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Right Decision(Concluding Part)

Payal was not able to understand that what was causing her to think about Om again and again.It was Om’s presence or Brajesh’s absence that was making her to feel an intense attraction towards Om.While thinking about the past and the present,Payal fell asleep.In the morning, she got up early as she had to go to the office.She got ready and left her home around 8.30am.When she reached near the lift, she found the door of Om’s house closed.She wished that she could see Om.She did wait there for a minute hoping that Om’s timings for the office might be the same, but the door did not open.You really do many things absurd when you fall in love with someone.She just smiled at herself and thought that again she would have to keep track of his daily routine so that she could change her routine accordingly.In the office, there was lots of work and she did not get a single minute to think about Om.The whole week was very hectic for her at the office and she was returning late in the evening.So, the whole week she did not get much time to think about Om.Only she thought about him when she used to be near his flat’s door
But, today was Saturday again and Payal was feeling lazy.She had many household work, but she was not feeling to do all these work.She was again in the mood to think about Om.She wanted to see him more, to talk to him.She was working out the ways to increase the interaction between them.She thought that she should invite them for dinner tomorrow.She was happy with her plan.Next day, in the morning, she invited Om and Smita for dinner.They were happy to get the invitation.Smita started telling that they were in Delhi for a year and there nobody used to interact with their neighbours.Smita said that she was lucky to get such a sweet neighbour.Payal just smiled at her compliment and took a leave saying that she would wait for them in the evening.She went back to her flat and started deciding the menu.And by the evening, she prepared everything from soup to dessert.Now, it was time to get ready.She just wore a figure hugging blue jeans and a white shirt as she used to think that a woman looks sexiest and cool in a white shirt and a blue jeans.So, everything was ready.She lit some aroma candles and put on some light music to add charm to the ambience..Om and Smita wee there on time.They liked her house and its decoration.They just talked about the hectic life of Bombay where there is no time for anything else . She was just listening to them especially Om.Her eyes were more active than her ears.She was just frequently staring at Om.He was looking damn handsome today.During the conversation,Smita told Payal that Om used to leave for office around 8.15 in the morning and would come around 7.30 in the evening.Payal thought that it was an important information for her. They liked her dinner very much.Payal was not really satisfied by the meeting.She thought that though he liked the dinner, but her formula to win his heart through his stomach was not going to work here.She should take some bolder steps.She could not make out what to do next.Anyway,she had to stop thinking about Om for a while as there was a call from Brajesh.


Next morning, she thought that in the morning , she would try to return around 7.30 in the evening so that she might get a chance to meet OM in the lift.But, 4-5 days passed and she did not see Om.But,on Saturday when see was going for some shopping in the afternoon, she met him in the lift.They were all alone in the lift.Payal smiled at him and in returned he said hello to her.She asked him that  whether  he  was going somewhere.He ansewer ed that he was just going to nearby market for weekly shopping.Payal told that she was also going for shopping there and if he did not mind he could go with her in her car.Om accepted the offer.She was happy that now she would get some time to interact freely with him.In the car, Om asked about her professional life.She told about her office, work etc.In the conversation, she told that she had also done her pg from IT, BHU and she very well remembered him as he used to come to the Hanuman Mandir which was near her home.She told him all that in one go and asked him whether he recognised her or not.In his answer,Om just smiled and looked at her passionately.Payal got her answer.So, he also recognised her but was not showing his feelings.She was on cloud 9 after knowing this.Payal helped OM in his shopping and they talked to each other like they knew each other since ages.They exchanged their respective mobile no also.Payal told him that next week also she would go for shopping and if he wanted, he could join her.He smiled and said ok .After 2 hrs, she returned from the market with a fresh mood.She began waiting for their next meeting on the next Saturday.
But, after 2 days again they met in the lift and smiled each other.Now, Payal was again able to see the same emotions in his eyes.While she was looking in his eyes, suddenly lift came to a halt and there was immense darkness.Payal got scared.In reflex action, she just hold OM .Before he could understand anything,he just hold her tightly and in the next moment they started kissing each other passionately.The kissing session went for 2 minutes as power again came and lift started moving and in just a few seconds the lift reached at their floor.They came out of the lift and went to their respective flats without saying a word to each other.


Whole night, Payal could not sleep.She was thinking about Om and his kisses. She wanted that the session should not have stopped.She knew that now she would get more chances like this.She wanted to forget that she was married.She just wanted to be in his arms forever.She could do anything for this. On friday night she received a call from Om that tomorrow Om would wait for her near  her parking area at 12 o’clock and they would make some plan accordingly and he also said that he was dying to be with her..Payal agreed and next morning she got up early and do all the necessary things so that she could look beautiful.When she got ready she was just looking awesome.She then met Om in the parking area and Om was speechless for a moment after seeing her and then he just smiled and said nothing.His smile was more powerfull than his words.They decided to go to a beautiful garden where there used to be crowd of young couples and indeed they were also a young couple.They reached the garden and settled down under a tree where nobody could see them as moreover others were busy doing their activities.He just hold her in his arms and both started kissing each other passionately.Payal was feeling that she was in heaven.After a while,Om hands started moving to her other parts of the body too, suddenly his phone rang up.He picked up the phone.It was Smita and she told that she was not feeling well and asked him to return back from the market.
So, they returned back from the market(garden) immediately.Payal was upset as her day did not go as she wanted.Now, she would have to wait for the whole week or their next meeting and moreover she was not sure about the next week as some foreign delegates were coming to her office and she would hardly get time for other activities.And yes indeed,she was very busy for the next 10 days and during this period she was not getting time for anything else.She did not see Om either during this period.She did not receive any phone call from him.At home sometimes she thought of calling him up but somehow did not gather courage to call.
After the foreign delegates left,Smita was happy as she could now again concentrate on her new love life.It was saturday morning and she was unable to decide whether she should call him.She thought that it was better to visit his house.So, in the evening she went to his flat.Smita opened the door.She was looking a bit tense.Payal too became tense.She looked for Om, but it seemed to her that Om was not at home.Smita asked Payal that she could not see her for the past few days.Payal told about the foreign delegates and then Payal just asked about the reason of her being tense.She said she was not tense.Payal again asked her and said that she could share anything with her.Then she told her that next week they were leaving Bombay and were going to Madras as Om had got a new job there.Payal was just shocked and surprised and went blank for a moment,but she did not say anything.Smita told her that she was not ready to go there as she loved Bombay and there were many relative so she did not feel lonely in the city and moreover as she was now pregnant she would need her relatives more.Smita told her that she tried to convince Om but he was not listening and finally they would leave the city next week.After listening this, Payal left the place after making some excuse  and as soon as she reached her flat, her mobile started ringing .She picked up her mobile and it was Brajesh on the line.

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  1. Ben Harris says

    Nice story..Good plot and the twist in the end is well thought out.

  2. hina tiwari says

    i dont know whether it’’s a true story or just imagination. you gave a nice ending to this. i am happy with the ending cause what was going between then was not acceptable.

  3. Melcome Dmello says

    It was a lovely discriptive story….right depiction of emotions & feeling..the climax of pleasure is rightly expressed..but in the end..some right decisions..though tough & harsh..

    Lovely Post!!!

  4. Naughty Traveller says

    Hi Goldi, I read all the parts of Right decision again and really liked the story. There is a common thread which runs through all your stories….it seems that the women in ur stories are not able to find their love in the end….but ur stories are very gripping and interesting :) please keep up the good work. And by the way, I am very much in India but have a very hectic schedule. Going to Europe Next saturday for 10 days…hope I have some good experiences to share on the iland. Take care… Ciao