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something from every woman’s heart (maybe)

ek aisa jahaan ,jahan mere astitva ,

         meri khushiyon ,                                                      

         meri icchaon          

          ke liye bhi ek almari ho ,

hawa aur dhoop jahan aati bahut saari ho !!

Posted in Poetry.



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  1. Mahendra Rajput says

    Bahut Acchhi koshish hai. kintu, Mahilaon ke astitva itna vishal hai ki unhe almari to kya Sara Aasmaan bhi kam ho.

  2. bhasker shukla says

    meeta women envies male body. what do u say?

  3. Gopi Goswami says

    beautiful lines…

  4. doddimary says

    hello dear wake up

  5. Chosen One says

    hi ms mehta, nice khyal, but lacking d weight(jst my opinion, dnt mind,ok), if u replace d wrd almari wid any beautiful wrd,den it”ll be mind blowing…

    nyway, nice try..jst lovly khyal..

    keep rocking…

  6. akhtar rizvi says

    Meeta ji-aap ki rachna parhi bahut achi lagi,aaj sara jhagra hi astitva ka hai agar log ek dusre ke astitva ko pehchanne aur manne lagen to koi samassiya hi na rahe…”Main qatra hi sahi mujh ko samunder se alag kar do/mujhe khud apne toofano ka andaza bhi karna hai”……all the best

  7. nadaf hasan says

    ur poem on life is very nice, it makes to think for a movement while reading

  8. Mahe Sharma says

    ichha aur khushi kabhi purani nahin honi chahiye warna sab kuchh katam ho jata hai ..nice meeta ji

  9. sanjay mane says

    very nice…….

  10. Bineet Pachauri says

    great

  11. Nishant Paul says

    Wah kya kam shabdo”N mein aapne sara sagar udel diya. Bahut he sunder.

  12. AAMEEN KHAN says

    You are right……….every woman needs this and wishes this….aameen

  13. VINOD SIROHI says

    amazing yaar,
    sirf 4 line mein aapne poori dastan keh de.

  14. shashank shekhar says

    Apni khushiyon ko band mat rakhana………. almari me………. Ek aisa jahan ho jahan, thoda uncha aur asman ho, mere arman ki pahunch us se bhi unchi ho

  15. Raut Vilas says

    very nice

  16. chandrakant parmar says

    bahut badiya, aati hai hawa dhup lekin samay knha hai hawa dhup se masti karne ka