Ek sapna jeeta hai muj mein
Aur
Ek sapne mei jeeti hu mein
Ek soch panaptee hai mere palako mei
Aur
Ek soch panaptee hai meri saanso mei
Ek aasha karvat leti hai meri jindgi mei
Aur
Ek aasha karvat badal deti hai meri jindgi ka
Ek tamannaa raah leti hai vaastvikta ki
Aur
Ek tamannaa raah leti hai iss dil ki
Aur
Har uss mod pe mein he badalne ko majboor ho jaati hu
very nice amisha……its sound gr8 …nice poem
zindagi ki sachchai ko kitni saadgi se bayaan karti ho sis…bahut khoob
Amisha ! Kya Baat Hai !!
Very nice…
Apno ki kushi key liye ,kisi bhi mor pe murna manjur…….
Well written Amisha ji!!!
Very emotional.
Very nice….
Well written poem…. last line is awesome
Saleeqa ho agar Bheegi hui Aankhon ko Padhnay ka….
To Behtay huye Aansu bhi aksar Baat kartay hain….n aapka to har shabd bolta hai dear
You make me speechless dear… I can”t say any thing… Hats of to you … Koi kaise aisa soch sakta hai… aur fir usi gehrai se shabdo me dhaal sakta hai… Ye meri samajh ke pare hai…
some very touching lines.
Amisha…very nice…..ek sapna jeeta hai mujh me ek sapne me jeeti hun main……kya bat hai….soch ka ek naya andaz….khubsurat abhivyakti….all the best
Rabindranath Tagore:
I have become my own version of an optimist. If I can”t make it through one door, I”ll go through another door - or I”ll make a door. Something terrific will come no matter how dark the present.
ohmymymymy ………… Ek tamannaa raah leti hai iss dil ki…
oh so sweeet na …………. sweeeeeeet …………..
100 % philosophy amishaji…very nice.
Wah!!!!!!!! ek sapana jeeta hai muzme……. bahuut hi khuub.. full of philosophy…….aameen
“Ek aasha karvat leti hai meri jindgi mei
Aur
Ek aasha karvat badal deti hai meri jindgi ka…” …. waah……………
Amisha ji!!!!!!! lagta hai ki kuchh -kuchh tees si uthi hai apke dil me jajbato ki jang si lagi hai apke dil me…… vicharo ka tufan sa utha hai apke dil me……….” Kyo hai na…………..*Deepak*
facts of life,…………………….har mod pe badala karo…naye sapne sajaya karo. har sans me jiya karo……………….sunder ati sunder
jivan me ayse mod aate hain………………….jab hum dusro ke hisab se hi sab karte hain…….aur jivan me sab apne hisab se to nahi hota na!!!!!!!!ek antardvand !!!!!!!!
Har uss mod pe… mein he badalne ko majboor ho jaati hu… You are lucky you can do that! I wish I could do that! Excellent post.
self change will surely bring world change Amisha dear. Jab hum badlenge tabhi jag badalega…waise aapki swa parivartan ki dridh ichchha kee prashansha karni padegi..congrats..
superb..!!!!!
very nice poem
parivartan hi prakruti ka niyam hai aur chalna hi jeewan hai………nice poem,,,,,,,,keep it up
That is what change is about..and about compromises too!