Hey guys, my first attempt at Marathi poetry… please do let me know if I have erred anywhere…
“Kalat nakalat waat visarlo
Kalat nakalat haath sodlo
Kalat nakalat paool bikharlo
Disha bhete na, tujhe vichar sutena
Kadhi tari punha bhetu
Punha jivanat ekmatra houu
Donghant antar asail tar kay
Prem chotya goshtine kadhi sampe nai…”
Hey thanks… just happeed to see your comment today :-D… appreciate all the corrections… but yes, guess I don’t make a good Marathi writer hehehe
Few corrections since u had asked
Kalat nakalat waat visarlo
Kalat nakalat haath sodlo (Sodle, Sutle)
Kalat nakalat paool bikharlo (bikharle)
Disha bhete(sapde,mile) na, tujhe vichar sutena (jainat)
Kadhi tari punha bhetu
Punha jivanat ekmatra(ekroop) houu
Donghant antar asail(asle) tar(tari) kay
Prem chotya goshtine kadhi sampe nai(sampat naste / sampena)…”