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for a kid brother/friend….who says, the baccha has grown up now…yes he has….but i still see the little fellow in him…….and this is something i wrote for him, one morning…when he was actually lying in bed..all curled up…tired after a late night spent in some project work…
Dekh rahi hain,meri nigaahein…….
tujhe nihaar rahi hain……
yun maasoomiyat ka chaadar odhe
meethi neend ki aagosh mein tu…
mujhse bekhabar….
sunhere sapnon mein yun khoya hua hai…….
ae chand mere dil ke…
teri zindagi ki har subah…
yun hi dabe paanv teri khidki se aaye…
yun hi tere daaman ko roshan karta rahe….
suraj ki narm kiranein,
kab tere labon ko chookar,
tere aks par meethi muskaan phaila jaye,
tujhe pata bhi na chale….
yeh teri masoom aankhen jab khulein…….
tu paaye…..
ke tere sapnon ki jaagir ko tu,
apni mutthi mein liye soya tha….
bas tere jagne ki der hai…..
chal jaag……ae dost….
teri zindagi teri raah takthi hai…….
#1 by Shatrughna Singh
Hi Debyji
Aapne to apne ander ki sari mamta is kavita me dalkar ham sabhi ke samne rakh diya. Isase pata chalta hai ki kitna pyar hoga aapko apne bachchon se…..
bachhe to waise hi bhagwaan ke roop hote hain……ek dam innoccent…..subah ki shabnam ki terah…..gulab ki pankhudiyon ki terah….
Thank you so much for this lovely poem.
#2 by pradeep berry
nice
#3 by Pooja Jhamb
vry nice…..full of pampering…….
#4 by mukesh tolani
hii.. . as loving as it can get.. anyone will melt..
#5 by AAMEEN KHAN
Wow!!!!! just too good…… kitani mamata, apanatva……bhayi ke liye.
#6 by manju baxi
just beautiful……
#7 by rajeshkumar rai
your brother and friend…will be proud of you..beautiful composition!
#8 by akhtar rizvi
Deby….Kya bat hai…bahut khubsurat rachna jisme pyar,mamta,apnapan, feelings aur na jane kya kya chupa hai…itni khubsurat aur mukammal rachna ke liye mubarakbad…Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur zyada….all the best
#9 by Surendra Dubey
very nice post……..keep up……..
#10 by aekanki
its wonderful…. very nice feeling n heart touching… keep up.
#11 by ShivendraMohan Singh
oh…bahut sunder
#12 by Anonymous Poet
a wonderful heartfelt poem deby. with the innocence and piousness of a child. i am sure ur frend must be lucky to get a frend who cares so much
way to go pal…