a new poem
औरतें
किस मिट्टी से गढ़ी हैं
औरतें
मर्द ढूंढ रहे हैं छाँव पेड़ की
चिलमिलाती धूप में
खड़ी हैं औरतें
अबलाओं के विश्वास
का बल देखो
जहाँ से लौट आये थे
मर्द प्यासे
कुदालें ले कर
निकल पड़ी हैं औरतें
केवल तन और मन
ही है कोमल
इरादे उनके हैं
सख्त बहुत
लोहे से भी मढ़ी हैं
औरतें
वो सृजन कर भूला
दे कर
दूध, लहू अपना
सींच रही हैं जीवन को
ईश्वर से भी
बड़ी हैं औरतें
very nice . i gave a thanks to writer. he writes a whole life cycle of women
1“really auraton ke hath me barkat hoti h
tabhi to 3 inch saman ko hathme lete hi 8 inch hojati h..”
Dr.Das
2ek dum sahi hai i main aapse sahmat hoo
3nice poem……
4hmm
Nari shakti se kisiko inkar nahi
5Magar Nari ko ghar ki char diwari mein apne pati ki seva karna aur bachchon ki dekh bhal karna chahiye Nake use sadak par nikal kar naukri karna chahiye.
Jab se nari ghar ki char diwari chod kar baher nikli us waqt se duniya mein barbadi aye
yeh sab jante aur mante hain
is liye to kaha gaya hai ek safal aadmi ke piche ek aurat ka sath hota hai.
6TOO GOOD
7S. K.
koi shaq nahi, bajaa farmaya hai
8very nice
9superb !!
10true
11Since they have generated all of us, and are visible; where god is every where but no where.
12mind blowing
13Bahut accha hai,
14Nice expression……yeah women power is unimaginable always……you have very nicely crafted this poem…liked it
15Very nice….nd Ur right k unka tann aur mann hi hai komal iraade….kahin bade aur sakht.All d best.
16Wonderful words, nice poem nahi kahunga. Ye Zindagi ki ek Haqikat hai jise hame badalna padega. un paresaniyo ko, majburion ko dur karna padega. Ham sabko milkar karna padega.
ye mat kahiyega me duniya badalne ki bat kar raha hu. Par koshish to karni padegi na…….. kyu ?
17wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll…………………..hats off…………aurat ko khubsurat shabd dene ke liye……….
18very nice..
19yeah…very nice ….ve srijan karta, aur palan karta bhi hai….
20very nice
21nice post ,really very hard hiting but true.women is more powerfull then man,in all respact
22very good
23ek mahila ke paas jo buddhi hai…..jo shakti hai…..jo sahansheeltha hai………usika parinaam hai ki Maa Durga …..Devloke mei aise aadey samay mei kaam aayi…….aur inhe kabhi bhi katheen parishram karna hi achchhaa lagtha hai….kyunki yeh kabhi bhi jeevan mei nikaam hona pasand nahi karte……..bus inhe aage badhne ki prerna …badhawa do………Gopi my dear frnd…..u r always descent…..in ur job………..keep it up
24my eyes is wet.
25:) shakti naari hai lekin swayam se hi haari hai .. purushon ke saath kadam milaati hai ya aage chalti hai,anekon kureetiyon ka karti nirvahan , purushon ka samaaj unpe bhaari hai,. Jeet liya hai antriksh lekin apne ghar mein ..bechaari thi,bechaari hai :)
26Gopiji… ab kya kahun… hats off to you… aap k vichar bahut hi umda hai aur aap ki har rachna se wo pratit hota hai… aap ki tarif k liye sahi me shabdo ka akal pad gaya hai…. :)
27Nari shakti ke vishay mein bahut hi sashakt kavita hai yeh, Goswami ji…..
28Gopiji,very nicely written .especially from a male voice,so beautifully categorised the power of women..thanks .Bestwishes!
29Brilliant…very true and thanks for making understand this through your poem!!
30Nice expression……yeah women power is unimaginable always……you have very nicely crafted this poem…liked it :)
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