Kasam-e-deedar kiya karte hain
Chahat ko apni, hum chupa liya karte hain
Gul khilte hai
Kashti apne pyaar ki, yaadon mein hum saja liya karte hain
Awaara naa kaho, ai yar mere .
Ki aasman aur zameen kabhi mil sakte nahi .
Khabar hai is dil ko
Ki uske jaane se yeh toot jayega
Par khwabon ko takdeer hum bana sakte nahi
Sach hai ki pyaar kabhi marta nahi
Par is ek lamhe ko, apni zindagi hum bana sakte nahi
Duniya ki parwaah nahi hai oh yar mere
Ki kisi ki zindagi ko apne aansuon se hum saja sakte nahi .
Bewafa hame samjho to koi gila hame nahi .
Par tumhari yaadon ko apni saanson se mita sakte nahi ..
Ki uff bhi naa karenge apni maut par .
Par daaman tumhara tanhayee se bhar sakte nahi
Kaisi ajab yeh uljhan hai
Ki jisse pyaar kare sabse jyada hum
Usse apna bana sakte nahi
Hi,
it is very nice poem. Kise bhi lage ki oh poem apne liye hai .very beautiful.jise hum sabse jyada pyar karte hia woh hume kabhi nahi milate.
very intresting and beautiful lines…..a good poet in the making !!!
keep it up…
chune ki irada tha appki sayya ko ! app to dil chun lia.good one
wah lav aakri teen line bahuth achee aur sachi baat hay….jise hum sabse syada pyar karte hay woh hume kabhi nahi milte……ye aakri teen line dil ko chu gayi…
good ideas come hard! tumhari yaadon ko apni saanson se mita sakte nahi… well said!
hi kaviraj…. bauht badia….yaar pyar uljhan hi hai… nice bro
bahut achchi kavita hai dil ko chune wali. mai bhi kuch kahu, samne baitha hai wo mere lekin use apna kah nahi sakte, dil ka tukda hai mere lekin use bata nahi sakte.
lav ko love ho gaya kya/???
hi luv…me too trying to understand what this LOVE is….ur last three lines are v true..i agree with arpita…
bilkul sahi kaha Lav… jisse pyaar karo aur use apna na bana sako, to isse badi uljhan aur kuchh nahi ho sakti… chahe koi “khwaabon ke pyaar” ki ya “Platonic Love” ki kitni hi baatein kar le, par practical point of view se, pyaar ko ek muqammal roop na de pana shayad ek bahut badi haar hoti hai…..
hey nice man, this is really a beautiful. it’’s too good…………………………
Hey Lav… what happened buddy….? is there any problem dear…? pls share it with me… if you want?