Shivali’s marraige began with a simple ceremony of mehendi with a few close friends ,and then there was the engagement where Kapil had looked very formal sherwani which was a light blue with sequins . Shivali looked at her engagement ring ..the rays that the tiny solitaire reflected danced on the wall. She twirled her finger ..Kapil had hugged her when he slid the ring into her finger ..He had kissed away the little droplet which had appeared in her eye and smudging her mascara..The marraige had been a one hour ceremony “Simple and Sweet” . Everything had changed after their marraige ,maybe she had changed or Kapil was different . ..
hi when ll u post the next part of ur story???
mujhe nahi maloom pehle kya hua aage kya hoga ………but lovely story
it is interesting story
it made an intresting reading..but you cud have made it engrossing….i think , in a hurry to finish it off, you missed many finer points in naration….take care…..
next what… interesting to read… expecting some twists and turns.. or just interesting somethings…
Its a beautiful story woven by you, using simple words.
its such a interesting………….hw r u hw is ur life going on.
really very sweet composition…keep it up…God bless u…
such a cute story…plz post the nxt part early…
its realy interesting bt i hope it shouldn”y be filmy….. i eager to know what happened next with shivali…do post early the next part.
waah..waah…ekdam sweet & simple…!!!!
Well when r u posting the next part…..its interesting
Then what happened.am biting my nails……:)
keep it up griping.story
Oh poor girley………..Now i think is it for which i waited for long? Why the life changes when two loving cupids bond their heart for life in marriage? When a cute smile, a warm hug, a lovely kiss can strengthen the love then why are we so selfish not even to spare that too? Love lasts for long when cared. Only the three words create the magic and all the sorrows vanish in moments. This is when we rise in love………And when heart breaks, and when it is broken by the one whom we cared as our life……….then no one can help us from falling in love……Thats why people say……..Rising in love is only possible with love, when love leaves, we surely fall…….Anyways, you changed the whole situation. A unique mindset….A very little writers have that ability and you did that….Kudos…..
I believe changing people totally is wrong … and this lead to useless problem ….
It is a law of life. It’’s hard to explain, but you can observe it around you.
We get more of what we dwell upon.
That’’s why all the spiritual masters have taught the same lesson …
“Start by being thankful. Be happy with what you have now,
and more will come your way.”
It’’s practical advice.
IN A NUTSHELL
Every time you say a silent “thank you” you become more peaceful – and more powerful.