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A Story -Part 5

Shivali just tapped her head ..why was she slipping into these …well she would just wait a few more minutes for the call and then just drop off to sleep. Her stomach rumbled ,her breakfast was in the sink..she could not even make a proper breakfast. Shivali took her crossword puzzle and decide to finish it …just then came a ding in her msn messenger it was her coworker asking why she had not shown up ..she just updated the status message to “Busy”..

Kapil used to chat often with her during office hours in messenger ..often disturbing even at meetings..the ding sound often made her boss sit up ..she chuckled ..but a tear rolled down her cheek..Life…will it ever get easier.

If she ignored him during meetings then he would keep ringing her mobile ..and make her even more uneasy. When she had completely ignored him he had not called up for the next two days ..making her feel sick ….

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  1. toms abraham says

    Riaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa………………………..Cant you make it a bit lengthier. The tension builds up and you end it there itself………Common, why are you trying our patience………..By the way when are you posting the next part………..Is it ready or you gonna think now and then write and then present and then we gonna scratch our head waiting for the next to next part…………….Ok gusse ke beech me kaam ki baat to bhool hi gaya……….Amazing post lady…….Tons of appreciations…….You write good…..It feels like a next door story…….Kudos……….Cheers……….Do post the next one soon………..Take care because you have to end the story

  2. appu says

    Hi ria..i enjoyed all the five parts and waiting egarly fr nxt one…hop u ”ll make it soon…

  3. sanjay rastogi says

    I`m waiting with abated breath and butterflies in my stomach to know what happened next! You have written pretty well!

  4. ARVIND KUMAR says

    nice.. next tag likhne ke liye dher sari shubhkamna. OK…..

  5. AAMEEN KHAN says

    waiting for the next episode.

  6. chandrakant parmar says

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