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USKA MAUN!!!!!!!!!!!


वोहइसलिएमौनहै

क्योंकिवोह इकरारसेडरतीहै

प्रेमनहींहै मुजसेतो

नफरतभीकहाँकरतीहै

मगरइसीबात केइकरारसेभी डरती है

मिलतीहै वोह सबसेमहफ़िलमें

मगर नज़रमुजपररखतीहै

फिरभी वोह इकरार से डरती है

लाखकोशिशोंके बावजूद

अंतमें सरितातो सागरमेंहीसमांजातीहै

इसी के इकरार से भी वोह कतरातीहै

नाकोईजानपाताहै

मगर मनमेछविहमारीही है

यहइकरार करेनेसे भी वोह लजातीहै

इसीलिएवोह मौन रहतीहै

औरउसकेमौन कीभाषाहमें

समझनीपड़तीहै.

………………………………….aameen

  1. #1 by sareena nafeesath

    Smooth runs the water where the brook is deep”…Shakespeare!

  2. #2 by manju baxi

    bahut khoob………..kehte hain agar koi aapki khamoshi ko nahi samajh sakta …to wo aapke shabdon ko bhi kabhi nahi samajh payega………..

  3. #3 by sandhya kulkarni

    moun samajh liya to phir samjho sab samajh liya kya baat hai.. very nice post…!!!

  4. #4 by Archana Srivastava

    वोह इसलिए मौन है ,
    क्योंकि वोह इकरार से डरती है ,
    प्रेम नहीं है मुजसे तो ,
    नफरत भी कहाँ करती है

    wow aameen ji.. aankho ki bhasha to koi aapsye padhna seekhye…:)

  5. #5 by SHEKHAR BHATTACHARJEE

    ya dear Aameen ………..my frnd…….this one is too good………behthareen koshish………..beautifull words made the sensible lines……..dear………….nice post ………keep it up ……..thnx for sharing…………wish u all the best…….tc

  6. #6 by Pradeep

    Beautiful ……. pic bhi aur post bhi :) ……. thnx for the share

  7. #7 by KALPANA CHOUHAN

    wow………….its so lovely & sweet…………..ankahi baton ko jo log samajhte h me un logo ko bohat pasand karti hu..ye poem un logo ko he dedicated h…………….

  8. #8 by Carl

    Very lovely.Thank you for sharing this.You are very talented writer.

  9. #9 by asha

    woh is liye maun rehti hai…kyu ki wo ikraar se darti hai………………..””gar khamosh ho zuban to nazare baat karti hain………..gar samjh sake koi …ye batein hazaar kehti hain””……………..nice post

  10. #10 by Latika Narayan

    Enchanting, I love reading you AAMEen such a talent!

  11. #11 by Shashi

    वोह इसलिए मौन है क्योंकि वोह इकरार से डरती है….nice one….

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  12. #12 by Amisha

    baa aur kya…??? ek maun ki bhasha samaj mei aa gayee aur saari ulzhane duur ho gayee…..a very unique poem….

  13. #13 by nitin bhatnagar

    kya baat hai

  14. #14 by Deepika

    Fantastic post..silence sometimes kills and no longer remains a bliss.Still sometimes silence speaks louder than words.

  15. #15 by manisha trivedi

    ati sundar!!!!!!

  16. #16 by Shreya Sharma

    Lajawb…..Bahut hi khoobsurat……khoobsurt tasveer ke sath…..

  17. #17 by Priya kalra

    TOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD AMEEN,,,,,,,, silence speaks alot

  18. #18 by SARA

    wow! kya baat hai……..issiliye wo maun rehti hai aur uske maun ki bhasa hame samjhane padti hai……….how sweet imagenation!

  19. #19 by Laxmi

    nice ……:)

  20. #20 by Shreya Tiwari

    Very nice poem aamin ji, maine kafi pahle aapki ek do rachnaye padhi thi…par unse kahi behtar rachnaye aap ab likh rahe hai….i really liked this and appreciate. Keep writing and now i will definitly visit ur iland and post my comments.

  21. #21 by Anju Pangty

    लाख कोशिशों के बावजूद अंत में सरिता तो सागर में ही समां जाती है….moun ko sach main bahut achche shabd diye aapne………..shukriya.

  22. #22 by Roohee Naaz

    khamoshi ki v zubaan hoti hai bas use samajhna padhta hai. really very beautiful poem “uska maun

  23. #23 by Dhanshri Singhal

    Bahut shandar kavita ke saath saath khubsurat manmohak tashveer.

  24. #24 by Shiny Vikas

    very nice Aameenji.

  25. #25 by Sandesh Gupta

    Makhmali andaz mein khubsurat kavita aur saath mein atyant sundar chitr.

  26. #26 by Mukesh Gupta

    Bahut khoob……..very nice poem

  27. #27 by DrVikash Mangal

    Wonderful and beautiful words with extremely beautiful picx.

  28. #28 by manasi

    Lovely…beautiful expressions!!!

  29. #29 by aperna

    nice aameen jee..

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