Shivali was just sitting in her chair hoping Kapil would call. She was reading a book but her mind was wandering ..it was like just the other day they had got married despite lot of opposition from relatives and parents. Shivali had met Kapil at a Coffee shop .He kept staring at her as he sipped his coffee ,his favourite cafe mocha.
She had come alone ,that day without her friend. She wondered .why is he staring at me ..or is he looking at someone else. She thought that she had average looks and height and also glasses.But often everyone had praises for her expressive doe like eyes which she hid with her glasses.
As she was reading , he came over ..and she nearly fell off her seat ..he was devastatingly cute. Not the traditional Tall ,D, H types…but there was something which just pulled her towards him.
He just chatted away the normal way after introducing that he was working since a year in a software firm in Bangalore.She had few words to mutter as his rambling chatter just mesmerised her .Was she falling in love ….she felt she was walking in the clouds …was this her man …in her dreams…..?????
To be Contd…….
I am waiting for your next story line.. when are u going to update ?..
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nice starting.pls complete that
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hey plz complete it.
yeh may be she thought and knew his behaviour ,so she got attracted towards him.because attitude is everything .she might have like his behaviour and his attitude .plz complete it ok
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i really wanna knw wht happened nxt??????
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Nice poetry . I Want to have friendship with you.
very good
What’’s Next…..?????????????????????????????????????????
very well written ..good keep it up
plz complete it
Very much eager to hear more
As I already sed u ma”am…..even i am eagerly waiting for the continuation…..please dont keep your readers waiting ….
pl. complete it.
pl. complete it.
pl. complete it.
good story..is it ur own
what is this u must finish this
why did u stop?…I wanted to read d whole story.nanditajain_21@rediffmail.com
nice one!
hi! good story keep it up?
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