ek aisa jahaan ,jahan mere astitva ,
meri khushiyon ,
meri icchaon
ke liye bhi ek almari ho ,
hawa aur dhoop jahan aati bahut saari ho !!
Broadcasting my thoughts
ek aisa jahaan ,jahan mere astitva ,
meri khushiyon ,
meri icchaon
ke liye bhi ek almari ho ,
hawa aur dhoop jahan aati bahut saari ho !!
Posted in Poetry.
– December 13, 2008
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Bahut Acchhi koshish hai. kintu, Mahilaon ke astitva itna vishal hai ki unhe almari to kya Sara Aasmaan bhi kam ho.
meeta women envies male body. what do u say?
beautiful lines…
hello dear wake up
hi ms mehta, nice khyal, but lacking d weight(jst my opinion, dnt mind,ok), if u replace d wrd almari wid any beautiful wrd,den it”ll be mind blowing…
nyway, nice try..jst lovly khyal..
keep rocking…
Meeta ji-aap ki rachna parhi bahut achi lagi,aaj sara jhagra hi astitva ka hai agar log ek dusre ke astitva ko pehchanne aur manne lagen to koi samassiya hi na rahe…”Main qatra hi sahi mujh ko samunder se alag kar do/mujhe khud apne toofano ka andaza bhi karna hai”……all the best
ur poem on life is very nice, it makes to think for a movement while reading
ichha aur khushi kabhi purani nahin honi chahiye warna sab kuchh katam ho jata hai ..nice meeta ji
very nice…….
great
Wah kya kam shabdo”N mein aapne sara sagar udel diya. Bahut he sunder.
You are right……….every woman needs this and wishes this….aameen
amazing yaar,
sirf 4 line mein aapne poori dastan keh de.
Apni khushiyon ko band mat rakhana………. almari me………. Ek aisa jahan ho jahan, thoda uncha aur asman ho, mere arman ki pahunch us se bhi unchi ho
very nice
bahut badiya, aati hai hawa dhup lekin samay knha hai hawa dhup se masti karne ka