world: I read my first paragraph: “Once.. this world… Everything had a soul and no one could hide one’s feelings…” This is my world! Everything has a soul - a living and awakened soul - which could be touched - and which feels things - instead of behaving like a judgemental mind. Then no one could hide feelings. This is why, when Sky asked about marriage, she shied at her own words. ..
hi genda tum bahut dino se mere Iland par nahi aayi………plz…aao na, apna chehara dikhao na……..
I had typed a reply but it became too long. So I thought to post it on the same comment page. There is again some problem with iland and it is not allowing me to post there… If I paste here, it would cover 4-5 GB messages… So I will wait for some time, if it doesnt work, then I will post here…
Have a nice day!
Rahul
a relation is like a ring,
always holding ur finger.
but as u get careless,
it slips out of ur hand.
so dont ever let ur relation
slip out of ur life.
Main aapka tahey dil sey shukriya ada karma chaahata huun ki aapney meri kavita dil sey padhi….
Aapney jo baatey kahi hai…. Voh kisi hadd taq agar main aapkey nazariye se sochu to sahi ho sakti hai
“zindagi tuum been be-rang duniya lagey muzey”…. Aapney kaha ki “duniya” shabd nahi hona chaahiye…magar agar aap isey gaur sey padhogi to iss “duniya” shabd ka mahatwa apki samaz aajayega.
“pusp-lata sey……” haan aap yahaan sahi hai.
“Mand-mand……..” ………then “satrangi”…..i used “sapt-rangi”….ab yeh kya hai ki yeh languages ka different pronunciation hai…. Basically I am from Maharashtra, so in Hindi too we call “sapt-rangi” as it’s a Sanskrit word.
So yeh basic difference sirf language ki vajah sey hai…. As my mother tongue is marathi.
But anyhow……. I am so much thankful to you, that you have given nice comments…………and I do accept your healthy comments. Do keep reading my rest of the poems. Regards………aameen
Jab main likhta huun to dono tarah ke comments ki apekha rakhta huun. Yeh zaruuri nahi ki meri kavita sabhi ko pasand aaye….haan jo log kuuchch hamesha nayapan dekhana chaahatey hai, unhey agar na padhney miley, to usey voh criticise bhi kartey hai, aur criticism healthy ho to achcha lagta hai, jaisa aapney likha hai. Aapki baat kisi hadd taq sach bhi hai……magar aapko yeh bata duun ki meri sabhi poems mere imaginations hai, jab bhi, jo bhi dil main ata hai likh deta huun… aapney kaha hai to main zaruur pheer ek baar iss kavita ko alag tarah sey likhane ki koshish karuunga…….
Please dont take any tension. I always welcome critic also that gives me some more strength to write. You are always welcome for that.
world family day
Bhul gye sab maa ka ghar wo neem ka perh
wo dupahar ki bate
wo sakhiyo k kisse
wo bhabhi ki kahani
wo purane ashiq k kisse
wo pahli rat suhani
wo bahna ki sari
wo masi ki chappal purani
wo kachchi amiya
wo achar ki bani
wo purani kameez par
karhi apni hatho ki bel
paise bacha kar jorhe
patile ki kahani
bhul gye ham ab sab
jab se basayi hai duniya naveentam suhani
nhi jante bachche mere ab
kya nani ka dular
kya mama ka pyar
kya bua ki galiya
kya chacha ki maar
chut gyi hai garmi ki
chuttiyo ki bahar
tubwell ka nahana
ab swimmingclass mai
achar ab pachranga ho gya
neem ki chao ab MCDONALD
PURANA KURTA BHI KAHI KHO GYA
jab sunati hu bachcho ko
apne bachpan ki kahani
to sochti hu bad mai beth kar
kya sunayege mere bachche
apne bachcho ko kahani
kyu chut gye sab rishte
rah gyi bas yaade suhani
DEAR GENDA PHOOL,YOU HAVE A VERY SENSITIVE MIND …you understand even very subtle things..i’had not thought that you will point out on my comments….surely i appreciate your mastery over words …as far as pictures are concerned, you may take their help …but use this with a bit caution…there could have been some other picture…more mild…however you have your perception of things and you are free to use it for bringing beauty in the posts…somehow I do give my opinion on it ,but you should not mind it…is there any doubt that you have mesmerised the readers?
—and about ”tariff”—there is no ”tariff” ..even insurance companies these days have gone non-tariff….but surely I appreciate your writing skill–”tareef” jaroor karta hoon…my best wishes on your ”mission statement”-REMEMBER IT?
thanks friend visit myblog good day
thanks…for your comments on my blog…it was quite encouraging…
Thanks for your visit…but why so silent…
BIWI : Samne sharabi dekh rahe ho ? 10 saal pehle maine use shaadi ke liye inkar kar diya tha dekho aaj tak pee raha hai…..PATI : Baap re itna lamba celebration …
…… keep smiling and have a nice day
thanks a lot for your visiting my iland………but its unfortunate you did not comment any of my blogs……. please do so.
thanks for visiting my blog..but…where are your comments? I hoped to have at least some khushboo from the comments..
thank you genda for ur comment…….
thank you,genda phool, for the nice words on my post….
Prashansa ke liye dhanyavaad Genda Phool.. Adhik gyaan to nahi lekin apni bhaasha se pyaar ki abhivyakti yoonhi kavitaen likh ke kar leti hoon..
mitrta ke aapke dwaara diye gaye nimantran ko sweekaar karke atyant prasannata ho rahi…meri shubhkaamnaen aapko..
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I visited your iland profile , my wish is to be your friend. I tried but couldnt add you , ….you may do this favour if you like. Thanks ji.
Pardeep
Thank you my friend.
I dont’ know your name”Genda phool” but it is not must for me. mere liye to ye jaroori hai kuchh achhe log mere blogs ko pade aur apne comment ya sujhav jo bhi dena chahe wo de jaise ki apne diya ki kisi indian ki pic. hoti to achha hota mai ise dhyan me rakhunga…..anyway…thanx to visit no my blog……keep visiting & comment to…..*Deepak*
aapka naam bhi to nahi jaanta marigold, yaad kaise rakhenge bataiye to……aur khatir jama rakhiye…….soloman solo hi rahega…………hamesha!
Genda Phool mujhe bahot pasand hai……….anyways acha naam hai…..may you always make the world happy like the flower……..Raj
Hello ! May i know ur name……yeh kya naam hai “genda phool”…..well just dropped to say thanx for the lovely comment on my post “Shhhhhh… :)….am happy you liked the theme….keep visiting…..hope you will find more time to read my older post under POETRY section……Thanx again……..
Rgrds,
Raj MISHRA
Har khushi khuda apka mukaddar kar de, khusi ke phool se aapka daaman bhar de, Aap jis din jis lamhe khush hon, Khuda us lamhe ko hazaar baras kar de….. keep smiling and have a nice time ….
Kanjoos : Yeh kela(banana) kaisay diya?
Shopkeeper: 1Rs.
Kanjoos: 60 Paisa ka deta hai?
S.K: 60 paise mein to sirf chilka milega.
Kanjoos :Ley 40 paisay, chilka rakh aur kela day de
you have been too kind in praising me marigold…..aur abt my current posts…yes…i am missing my muse………lolz…..jaisa aapne likha hai………..ye kahani fir sahin !
You never like to encourage me to write more……..coz you never care to read any of my post……wud u care to ????……haan???………….Have nice time ahead…….Raj……
hi doonites……………whr in doon??????????
A quote - “Trusting a friend should be like the feeling that a one year old baby has, when you throw him in air, he laughs… becoz he knows you will never let him fall…” …. have a nice time
Sukriya! May hoon ek “boignyanik styanusandhani”.
Genda phool is my favorite.
If I get a chance ..”..toor khopai dibo laal gendha phool..”.
Hello Dear One ! Well first of all wud like to say thanx a ton for accepting my request and now we are connected here to share our thoughts…..if get time then may read my posts and share ur valuable views…..have nice time…Rgrds…RAJ
Thanks for your praise…… I have no problem, if you use my poems, but please do keep me informed and after reading all my poems, do not forget to place your comments.
hey thnx 4 droppin by buddy. take care
nah.. its fine as it is. french marigold sounds good too but who am i to say..
btw, welcome to iLand. hope u’ll have a great time here. if u need to find people to make friends here then just go thru all the people who’ve commented in my blogs, they’re all cool. lol. q:
funny name u have … ((:
Hi…..
welcome…..wish you all the best!
hi welcome to you
u r welcome.. hope ur list of friends grow on iLand…
hota hai jee jb iland par gand /trash phail jaati hai!….:)